[FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale---Chapter One Up!

Last post 10-28-2009, 8:22 PM by Offensive Bias. 9 replies.
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  •  10-21-2009, 4:15 PM 754410

    [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale---Chapter One Up!

    Hello, this is my first time on the Halo Wars forums, and I am hoping to not be torn to pieces!

     Here goes nothing...

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    Prologue

    Darkwing

    We are killers.

    Some call us traitors. They call us inhumane. They say we’re just as bad as the Covenant. Just as much of a threat to humanity. Just as sinister.

    And they’re right.

    There isn’t a day that goes by that I don’t regret it. Regret what I’ve become; what I will become. I’d sold myself down a one-way path into hell. There was no turning back. Not now. Not ever. The remainder of my life was seemingly written in stone.

    Maybe I am a traitor. Maybe I deserve death for the crimes I’ve committed; for the innocent lives I’d taken; for the decisions I’ve made. And if death shall come, then I will welcome it with open arms. Acknowledge it as a blessing.

    We are Darkwing.

    ---

    One Month Ago

    The iron hard fist cracked against my cheek, the feeling equivalent to being run over by a school bus. For the third time, my knees buckled and gave in from under me. I slammed hard against the blue mat that, in reality, wasn’t as soft as it was cracked up to be.

    The crowd around me erupted in snickers. Thanks, guys. That’s exactly what I needed right now: being the nearly unconscious newbie recruit who made a fool of himself not even a month into training for the UNSC. It was such a typical, corny story that usually ended with the rookie becoming a war hero.

    Not this story.

    No, this story is about pain. It’s about the ever-prospering internal struggle that I still recall to this very day.

    This is a horror story.

    “Get up, Private Volker, this isn’t daycare!” cried the Drill Sergeant. He tried to keep his glare stoic and angry, but I could see the amusement in his eyes. He only wanted me to get up so that I’d go right back down.

    For whatever warped reason, I gave him the satisfaction, slowly regaining my feet, wiping my bleeding lip with my tee shirt and facing my opponent once more, leaning heavily on my right leg.

    Derek, I believe his name was. Corporal Derek Fisher. His head was shaved like a cue-ball, and he had at least six inches on me, as well as another sixty pounds or so. He was grinning wickedly, clearly pleased with his last four takedowns.

    “Ready for one more, rookie?” he mocked, putting his fists up again.

    “Ready when you are,” I replied, not even bothering to hide my lack of enthusiasm.

    We circled each other once more, feigning punches every now and then. The small crowd of eight other recruits watched us in complete and utter silence. I snuck a quick glance at the Drill Sergeant, who was smoking a cigar in the corner of the room, nodding thoughtfully and scribbling some notes down on a clipboard.

    When I turned back, I saw only a fist as it cracked between my eyes.

    Down, down I fell, my breath leaving me completely as I fell like an unstrung puppet to the mat. It took a moment for the pain to rush through me, scorching me from the inside out, unbearable. I covered my face shamefully, hoping, no praying that I didn’t pass out.

    But Derek Fisher uttered those last few words with such chilling conviction that my eyes shot open once more.

    “You protect yourself like you protected your wife.”

    My wife.

    Dead.

    She’d been killed only a few months before, on Harvest, shot down outside our house when the Covenant had attacked. I hadn’t been there. I hadn’t been there to protect her, to ensure with every ounce of the life within me that she made it out of there alive.

    And then she was gone, just like that. Taken from me. Gone like my hopes of ever becoming a Marine now. Gone like my faith that we’d survive this war.

    Anger.

    Pumping through me, spilling lava into my veins, sloshing around inside of me. Everywhere I looked, I saw her. I saw her dying. I saw the Covenant storming my world, burning our homes. I saw Derek Fisher, mocking me, much to the crowd’s amusement.

    And then, at last, I saw hell.

    ---

    More will come soon, hope you enjoy!

    ~Murph~

     

  •  10-21-2009, 4:34 PM 754447 in reply to 754410

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    fine gentleman! u suck, GTFO and stop writing!

     :P

     I kid Murph, I kid. Welcome to the HWF. May people find your work as enticing as I do.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  10-21-2009, 4:44 PM 754467 in reply to 754447

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    Wolverfrog49:

    fine gentleman! u suck, GTFO and stop writing!

     :P

     I kid Murph, I kid. Welcome to the HWF. May people find your work as enticing as I do.

    I don't know what enticing means but I like it
    Design a Faction

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx
  •  10-21-2009, 5:01 PM 754507 in reply to 754467

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    Hey, thats not half bad, great start, i want more. keep it up
    The Eayn Tribute: Read about the life of a jackal, who fights back during a rebellion against the covenant, and must struggle to remain alive as the Covenant fight the small group of rebels.

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/804296.aspx

  •  10-22-2009, 6:46 AM 755201 in reply to 754507

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    good to see you, Murph.
    hope you get some more readers!
    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  10-27-2009, 6:47 PM 759115 in reply to 755201

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    Chapter One

    The Last Mistake

    There is no way to describe the infinite rage that had burned a hole through my heart. I wasn’t myself anymore. I wanted revenge, and I wanted it in blood, even if the payment came from the innocent. It just needed to come now.

    And Derek Fisher was all I saw.

    I scrambled to my feet, all of the pains from his punches suddenly evaporating. He was still laughing. Still mocking me.

    There was a deafening crack as my fist collided with the side of his face. The laughing ceased all too quickly as he crumpled to the ground, wailing, pressing his palm against his cheek. His mouth was filled with blood, and his pupils were the size of golf balls. He had not seen the attack coming. I’d caught him way off guard.

    If only he knew what was to come.

    I didn’t stop there. I couldn’t. I couldn’t hold back and let the fury just rest inside of me. With speed that even surprised me, I lunged forward, my teeth clenched, and thrust down my elbow. There was a thunderous snap as his nose broke and blood raced down his face, but by then I had already directed yet another punch between his eyes, then another.

    “I’ll…kick..your…sorry…ass!” I yelled between each blow. Fisher was so horrorstruck, so bewildered that his weak little prey had turned into a monster, but that didn’t stop me. I relentlessly struck several more times, feeling the power coarse through my veins as I put freaking Derek Fisher to shame.

    Suddenly, I felt something yanking at my shoulder. No, more than something. The eight Marines that had been observing the training exercise were grabbing at me, trying to pull me off of the man who I’d grown to hate so quickly, and with such little chance given. I ignored them, ignored their tugs and jerks on my shoulders, ignored their cries to stop.

    It was time to end this.

    My hands fell forward, machine like, cold but firm. My fingers slid around Fisher’s throat, constricting him until he gasped for breath, screeched for breath, but found no salvation in his lungs. I squeezed harder, knocking his head against the ground as I strangled him. So angry..so terrifyingly angry. Not even his vicious struggling could allow him to break free of my chokehold. The Marines could not move me. Not now, when this new strength had taken control.

    Suddenly, he stopped struggling. Stopped gasping. Every muscle in his body jerked to a sudden, abrupt stop that I still see over and over again to this very day. It haunts me. I see his face when I sleep. I see his lifeless, sorrowful eyes, his blood-filled mouth contorted into a frown, unmoving, completely limp.

    Dead.

    I’d killed him.

    I’d killed Derek Fisher.

    I’d killed a human being with my bare hands, all because he had mocked me. I’d taken his life like the Covenant had taken my wife’s. I was a murderer.

    The world seemed to freeze all around me then. Time passed in fragments, screams echoed in my head, over and over, like a broken tape recorder. I looked around, but the faces were blank to me. Alien. I no longer felt human.

    Pop

    The last thing I saw was Derek Fisher’s baffled expression before I was engulfed by total and complete darkness.

  •  10-27-2009, 6:59 PM 759121 in reply to 759115

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    Good stuff Murph; I also think you should post Heretic or Hero here.

    Would you mind checking out Insurrection? I know you haven't read it in a while (Either that or you're just being shy.)

     :P

     


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  10-27-2009, 7:47 PM 759155 in reply to 759121

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale

    Describe surroundings more? Otherwise, luvz it.
    Tank > Banshee
  •  10-27-2009, 11:33 PM 759463 in reply to 754410

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale---Chapter One Up!

    Very good voice i like it.
    You can't play halo wars until you see this video
    http://www.escapistmagazine.com/videos/view/zero-punctuation/645-Halo-Wars
    I've been perma-banned at bungie.net :(
  •  10-28-2009, 8:22 PM 760116 in reply to 759463

    Re: [FF] Darkwing---A Killer's Tale---Chapter One Up!

    I feel awed to read this. As though penned by a real author, one who has accomplished much. This was an excellent read by any account. I could feel every vivid detail. The pain, the humiliation, the anger. As if it were all flowing through me. Although, you could describe surroundings more. There wasn't much of the surroundings, the room etc...But, if you work on that, this story will indeed be one of the greats. I hope you continue this, with me as a reader.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
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