FF Deimos Anomally

Last post 10-18-2008, 5:50 PM by XNate02. 4 replies.
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  •  10-16-2008, 7:57 PM 388105

    FF Deimos Anomally

    Whatever it was, it was coming and it wasn’t stopping. He had seen the results of its murderous rampage, the blood soaked ground, pieces of flesh scattered about, creating a smell one might find in a slaughter house. The cold air was only interrupted by two things – his breath as he dialed in to the emergency channel and the blood dripping from the ceiling grates, the result if a recent slaughter.

    With a few swift clicks he shortly held a grin as the channel opened, but, as the noise of bone scraping on metal grew louder it quickly fled from his face. The computer terminal played a short tone, and he pounded away at the keyboard his last message as something now bashed at the metal airlock door.

    "THIS IS AN EMERGENCY! PLEASE, SOMEONE RESPOND! THIS IS UNSC RESEARCH OUTPOST IO-237! PLEASE RESPOND"

    He quickly typed the last few letters and hit the send button, airing the message for the nearby bases to read. It was the last thing he ever did.


    "The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

  •  10-16-2008, 7:59 PM 388110 in reply to 388105

    Re: FF Deimos Anomally

    Pretty good. I'd use a smaller text type or unbold this one. It gives the appearence of being a text wall without actually being one. Other than that it is really good.

     

    Check out my Fan-Fic "Tides of Darkness", and tell me what you think on it, some time.


    Dystopian... Life in a Dystopian Civilization. Check it out. Chapter 2 is up!
  •  10-16-2008, 8:00 PM 388114 in reply to 388110

    Re: FF Deimos Anomally

    lol, tides of darkness gave me the idea

    I changed the font, and it wasn;t bold, it was just the text style, which appeared as bold for some reason


    "The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

  •  10-16-2008, 8:07 PM 388122 in reply to 388114

    Re: FF Deimos Anomally

    Oh.... cool.

    Ok... the font isn't much of a problem any way.

    Keep up the good work.


    Dystopian... Life in a Dystopian Civilization. Check it out. Chapter 2 is up!
  •  10-18-2008, 5:50 PM 389796 in reply to 388122

    Re: FF Deimos Anomally

    cant wait for ch 1
    A Journey Always Begins With One Step -- TCA


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