[FF] Halo:1946

Last post 10-27-2009, 7:16 AM by twigggy. 11 replies.
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  •  10-25-2009, 6:58 PM 757855

    [FF] Halo:1946

    This is my attempt at something new

    Judge and comment please, it may or may not be updated based on the fan base >.<


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  10-25-2009, 6:58 PM 757856 in reply to 757855

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    Radio Log
    Somewhere over the Atlantic
    USAF squadron Bravo
    10/28/1946
    Operation: Deadweight

    Bravo3: “This is it… this is the end, of humanity.”

    Tower: “What was that Bravo three? I said stay in formation, do not engage the enemy.”

    Bravo3: “What hope is there, P-40s can’t stand up to those things. We’re screwed.”

    Tower: “What the hell is he doing? Why the hell are you breaking formation Bravo three? Get your ass back there Bravo three. Bravo three? Come in Bravo three, do you hear me? Dammit, Bravo one, what’s the status on Bravo three?”

    Bravo1: “This is Bravo one, Bravo three broke of and headed back sir. The rest of the squadron is moving on the target. Do we have a go on kill zone gamma?”

    Tower: “Rodger that Bravo one, kill box is live and open. Begin your attack run.”

    Bravo4: “Tower, this is Bravo four, without Harris we’re not going to have enough fire power to crack through.”

    Tower: “Doesn’t matter Bravo four, continue on your projected flight. God speed Bravos. Tower out.”

    Bravo1: “Alright Bravos, you heard tower. Let’s hit these bastards while they don’t know its coming. Form up on my six, watch your rear, and if you see something glowing, get the hell out of the way.”

    Bravo2: “Hey Captain, we got bogies on our six. I count six.”

    Bravo 5: “I got them, coming around. [Engine guns] [Machine gun fire] No effect sir, switching to rockets. Fox one, away. [Ignition, followed by explosion] Dammit, no effect Captain, it didn’t even scorch it.”

    Bravo1: “Alright, try to form back on me and… ***, watch out John!”

    [Explosion]

    Bravo1: “Dammit, Tower, we lost Bravo Five, recommend mission abort.”

    Tower: “Negative Bravo, continue the mission.”

    Bravo1: “But sir…”
    Tower: “No, this is critical Bravo. You must deliver the payload.”

    Bravo2: “Crap, mayday mayday, I’m going down. *** clipped my wing. Good luck guys.”

    [Impact into water] [Explosion]

    Bravo1: “Screw tower, abort mission Bravos, head back to the Endeavor, this mission is a wash.”

    Tower: “Negative Bravo, Negative. Belay that order. You are not to abort!”

    Bravo1: “I’ve lost too many men already Tower. I am not putting anymore of my men at… what is that? Tell me what you see Fix, what is it?”

    Bravo4: “I don’t know sir, it… it looks… beautiful. So nice…”

    Bravo1: “Now is not the time to go philosophical on me Fix. Tell me what the hell that…”

    [Explosion, static]

    Braco1: “God dammit, we lost Fix. Mayday, this is Bravo squadron to USS Endeavor, we need eyes on station. What the hell is going on?”

    Bravo6: “It’s the end sir, we’re screwed…”

    [Explosion, Channel goes to static]

    Tower: “It’s just as we expected. Get Washington on the phone, they need to hear about this.”


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  10-25-2009, 9:42 PM 757941 in reply to 757856

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    :D
    Tank > Banshee
  •  10-26-2009, 6:02 AM 758074 in reply to 757941

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    it has a lot of potential, man!


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  10-26-2009, 12:22 PM 758204 in reply to 758074

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    Finally, a historic halo ff where humanity can't do a thing...

    Well done on making the covenant as powerful as they sholud be.


    Spess mehrens
  •  10-26-2009, 12:25 PM 758209 in reply to 758204

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    yeah, good job so far, looking forward to the next one

     


    get your baby 8=D up
  •  10-26-2009, 12:41 PM 758215 in reply to 757856

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    Very nice.
    I'm the Angel of Death...
  •  10-26-2009, 1:36 PM 758239 in reply to 757856

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    You never sent bravo before gamma. Still, not bad
  •  10-26-2009, 2:04 PM 758256 in reply to 758239

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    i like it.

    advice fore improvements (in my opinion):

    i want to know the story from bravo 3's point of view afterward, that way i can get some sense of the magnitude of whatever covenant force destroyed the rest of bravo squad.


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  •  10-26-2009, 4:05 PM 758364 in reply to 758256

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    If I were to guess they were banshees, 6 seraphs or tarasques would have obliterated bravo squadron in seconds.

    Spess mehrens
  •  10-26-2009, 4:12 PM 758365 in reply to 758364

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    twigggy:If I were to guess they were banshees, 6 seraphs or tarasques would have obliterated bravo squadron in seconds.

    there is no way tarasques are going to exist at the same time as seraphs. Second, the bravo nut-job said he saw something "buetiful". Those starships were hardly buetiful. I suggest a cheese burger instead.

  •  10-27-2009, 7:16 AM 758805 in reply to 758365

    Re: [FF] Halo:1946

    Note the OR between seraphs and tarasques?

    Spess mehrens
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