I apologise for the jumping between third and first person. I wrote these chapters a while ago. I'm up to chapter six in completed parts. I was still getting used to writing in first person, as most things I write are in third. But hopefully I don't do that anymore.  Thank you for comments.

You'd put the FF in the FF section, and then request criticism in the criticism section.

Updated with chapter two.

The ONLY reason I start and stop a lot of things is because I never get any feedback. I want to know people are interested. I don't want to spend my time writing these if no one even cares.

Haha, thank you Footbutt :3 Means a lot.

Ah, really? I never noticed xD I actually thought there were no moderators around.

Hello all. I have created a site for writers and readers alike. I did this because I have noticed that most sites have a writer community, yet the writer community is small and neglected when in comparison with the rest of the community. I understand finding feedback is hard. I made the site to deal with all genres of writing, instead of just one ...

Go into the "All Things Multiplayer" section of the forums. Scroll right down to the bottom and click on "More options". At the bottom left of the little screen that pops down, look what it says... It's pretty much the same on the others.  Do we have moderators?

Read the updated version on TCF ;)

Chapter one up.