| A Light in The Dark - Second Opinion |
Not wanting to sound like a complete ass, but I thought this was a joke at first. Once I realized otherwise I decided to look into it with an open mind and try to comprehend what was going on. There were so many things wrong with this it was not funny. |
| A New Ally - Review |
Reading this was like experiencing a bad aftertaste. You know what I am talking about, you take that big spoonful of superman ice cream, it starts off all nice and good, and then out of nowhere, your taste buds are attacked by the rage of “the aftertaste”. |
| Beachhead - Second Opinion |
This is a nice piece of work. It grasped my attention in the first chapter but it was lacking. There was no major plot in this story. The beginning was about a battle which had no purpose at first glace. The hook was good, but it was not enough to hold |
| Death Comes Swiftly - Review |
This piece of fan fiction was hardly entertaining. It may just be my opinion but love stories never really grasped my full attention. I however went into this with an open mind, but sadly had to stop at the end of the prologue. To quote myself “It |
| Deception - Review |
This shows potential and it is quite good. There where some problems with grammar which caused me to re-read a couple of parts of the story. Also it did not contain any actual spelling problems, which is good, but not that hard to do when you use Microsoft |
| First Blood - Review - Recommended |
I admit it, I enjoyed this fan fiction. There are slight issues with it which are explained below but for the most part it was good. Few things that bugged me where in the first chapter. It reminded me about the beginning of Halo 3 where Cortana is talking |
| Hallfight - Review - Highly Recommended |
I enjoyed reading this. It was filled with action and great descriptions, but the plot could have been better. All we read was that the Covenant could not reach the shelter, but why? Were there innocent people in there that they had to protect? Was there |
| Leave Out All The Rest - Second Opinion |
This was decently written, but there where a few things missing, and something that ju st confused me. There were slight spelling issues; no words spelled wrong, just the wrong words used. You also used excessive commas which made it sound highly dramatic. |
| Oh No, Not Again - Review - Gold Plate Review! |
Wow. That is all I can say. This was just perfect. I have never seen anything on this site as good a s this; I am just at a loss of words. It is funny, it all flows perfectly and there are no spelling or grammar mistakes that I can see. It is essentially |
| Private Lewis - Review |
I would have been entertained, plain and simple. This shows potential, but fails to prove it. There where spelling and grammatical errors which cause the story to get confusing at times. This caused the hook to be confusing and diluted its effect. The |
| Retake the City - Review |
A story without mood is like a cake without frosting. Mood is one of the vital things that this story lacked. Without the mood the story has a dull feel to it and the action scenes fall short of their expectations. One good way to set the mood is to have |
| The Death of Victoria - Review |
This was an okay piece of work. It did not entertain me but did not push me away either. There were some mistakes which seem to arise frequently in the story. No plot being set, no emotion, spelling and grammatical issues. But other than that it seems |
| The Great War - Review |
This piece of fan fiction was mildly entertaining. The experience however was not. The writer’s style of writing is amateur to say the least, and there is no will to change it. Sheer laziness has effected how people view his fan fiction. People |
| The O.D.S.T. Story - Review |
Not much can be said about a story at such an early point in existence. However the prologue was riddled with errors which need to be resolved before any thought goes into continuing. There where many grammar issues, and very sparse spelling ones. There |
| The Spartan Conspiracy - Review |
It was an okay read. I fairly enjoyed it, but there were issues which diluted the entertainment I got from it. You started the action way too fast. One moment they are just sitting in a room, and the next they are in a full on battle in the base. Then |
| White Fear - Review |
This is an okay piece of fiction. It is not great, but it is not bad either. There are many areas which can use improvement. One thing is the fact that the text is very small. Small text on a screen gives people headaches. You want your reader to be comfortable |