VaultingFrog: coolkid115:Wow slowness on the fourms today? You posted this topic just over 30 minutes ago, and then replied to your own topic about 20 minutes ago. Dont expect answers after only 10 minutes of your post existing. In fact just leave it sit for atleast a minimum of 8 hours before you post again in it. Also its a school day as far ...

Archangel: Unrivaled in power, glory and might, Forever a beacon of light and hope.  ......okay.......weird...... *slowly starts to move mouse to close sign*

VaultingFrog: Harvest wasnt completely glass as already mentioned. The only reason why (that I can think of) that the Covenant didnt glass the entire planet is because of the Tiara. Under the guidence of the Rouge AI "Mack" the JOTUNs buried the strands from the Tiara after they had fallen from orbit. The Tiara itself is gone ...

way off subject but i am makeing a new revised version of my FF which failed terribly. i have tried to fix the problems and i think i actually made it redable. it will be made within the month. i have scraped the firt story though kept o few names and the concept of trying to capture a rebel person in the begining. this time i have put a little ...

here is a shot i found with a pelican in it. it look fresh to me. if you look fire is still comeing out of it and that there is people shooting at it. though the one the other person showed with the pelicans in a full invasion is better. been long time since last ...

i obviosly see that im nothing of a writer so im going to stop. just let this thread die. and dont say, oh comeon it is somewhat good because trust me even i hate it! and im the writer!!!

walkera1041:I love you guys :)to bad we all hate you :)

 location: onboard sangheli alliance ship- Spiritual Ending,above sangheli rebel held planet. 2nd half of chapter 2 "Sir, the Rebel ships are running." The Navigator pointed out. "Good, we have won this battle but how many did their fleet drop on the planet before we responded?" Fleet master Wilka Wamamee ...

JamesFletcher: "For someone like me?"  What the hell is that supposed to mean, are you labeling me to be even lower than you?  Also, those were not very large words, they should be part of a 12 year olds vocabulary...... So basically, you would like to keep the attention of morons, while being looked down upon by the rest? ...

JamesFletcher: My advice. Develop a more sophisticated vocabulary, so that you can make good use of adjectives and adverbs, to make your story far more interresting and intruiging.   Also, give every single character life, a distinct personality, etc.  I'll try to throw on some more advice as your ff progresses.   I give ...