Morgoth890: Now I realize I'm a noob, but does anyone else think "You started the action way too fast." or "keeping your character?" is a matter of opinion which not all readers agree with? I have to agree with you there

Yes i did but i still kept thinking of it, strange? well i am going to bed now. Mr grenade i have given yours a quick look and it seems good and i will read it more thouroughly tomorrow. night all.

This is the most interesting storyline i have read so far, well done! you seem to be a talented writer

Yeah i just read it now, it was very good aswell. For some reason i kept imaganing the battlefield as the bridge from the third halo 2 mission.

Second Lieutenant Kyle Bradley: @Ms.Elite  Did you read the other short story a posted here? The one labeled 'The Battle for New Mombasa. Erm i dont remember reading it but i will now

Dam, i read it but forgot to post. I thought that was one of the best stories in this so far.

I like to kill jackals more, i keep grunts alive as long as possible to listen to all their funny little comments.

I think he means he wanted you to wait till he was back before posting the review.

Loved the chapter, i to am glad i read this.

ohh nice fic, keep it up and i like your sig alpha hippo lol