here is my new fan-fic!

•                                                                Prolog
•                                           "These things dont die!"thats what I thought when I first fought them.
•                                 It was November 31,2552,I was on the In Amber Clad, thats when we found it,another Halo.
•                                The Flood were already let loose,the A.I. that was supposed to keep the Flood in containment.
•                                was captured in the process of keeping the Flood from reaching the critical mass of a Gravemind.
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•                                           The Flood had reached the critical mass one year before we got there,then,when we got there,the Master Chief got captured by the Flood,then got teleported to the Covenant Holy City of High Charity,the Prophet of Mercy was killed by a Flood infection form.The Prophet of Truth escaped,and attacked Earth.Admiral Lord Hood tried to keep the Covenant from getting through to Earth.That was a failiure.
•                                         Truth got through to Earth.The Flood attacked In Amber Clad,they won it over.Only 4 people survived,Commander Miranda Keyes,Sargent Major Avery Johnson,me,and the Master Chief.We were going to loose two wars.The war against the Flood,and the war against the Covenant.

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"Feet first into Hell!"

Uh...it needs to be a little longer, even if it is a prologue.

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Thanks Ukurse!

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Go Navy! America is still the greatest place on Earth, and it always will be!

yeah,I know,I just couldnt put everything,my sister hit the post button before I could put everything

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"Feet first into Hell!"

Haha. Write it in Word or some other program then paste it in here so you don't have that problem. 

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Thanks Ukurse!

Check Out My FF "Insertion Point"
Go Navy! America is still the greatest place on Earth, and it always will be!

its pretty good. I wonder if offensive thinks so.... lol

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

do not invite offensive,he will start an argument

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"Feet first into Hell!"

Spartan_Warrior:

Haha. Write it in Word or some other program then paste it in here so you don't have that problem. 

I dont have Word

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"Feet first into Hell!"

riz you read my mind. i will post everything that is wrong with it in a second.

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SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.

too true lol

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

they didnt know what a gravemind was yet

spelling needs work

short, very short

what is with some of the sentences?  some are spaced out while others are bunched

canon is the big issue here

but, its ok...for now

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MY POST COUNT IS OVER 9,000!!!
Bow before me mortals!
banned, for no good reason. I will be back though, and I intend to kick some serious ass...

offensive bias:

riz you read my mind. i will post everything that is wrong with it in a second.

do not start an argument

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"Feet first into Hell!"

man offensive your like a madman on the loose with a chainsaw lol

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"I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass faster than a fat *** who sat down to fast"

If you don't like R!zZle BiZzl£ then you can shnizzle my nizzle

awsome117:

they didnt know what a gravemind was yet

spelling needs work

short, very short

what is with some of the sentences?  some are spaced out while others are bunched

canon is the big issue here

but, its ok...for now

ok,just dont start an argument,my last fic got locked because of arguing

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"Feet first into Hell!"

R!zZle BiZzl£:

man offensive your like a madman on the loose with a chainsaw lol

yes,isnt he

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"Feet first into Hell!"

riz,you should make a fan-fic

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"Feet first into Hell!"