The Interplanetary Wars. [Part 1?]

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  •  03-16-2009, 2:07 AM 508977

    The Interplanetary Wars. [Part 1?]

    September 2, 2607 (ARCHIVE DATE: OCTOBER 7, 2162) SOMEWHERE IN SOUTH AMERICA UNITED NATIONS MILITARY BASE

    [PAKISATN-4]

    Dear Michelle, I am approximately 10,000 miles from France, maybe more. The company is restless. The jungle is leering at us from every direction. The insects are as annoying as the soldier from Indonesia that, for some reason, despises everyone in our unit, particularly me. Ah, but you would love it here, my love. Simplement magnifique ici.

    The other day we had been part of a unit that assaulted a major Koslovic outpost. My company was in the outskirts---in the thick of the jungle, in the thick of the fight. Our blood was pumping all right---the explosions, the sporradic gunfire cutting through the jungle. Eventually, we called in Pakistan-4 and several jets screamed over our heads. A second later, brilliant flashes---like several flowers suddenly blooming, the outpost was engulfed in brilliant orange and brown. Everyone in it had died. Or so we thought.

    There was a woman from Denmark that began to uncover a wreckage of a building when a rifle was pressed up her chin, and the next few seconds---oh my dear, you would have mistook it for a watermelon exploding. I was the one who shot the assailant. My fingers, already numb from the repeated firing in the outskirts, pressed the trigger and the Koslovic fell back into the smoking rubble. I looked into the man's face---and instead stared into the face of a child, no more than 12. A fresh pool of blood seeped from his head. My bullet.

    Pakistan-4 was supposdely "proud" of our success. "We could not have secured La Poz without the complete oblideration of that outpost!" one man whom I swear came from Yemen said. The words spilled all over me, all these commendations, but why? I had found out that the air strikes had not only destroyed the outpost, but burned down a building that had refugees displaced by the Rain Forest Wars. Innocent people. Their charred remains inside, when I uncovered them from the smoking ruins of the building, are still scarred in my mind.

    I look at my hands now. They're trembling. We go out the next day to support an armored convoy to another Koslovic base, this time much better armed and dangerous. Paris. Will I ever see its splendors again? Will I ever see the individual whom this great city hides---my wife?

    My dear Michelle, if they come with the letter, if they come towards your door, I want the kids to see the letter. I want them to know what their father did to serve not just France, but the United Nations against these Kosvlics and fascist Frieden. I await this next assault with bated breath.

    To be honest, I am afraid of dying. I will not feel you again, I will not kiss you again. I will never see my beautiful country. And I will never be able to serve again. I will do everything in my power to survive. For you, my love. For you, Michelle. 

    [Corporal Xerviere was killed in action the next day by a sniper shot.]

  •  03-16-2009, 2:59 AM 508993 in reply to 508977

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    I hate France :]

    WW2 For the win...


    "During the Pendulum Wars, the COG had a vast army... Now, it's made up of a few battalions..."
    -COG Chairman
  •  03-16-2009, 9:20 AM 509226 in reply to 508993

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    yep france sucks they hate americans so we hate them so in honor of that im gunna say @&@#^%@% YOU FRANCE! lol


    FFTS

  •  03-16-2009, 9:39 AM 509235 in reply to 509226

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    So what's the point of that story?
  •  03-16-2009, 12:54 PM 509424 in reply to 509226

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    REALLY? I posted this story hoping to get some feedback, and I get this?

     Oh yeah, we really hate Americans...that's why we love your president right now...

     You know, time does go on, and things do change. Apparently you all think it's still the 1960s-1970s. World War II is done and over with. Yes, you did help us. Why would I deny that? But we also helped you in your Revolutionary War.

    Seriously, I don't hate Americans. None of my friends here hate Americans. Almost everyone I've met doesn't hate Americans. But I hate Americans that stereotype to no end.

    And what was the point of this, you ask? Well, er...I don't know, to post a short story maybe on the fan fiction forum?

     

    ...Jeez, I can't believe that the people here are so low...

  •  03-16-2009, 3:25 PM 509624 in reply to 509424

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    Hmmm interesting, never seen an ff about the interplantary wars, could be good.

    Check out my new FF, Halo: The Fourth Heresy, spiritual
    successor to my old fan fiction, Halo: Gold Team

    Second Chapter is up now in the Library!

    (Gold Team is still posted on the Library)
  •  03-16-2009, 4:21 PM 509692 in reply to 509624

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    "Hey, a Fanfic! Hmm... FRANCE?!?!?! Well, seeing as I'm American, I will say World War 2 was a good thing as it meant the occupation of France and the death of millions! I will also say I hate France even though I know nothing about its people and culture apart from the stereotype that all French eat Frogs and Snails!"

    This is a good Fan Fic, I liked it, you should like it. You really are from the dregs of the B.Net Forums aren't you? Thinking you'll be welcomed as a hero for trying (Trying being the main word) to insult someone not from the USA. How mature you are. How awesome you have proved yourself to be. I wish you were a worm so I could fit your massive ego into my microwave and watch you burst. I'm from England! England and France! The stereotype that all English and French hate each other! I love France and I like UNSC Paris. He seems intelligent. You seem like a Monkey who has found a computer. Grow up.


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    Wuv u Chuckles :D
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  •  03-16-2009, 5:48 PM 509812 in reply to 509424

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    UNSC Paris:

    REALLY? I posted this story hoping to get some feedback, and I get this?

     Oh yeah, we really hate Americans...that's why we love your president right now...

     You know, time does go on, and things do change. Apparently you all think it's still the 1960s-1970s. World War II is done and over with. Yes, you did help us. Why would I deny that? But we also helped you in your Revolutionary War.

    Seriously, I don't hate Americans. None of my friends here hate Americans. Almost everyone I've met doesn't hate Americans. But I hate Americans that stereotype to no end.

    And what was the point of this, you ask? Well, er...I don't know, to post a short story maybe on the fan fiction forum?

     

    ...Jeez, I can't believe that the people here are so low...

    Well, without you French men and women, the D-Day landings of Normandy, France would have been a lot harder for the Allies since you help derail trains carring German troops to the front, blew up bridges to prevent enemy armor convoys from reaching the beaches, etc.

    Btw, it was a good read. I hope you write more.


    In my times, the darkened days,
    Evil invaded the world.
    We farmers,
    We workers of the Red Union,
    We united and slaughtered them all.
    The brave soul,
    Above the evil,
    Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
    - Ruski
  •  03-16-2009, 6:00 PM 509846 in reply to 509812

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    Russian 6th Guards Army :
    UNSC Paris:

    REALLY? I posted this story hoping to get some feedback, and I get this?

     Oh yeah, we really hate Americans...that's why we love your president right now...

     You know, time does go on, and things do change. Apparently you all think it's still the 1960s-1970s. World War II is done and over with. Yes, you did help us. Why would I deny that? But we also helped you in your Revolutionary War.

    Seriously, I don't hate Americans. None of my friends here hate Americans. Almost everyone I've met doesn't hate Americans. But I hate Americans that stereotype to no end.

    And what was the point of this, you ask? Well, er...I don't know, to post a short story maybe on the fan fiction forum?

     

    ...Jeez, I can't believe that the people here are so low...

    Well, without you French men and women, the D-Day landings of Normandy, France would have been a lot harder for the Allies since you help derail trains carring German troops to the front, blew up bridges to prevent enemy armor convoys from reaching the beaches, etc.

    Btw, it was a good read. I hope you write more.

    france has good whine though ill give u that 

    and my story is way above a 6/10 ;D VIVA LARISTANCE! ironically i really am french...



    FFTS

  •  03-17-2009, 12:51 PM 511263 in reply to 509846

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    Well, in light of the fact of more less-random and more positive feedback, I'll definitely do more on the Interplanetary Wars. Thanks guys.
  •  03-17-2009, 6:02 PM 511732 in reply to 511263

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    why would they disband the UNSC? in 2607? thats after the halo events...this story makes no sence


    FFTS

  •  03-17-2009, 6:03 PM 511733 in reply to 511732

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    NVM! im a little buzzed (looks over soldier) i read that wrong sorry


    FFTS

  •  03-17-2009, 6:26 PM 511774 in reply to 511733

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    Epic fail!

    "I will do everything to survive for you my love."

    (He was killed the next day by sniper fire)

    Lol, I know I should take it seriously but it's so fail.


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
  •  03-17-2009, 6:28 PM 511781 in reply to 511774

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    Kuribayashi:

    Epic fail!

    "I will do everything to survive for you my love."

    (He was killed the next day by sniper fire)

    Lol, I know I should take it seriously but it's so fail.

    lol yeah frenchies all ways die after they write home to their loved ones lol

    dont take it the wrong way PARIDS!



    FFTS

  •  03-17-2009, 6:32 PM 511788 in reply to 511781

    Re: The Interplanetary Wars. [Part 1?]

    Socom427:
    Kuribayashi:

    Epic fail!

    "I will do everything to survive for you my love."

    (He was killed the next day by sniper fire)

    Lol, I know I should take it seriously but it's so fail.

    lol yeah frenchies all ways die after they write home to their loved ones lol

    dont take it the wrong way PARIDS!

    His name is Paris! Lol!
    Why am I shouting!?!?!????!

    Where am I?!

    Where's the next chapter?!?!


    Please read and comment my novel in the Liberry.
    Wuv u Chuckles :D
    Run for your life if you wanna get out alive. Or is it the other way around?
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