(FF) True love

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  •  10-16-2008, 8:44 PM 388172

    (FF) True love

    Prologue:

    Harvest, 2531, Millers residence

    A 6 year old girl was sleeping in her room when she was suddenly was shaken awake, it was her father.

    "Dear get up, we're leaving right now." He said quietly picking her up.

    "Whats wrong daddy? Why are we leaving?" The drowsy daughter asked.

    Before he could answer the door to their house suddenly exploded and covenant forces walked in.

    "Run!" Her father shouted to her as he put her down and began to shoot the grunts walking in with his SMG.

    Suddenly a Elite Zealot walked in.

    "You shall pay for the grunts you have killed here, they never ran from a battle no matter how much the odds were against them." He Growled as he ignited his Energy sword.

    The father tried to shoot him but the Elite was to quick and soon he was impaled by the sword.

    "Please...........spare my daughter, shes all I have left since you killed her mother." The dying father asked.

    The Elite moved his head toward the mans ear and whispered. "I will spare your daughter, not out of respect, but of kindness and understanding." The Elite twisted his sword killing the man.

    The Zealot saw the girl come out and run to her fathers dead body.

    "Daddy! Daddy! Please get up daddy!" The girl sobbed.

    The Elites eyes softened and remorse swelled up in his heart as he looked at the bawling girl.

    "Daddy! Daddy!" The Girl cried.

    She suddenly felt her body lifted into the air and be rested against the chest armor of a creature, she looked up to see the Zealot carrying her in his arms as he run past blue flaming houses he had just attacked

    "Wha-what are you doing?" She asked sniffling.

    "Taking you to a place where you will be cared for by those of your own kind, do not hold your tears back, you shall prove your strength if you show your true emotions." The Zealot said calmly looking forward.

    The girl once again let the tears flow as she nuzzled her head into his chest. Why am I doing this? I should hate him for what he did but he seems to care that he hurt me so badly. I will listen to him.

    Soon they had reached a shelter for humans where the Zealot placed a sleeping girl by the door, he banged on the door where the humans became alert, he cloaked as he watched the humans take the sleeping girl inside.

    May we meet again. The Elite thought to himself as he returned to his phantom. 

     

    Chapter 1:

    2552, September 5, Earth

    The girl woke up shivering, "Another nightmare." She whispered as she laid back down.

    *6 hours later*

    The girl woke up to the rays of the sun in her apartment. "Another lousy day." She mumbled getting up. As she got up her waist long hair fell down, her beautiful face looked out her window to see what was going on.

    She went to the bathroom to take a shower, a shower always relaxed her.

    Once she was done she walked into her closet to get out some new cloths, for some reason this day felt different.

    *Streets of Mombasa*

    Walking along the streets were 5 elites begin toured of the city they would be staying at for a few years to grow better relations with the humans.

    "Why do these humans dare to look at there allies with such distaste?" A Elite hipmaster sneered. 

    "It could be the fact that we beat them so easily in our battles with eachother." A Major Domo said.

    4 of the Elites laugh except for a Zealot in the back, he looked at his brothers with distaste. Such foolish warriors for them not to realize how powerful the humans really are. the Zealot thought to himself.

    *Outside the girls apartment*

    She had stepped out her apartment and was now heading for her work, she always walked since it was 10 blocks down, she suddenly saw 5 men look at her from the alley and begin to follow her. She quickened her pace but was cut off by one that cut in front.

    "Where you going sweet thing?" The punk asked.

    She slammed her bag into his head knocking him over and began to ran.

    "After her!" The downed boy shouted to the others as he got up.

    She ran as fast as she could before she was knocked down, she turned over to see 5 men standing over her.

    "You ain't going no where hot stuff." a Punk sneered.

    *Zealot's group.*

    The zealot suddenly heard a man shout "After her!" He looked over to see 5 men chasing a women, a beautiful woman he felt he had met before, without thinking he ran over to them.

    *Girl*

    "So what do you think over her boss?" The punk on the left asked.

    He smiled "I think shes feisty, I like feisty." He said.

    "How about you turn around and get the surprise of your life." A mysterious voice said behind them. As the boss turned around a fist slammed into his face sending him flying, one punk tried to punch the mysterious person but his punch was caught and then the boy was kicked aside. The 3 others rushed the mysterious person, before they could reach him though he hit them with the lid of a trash can he found.

    The girl finally opened her eyes to see a 4 fingered hand reaching out. 

    "I am Ralum Rus, are you alright?" The Elite asked.

    To be continued.

     

    Chapter 2:

    *Streets of Mombasa*

    The girl looked up at the Elite with great curiosity, his eyes were blue instead of gold, his eyes had the kindness and softness you wouldn't expect from an Elite, but most of all he looked so familiar to her, but what really confused her was how she thought he was a beautiful creature, she then snapped back into reality when she heard a voice.

    " Ma'am can you hear me?" Ralum asked.

    "No no, I'm alright, my name is Jenna just so you know." She said answering him.

    As she took his hand they suddenly felt something pop in their hearts.

    Why does my heart feel so fuzzy now? They both thought in usion. Ralum pulled Jenna up to her feet.

    "I....want to thank you for saving me from those men, I don't know what would of happened if you didn't." Jenna said to Ralum as they left the alley leaving the battered men behind and heading toward the group of elites.

    "I could not leave a defensless woman there to fall prey to those pigs now could I?" Ralum said to her smirking.

    She blushed at this. " Ummmmm, yeah well, I could have handled them myself." She mumbled.

    "Ha, my ass you barely took down one!" He said laughing.

    "Hey! Thats mean you know." She answered annoyed.

    "Relax it was a joke, you need to learn a joke human." Ralum grumbled.

    Now they were with the Elites.

    "Ralum! What are you doing with this disgusting creature?!" The Major Domo shouted.

    "Disgusting beast?! Have you looked in a mirrior?!" Jenna shouted back.

    Ralum sighed "This is gonna be a long day."

    As they kept walking and the Major and Jenna kept fighting a Elite Ultra walked up to the Zealot.

    "Why are we bringing this human with us? She is not a firend." He said with distaste.

    "I'm not going to leave her to fall prey to more pigs like those men, do you understand that ultra?" Ralum answered.

    The Ultra growled and walked back to the other Elites. Suddenly they stopped at a large building.

    "So this is were we're staying huh? Such a pathetic building." The other Zealot said.

    "Don't be angry just because its larger then our buildings brother." Ralum said to the Zealot.

    "Wow this is a nice place." Jenna said as she stopped arguing with the Major.

    Before them stood a 15 story hotel.

    To be continued

     

     Chapter 3: 

    *Mombasa Hotel Suite*

    The door to the 15 story suite opened to reveal a giant room full of kitchens, TVs, a Gym, and beds.

    Jenna's eyes sparkled as she looked at the room. "This place is amazing." She said in amazement.

    The 5 Elites just stared at her with creeped out looks  on their faces.

    "Why did you bring her along again Ralum?" A creeped out Major asked.

    "Because I didn't want her to be attacked again." He replied watching Jenna zoom through the different parts of the room.

    "Buuuuuuullshit." The Ultra answered as Ralum finished.

    "Who says that there aren't sickos that would drag her somewhere and do things to her." Ralum answered irritated.

    "I think theres more to it then he shows." A fellow Zealot added.

    "Shutup I'm hiding nothing!" Ralum shouted.

    This got Jenna's attention. "What are you guys talking about?" She asked.

    "Oh, um, nothing to concern you Jenna." Ralum answered her.

    Jenna shrugged. "OK then." She continued zooming through the house until her Cellphone began to ring.

    "Hello, this is Jenna speaking." She answered sweetly.

    "Ms. Nancy this is your boss, Mr.Carmin." A man answered.

    Jenna realized that she didn't get to work. "Wait Mr. Carmin let me explain-" She said into the phone but was cut off.

    "No more excuses Ms. Nancy, I'm afraid I must fire you, good bye." Mr. Carmin said hanging up.

    Jenna fell onto a bed and began to cry, her phone rang again. "Hello, this is Jenna." She sniffled.

    "Hello Jenna, this is your land lord." A woman said into the phone.

    Jenna began to cry again. "Let me guess I haven't paid enough of the rent so now I've been kicked out." She cried.

    "I'm afraid so Jenna, goodbye dear." The Woman said.

    Ralum had been behind a corner listening to what was going on, he then made his decision, he came around the corner and begna. "Jenna hearing of your surcamstances I have decided you will stay with us.

    The other 4 Elites and Jenna all shouted "WHAT!?".

    "Didn't you hear me, I'm letting you stay with us." Ralum repeated.

    "Ralum...........THANK YOU!!" Jenna shouted jumping on him and kissing the side of his mandibles repeatedly.

    She then realized. DID I JUST KISS A ELITE MULTIPLE TIMES AND NOT DIE?!

    Ralum thought at the same time. DID A HUMAN WOMAN JUST JUMP ON ME AND START KISSING ME?!

    They both backed away from eachother and began to blush, Ralum blushing purple.

    "2 things. 1: I ain't sleeping on the water covered bed. 2: Awww True loves first kiss." The Major said.

    "Shut up Drak!" Jenna said throwing her shoe and hitting the Major in the head.

    "*** human knows my name and dared to hit me with a shoe." Drak growled.

    Ralum sighed "this is gonna take getting use to."

    To be continued.

     

     

     


    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  10-16-2008, 8:48 PM 388179 in reply to 388172

    Re: (FF) True love

    shes gonna kill him


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  •  10-16-2008, 8:48 PM 388180 in reply to 388172

    Re: (FF) True love

    Me likee,

    Keep going with it,


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  •  10-16-2008, 8:49 PM 388182 in reply to 388179

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    Aukele:
    shes gonna kill him

    You'd be surprised at whats gonna happen. 


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  •  10-16-2008, 8:50 PM 388184 in reply to 388172

    Re: (FF) True love

    I would expect an elite to be a bit meaner but not kill the girl out of a sense of honor like how knights dont attack an unarmed opponent. and would the covedant dissapprove of this gesture and put him to death?

    either way good story cant wait for chapter one


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  •  10-16-2008, 8:50 PM 388185 in reply to 388182

    Re: (FF) True love

    Arbiter1000:

    Aukele:
    shes gonna kill him

    You'd be surprised at whats gonna happen. 

    im sure that i will my friend you have a love for covenant with emotions




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  •  10-16-2008, 8:53 PM 388187 in reply to 388185

    Re: (FF) True love

    I just can't see an Elite leave a girl crying for her dead father to wake up.

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    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  10-16-2008, 8:55 PM 388189 in reply to 388187

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    well i would understand if he brought her to the shelter but the elites effection is to apparant i thought you wanted to make the plot twist a surprise... your basicaly telling us (no i will not tell anyone what it is so dont ask)
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  •  10-16-2008, 8:56 PM 388190 in reply to 388189

    Re: (FF) True love

    No he doesn't feel like that yet.

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  •  10-16-2008, 9:00 PM 388194 in reply to 388189

    Re: (FF) True love

    Seems pretty good. I like it. I'll keep on reading.

     

    Oh and chapter two of my fan-fic (Tides of Darkness) is up and ready. Just a note.


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:01 PM 388195 in reply to 388179

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    Aukele:
    shes gonna kill him

    Lmao!  I dont know why I found that funny but I did.

    But anyways, I like the story, keep going.

     

    Now. 


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:01 PM 388196 in reply to 388190

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    Re: (FF) True love

    I just read the prolouge, great job. Although it felt strange that an elite would care for the little girl that much.

    BTW key word here

    Arbiter1000:
    yet

    Anyways, can't wait for chapter 1.


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:04 PM 388198 in reply to 388196

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    It seams like a fanfic wave is drownning out the noob invasion i mean ive scene over 5 new ones in less than 2 weeks and even I am currently writting the prelouge to mine (i might post it tonight)
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  •  10-16-2008, 9:05 PM 388199 in reply to 388196

    Re: (FF) True love

    Nice FF, but I hope the zealot and the lil girl aret the lovers because the elite would be much much older...

    Ps-I have an idea for a FF but I thinks its kinda dumb..

    Its about a new UNSC Project call GHOSTs, its been used 3 times but I have an idea for it. What do you think, should I go for it?some1 already made a SWs ff so i cant see why not


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  •  10-16-2008, 9:07 PM 388202 in reply to 388196

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    i really like this story, but wouldn't an elite kill her anyway? my god, i hope this story is as good as im expecting it too be =D

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