Halo: The Aftermath

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  •  04-04-2007, 3:59 PM 48785

    Halo: The Aftermath

    I made  this story up to go after the events of Halo 3

    Prologue

     

           It is 50 years after End of the Human-Covenant War and the battle of Earth. The Ark was activated and many Covenant, elites and brutes alike, were killed, not to mention many other humans. Many civilians retreated to some of the few shield worlds along with many others of the allied Covenant forces. The Arbiter, and the few other higher council and superior class elites and officers took refuge in the Ark where they were shielded from its blast. After three months, a small amount of Refugees came out of hiding to find Earth barren and lifeless. Unfortunately in the war most of Earth was destroyed. Only a small portion of the land was Humane; all else was toxic and lethal. The humans decided to move their home world to a planet called Victorious Exultation named after the Covenant. This planet was one of the few shield-worlds the humans stayed on. The humans stayed on this world and moved out to different worlds lead by Major Avery Johnson, Vice Admiral Miranda Keyes and Admiral Lewis Peterson. After the war the remaining prophets, brutes, drones, and jackals were exiled to different containment centers on different planets. These covenant warriors were forever called The Exiled. The Day belonged to the Elites. Now accompanied by the Grunts and Hunters.

     

     

    Table of Contents

    (Pending)

    Section I: The Uprising

    Chapter I: Prophet of Righteousness

    Chapter II: Caucascus’s Plan

    Chapter III: Rebellions

    Chapter IV: Retaliations

    Section II: The Alliance

    Part I: "The Covenant" Chapter I: The Arbiter

    Chapter II: The Unexpected Discovery

    Part II: " The UNSC" (name pending)

    (Chapters pending)

    Section III: Beta Halo

    (Chapters pending)

            

     

     

     

     

     Section I: The Uprising

     

    Chapter I: The Prophet of Righteousness

     

           The two drop ships zipped through the atmosphere of Containment Installation 0013 dodging flying chunks of conspicuous flying objects. The drop ships landed serenely on the crudely made drop pad near the Containments centers main detention facility. 

    “ I have some more prisoners for you,” the elite muttered “ eight brutes, 4 jackals, and one so called Prophet of Righteousness” 

    “ Huh Righteousness ay, splendid!” the elite prison guard said sarcastically. The prison guard roughly drew the chained brutes from the drop ships. 

    “ I will not stand it,” the Prophet of Righteousness said. 

    “ This…this…is heresy,” he said angrily. 

    “ Shut up prophet you are the ones that have led us to a doomed existence” The prison guard replied. 

    The guard led them through the automatic sliding doors. The guard instantly growled. The overwhelming sent of brute and these jackals was just too much. He pressed a series of numbers into a keypad next to a blue florescent shield like door. The door instantly vanished and he shoved the prisoners inside there. He pushed a button and the door instantly came back to life. The guard instantly retreated to his post by the corner of the examination room. The good thing about this part was that it was quite dark in the corners so it was possible that he could close his eyes and sleep and no one would notice. He tried to keep watch but he couldn’t. His eyelids started to slowly sink. He became sleepier and sleepier. It seemed that he had only slept for at least 5 minutes when all of a there was a growl 

    “ Carree what do you think your doing.” 

    “ Don’t you think I haven’t seen you napping all the time” the other elite guard said. 

    “This apathy has gone far enough, prepare yourself,” he said angrily. He whipped out his stun baton putting it on neutral.

    “ I will gladly fight you Rohammee” Carree replied whipping out his baton and doing the same thing. They slowly circled around each other. 

    The tension grew and grew upon itself until all of a sudden Rohammee lunged at Carree. Carree skillfully sidestepped him and brought his baton hard down on Rohammee’s left calf. Instantaneously Rohammee fell to the ground howling in pain. Carree went over to him thinking it was over, but Rohammee surprisingly got up and used an uppercut with his baton. It landed squarely right under Carree’s mandibles. Dazed Carree teetered back and hit the wall. Rohammee rounded on him and quickly delt a vicious back slap to his face. Carree couldn’t think straight his head was swimming. Rohammee raised his baton and at that instant Carree’s vision refocused. He quickly thrust up towards Rohammee’s chest. Knocking the air out of him and making him tumble backwards. He delt three more quick blows; two to the chest and one to his right shoulder. As Rohammee fell to the ground Carree turned his baton to stun and brought it down upon Rohammee’s head. There was a solid thunk and Rohammee collapsed unmoving to the ground.  Exhausted Carree went back to his post and asked a watching grunt to take Rohammee to the medical bay

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             “It has been along time my brothers” Righteousness said. 

    “ We should rise up and free our other brethren in their camps,” he said again. 

    “ It’s no use we cannot fight the elites they have all the weapons” a brute replied. 

    “ You do not need weapons, you are brutes” Righteousness said. 

    “ You are much stronger than any elite,” he said. He said 

    “ You must not succumb to this, remember you were the once brave and noble brutes!” 

    “ Hmm not anymore” a brute replied. 

    Righteousness replied “ stop it I say stop your complaining and remember what you are, brutes!” 

    “But there is n… yes there is a way” Righteousness said interrupting the brute. 

    “ Remember your battles, remember everything” Righteousness said. 

    Righteousness continued “ Remember how you slaughtered the humans and the elites, remember!” 

    “ Remember this and your heart will become strong and we not the elites will purge the path into the Great Beyond,” he said. 

    “ You’re right, yes we are the mighty brutes” a brute replied. 

    “ We did slaughter the humans and the elites,” the brute continued. 

    “ I Caucascus swear to thee o Prophet of Righteousness that I will support you in the campaign against the humans and elites” he continued. 

    “ Yes we will too” murmured some other brutes. 

    More brutes started yelling stronger and stronger “ We will aid in the rebellion!” 

    Righteousness and the brutes say in unison “ Because we are The Exiled!!!!!”



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  •  04-04-2007, 4:13 PM 48788 in reply to 48785

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    this kinda of cool but its too far into the future and we stil need to wait and see wha happens in halo 3
  •  04-04-2007, 4:38 PM 48796 in reply to 48788

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    We've had alot of fanfic recently I like it u have a few typos though
  •  04-04-2007, 4:44 PM 48799 in reply to 48796

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    what r they?

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  •  04-04-2007, 5:00 PM 48805 in reply to 48799

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

     He eyelids    he said. He said      against the campaign against the humans and elites    Righteousness and the brutes say in unison
  •  04-04-2007, 9:57 PM 48860 in reply to 48805

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    i edited some but i dont understand the rest of what u said explain

    P.S. I have been working on Chapter II but chapter II i hope should be quite alot longer than the first chapter and the prologue combined ( which is not very big lol) anyways hopefully ill get it done by this weekend. u know easter hoiliday yay!


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  •  04-05-2007, 10:47 AM 48892 in reply to 48860

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    It is a good idea, but maybe you shuld wait to see what happens in Halo 3 before continuing. Also you could spend a little more time on it, maybe go through it to make sure some of the lines make sense. But all in all I think it's alright and would make a good plot for a bookSmile
  •  04-05-2007, 2:21 PM 48915 in reply to 48892

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    It is a good idea
  •  04-05-2007, 3:55 PM 48932 in reply to 48915

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    well im not gonna wait. ive been wanting to write this and hopefully get some good compliments but.........[:'(] anyways lol im just kiddingBig Smile

    P.S. Or am i?AngelDevilConfused[:'(]Big SmileStick out tongue 



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  •  04-05-2007, 3:58 PM 48933 in reply to 48932

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    anyways check what lines? specifics?

    (u dont have to be so harshSadlolStick out tongue)



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  •  04-05-2007, 4:27 PM 48940 in reply to 48933

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    Just reread it and u should catch the typos
  •  04-05-2007, 4:33 PM 48941 in reply to 48933

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    great story but it sounds like a giant cliche

    still great story

  •  04-05-2007, 4:35 PM 48943 in reply to 48941

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    Yeah I like it
  •  04-05-2007, 5:10 PM 48958 in reply to 48943

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    cliche?!?

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  •  04-05-2007, 5:16 PM 48961 in reply to 48958

    Re: Halo: The Aftermath

    Yeah I'm not sure what he meant by that
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