A proposal to the Library community

Last post 10-18-2009, 4:33 AM by The Kelvinator. 13 replies.
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  •  10-15-2009, 8:40 PM 748842

    A proposal to the Library community

    I sit at work, doing this because I am unable to do my request. Now, I have a plan to "novelize," Halo Wars. In this, I mean that I'll explore emotions and back-stories, just like I did in my FF "The Interrogation of Ellen Anders." I will also insert my explanations - based on my interpretations of the plot - as to why things happened, so some may disagree with them. This will inevitably lead to the novelization of scenes from the cutscenes and game, but hopefully they'll be so much more than just a copy+paste.

    I see this as a very large task. Regardless of whether other's decide to try this as well, I will still do it. So none now may call me a copy-cat :). My question is this; when I do begin this endeavor, how many would be interested in seeing it posted here in the Library?


    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-15-2009, 8:46 PM 748845 in reply to 748842

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    You have my support my friend
    Design a Faction

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx
  •  10-15-2009, 8:57 PM 748849 in reply to 748845

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Awesome. One reader is good enough for me, though more are certainly encouraged to read!

    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-15-2009, 8:59 PM 748850 in reply to 748849

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Support us my comrades
    Design a Faction

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx
  •  10-15-2009, 10:59 PM 748887 in reply to 748850

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Writing begins tonight. Hopefully I'll have the first chapter up tomorrow.

    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-16-2009, 6:12 AM 749093 in reply to 748887

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    well, i'm not sure. i think someone tried this a little while back and it wasn't very well received. although i think it was because of the lack of length and its inability to make the already known story interesting.

    but hey, i'll read it. i'm at work with not much else to do either!


    New story out! Halo: Below the Brine
    (it's the best story you're not reading!)
  •  10-16-2009, 10:23 AM 749165 in reply to 749093

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    I did something like this ages ago; but it wasn't interesting or a proper attempt; it was just a way for me to practice writing action, which, at the time, I was terrible at.

    Personally though, I don't think Halo Wars had a very interesting plot. I remember we at The Mirratord, over at Bnet wrote up Halo 3 once, with our ally group FanFicFactor. We got to the Covenant, and got bored. It was long though, and good. I may post what we wrote here.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  10-16-2009, 10:32 AM 749170 in reply to 749165

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    I'll post the finished product in the Library, of course, I was just wanting to throw a "display" of sorts out there; give people a look at what I'll be doing.

    Inside the Artifact

    February 4, 2531 / 00:52 / Unknown Artifact, Harvest

    Anders walked cautiously alongside Sergeant Forge. He smelled like combat; a musky mixture of blood – both Human and Covenant, gunfire gas residue, and adrenaline fueled sweat. Not an entirely pleasant smell, but one that the young Professor had grown accustom too.

    She looked around at the surrounding structure. Large arches, crafted by what ONI called the Forerunners, swept upward from the ground; all of them leading to a large, chandelier looking structure. The structure hung over an artificial island, surrounded by a moat that fell down into a chasm. If Anders were to guess, the chasm was at least five kilometers deep, possibly more.

    “Sergeant,” she asked, “is this what the aliens were after?” She continued to follow him, turning as she walked to get a better view of the structure.

    “Seems so, ma’am,” Forge responded, “They sure paid a price defending it.” All around the group, several Marines worked to gather the fallen Elite and Grunt bodies and move them out of the way. “All quiet now,” he confirmed.

    Anders rolled her eyes; she wasn’t an idiot. They had just fought through several Covenant forces; Ellen herself had fired at more than a few Grunts with her M6C – given to her as a precaution by the Sergeant. To tell her what she already knew was redundant.

    Her annoyance soon diminished as they crossed a small bridge leading to a large, ornate console. Forge held up a hand, silently ordering his men to hold position. Well, Anders thought to herself, I’m not one of his men. She walked ahead, carefully approaching the foreign console.

    A large blue orb, comprised of perhaps a thousand hexagons, sat in the center of an artistically crafted base. A symbol was on each geometric facet, symbols that seemed familiar to Anders, though she couldn’t place them. Without actively thinking, she reached out to touch the orb.

    “Hey!” Forge grabbed her hand, stopping her from touching the ob’s surface, “What’re you doing?”

    She looked at him with a glance of annoyance. “Nothing ventured,” she said as she pulled her arm from his grip, “nothing gained.” Once again she reached to the orb, this time purposefully. The surface tingled with energy, a calm electrical current that sent tendrils of excitement and anticipation down Anders’ spine. The orb rotated as her hand approached, groaning with age yet still moving gracefully.

    As she touched the surface, the hexagons under her fingertips glowed a bright blue. A split second later, a pulse of energy raced along the orb. The structure in front of them rumbled deeply, its inner mechanics moving for the first time in centuries. Anders took a tentative step back, watching the machine with a mixed look of worry and wonder.

    A thin beam of light pulsed in the center, connecting the ground structure to the hanging one. With a sudden flash, it expanded rapidly. Anders blinked, the flash blinding her for a moment. When it cleared, dozens of stars and planets orbited the structure slowly, crafted from light, yet surprisingly accurate.

    “Now that’s not what I expected!” she gasped. The planets displayed began to trace lines, possible paths, between the systems’ sun and the orbiting planets. It’s our galaxy, Anders thought to herself. One of the planets blinked red. Though several were a faded shade of red or blinking as well, this one caught Anders’ eye especially. Home! She realized, is it in trouble?

    “What is it, Professor?” Forge asked, giving her a concerned look.

    Ellen turned from the display to face the Sergeant. “The star-chart,” she explained, “For some reason it’s indicating Arcadia.”

    “How can you tell?”

    “Because it’s blinking red, Sergeant,” she snapped. She tried to find their current position, the planet spinning by them slowly. Harvest was a dark red, the color staying solid.

    “There’s a lot of them blinking, Doc.” The Sergeant pointed out.

    “Yes, I see that,” Anders thought quickly, “But Arcadia lit up first. I would think that indicates a certain level of urgency.” She knew she was taking a risk in manipulating the mission, but the fighting on Harvest was all but over. The UNSC can mop up whatever Covenant remain, she justified herself, but Arcadia needs help. Oh, father, she suddenly worried, What if I’m too late?

    Forge shrugged. “Alright Doc,” he resigned. He had no reason to argue. If there was a fight that called for the UNSC, then he would fight. The decision on whether or not to head to Arcadia would fall to Captain Cutter.

    There was a slight pop of compressed gas, followed by the shattering of crystal. A Marine at the back of their formation went down with a grunt, pink shards scattering around his body. “Take cover!” Forge shouted. The other Marines, as well as Forge and the Professor, quickly ducked behind whatever they could find.

    Anders watched as the star-chart quickly disappeared, the still-blinking Arcadia fading from sight. She would worry about convincing the Captain later, surviving to do so now.

    Forge searched frantically for his M6, realizing that he had given it to the Professor. “Sh*t,” he muttered, glancing to his right. He caught the attention of a Marine, who nodded and tossed an M90 Shotgun Forge’s way. “These guys just don’t know when to quit!” he mused. The Sergeant caught the weapon, smirking with satisfaction. Time to play hardball, he thought in amusement as he cocked the gun.

    He ducked around the corner, firing into an Elite’s belly. The rounds connected, sending the big alien dead on his ass. He continued to fire, wounding or taking down his targets. The ones that he didn’t kill he left, knowing that without their shields they would fall quickly to the Marines’ MA5B’s.

    His concentration broke as he heard a cry of pain. The Marine to his left clutched a pink shard protruding from his chest. Forge dropped his gun, catching the Marine as he fell. He quickly pulled the shard out, tossing it aside as it shattered with minimal harm.

    Another Marine fell, the needle shattering before Forge could react. “Uh, Spirit this is Forge,” he shouted into his comm as the Marine beside him nursed his wound, “We’re gonna need a little backup.” He quickly swept up his shotgun, hoping that the call was received and responded too.

    The Sergeant looked at Anders, fear and panic displayed plainly on her face. Her hands holding the M6 were shaking; she would be very lucky to hit anything. “Don’t worry, Doc,” Forge comforted, “They’ll come. We’ll make it.”

    He emerged from cover, continuing to fire on the attacking Covenant, hoping that he was right.


    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-16-2009, 11:56 PM 749877 in reply to 749170

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Wow. Plain amazing. Keep writing, Spartan R41. You have my support.
  •  10-17-2009, 12:35 AM 749902 in reply to 749877

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    that was .................................................AWESOME keep up the good work

    This was in the Don'ts
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  •  10-18-2009, 12:12 AM 751051 in reply to 749902

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    My novel has started. Currently it only has the "first cutscene," though more is on the way. I have an edited foreword, I urge people to read it, as I've received a lot of concerns at FanFiction.net. The foreword explains the intent behind the writing, as well as the title.

    The FF is listed as "Halo: Archangel."


    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-18-2009, 12:17 AM 751054 in reply to 751051

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    I may read, if I remember to once I have time for something long like that...
    Beware the Australian Fridge

    Veraam:

    One with power = Corruption
    Two with power = War
  •  10-18-2009, 1:36 AM 751086 in reply to 751054

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Oh, it's not long currently. I've updated the first chapter, however.

    Current Fan Fictions in the Library:

    ODST: Hellbound

    The Interrogation of Ellen Anders

    Halo: Archangel
  •  10-18-2009, 4:33 AM 751157 in reply to 751086

    Re: A proposal to the Library community

    Just read it, it's awesome. I always liked what I read of your writing.
    Beware the Australian Fridge

    Veraam:

    One with power = Corruption
    Two with power = War
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