This new review service will rate your fan-fiction according to what your lacking, what your okay in, and what your strong points are. We will tell you what to improve on and what to keep the same. I have 7 subjects which I, and any voulenteers will rate your fan-fic with.

1. Spelling- Possible 5
2. Grammar- Posible 5
3. Storyline- Possible 10
4. Canon- Possible 10
5. Characters- Possible 10
6. Personality- Possible 10
7. Desciptions- Possible 10

Possible Total- 60 points

Also we have 7 final scores for your fan-fictions.

1. Flawed= 0- 9
2. Not recommended= 10- 19
3. Mild read= 20- 29
4. Okay read= 30- 39
5. Great read= 40- 49
6. Incredible= 50- 59
7. Perfect Score= 60

Please give the name of your fan-fiction and a link to it. Also I am asking for 2 reviewers to help out, I already have Kyle Bradley helping and could use the extra help. And yes writers, that means you will get 3 or 4 reviews of your fan-fiction! Now please bring me your fan-fictions and we will review them as soon as possible. PS: Any ideas for subjects to rate with please PM them to me.

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SMRT Squad. Not that smart
A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.

can u rate what i have done on The Family plz thx 

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VIVA LA FAMILIA

wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

can u rate what i have done on The Family plz thx 

Could you please give me a link to it and also would you like to help review

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SMRT Squad. Not that smart
A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.

idk how to link its only like 1 or 2 threads below this one

and no i cant help im bussy writing and rating for civbase

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VIVA LA FAMILIA

wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

this one seems fair to me

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VTROOPER:

this one seems fair to me

It is trust me

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SMRT Squad. Not that smart
A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

idk how to link its only like 1 or 2 threads below this one

and no i cant help im bussy writing and rating for civbase

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VIVA LA FAMILIA

wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

idk how to link its only like 1 or 2 threads below this one

and no i cant help im bussy writing and rating for civbase

You take the address at the top, copy it, and paste it and post it and we can get there but make it a click link plz.

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In my times, the darkened days,
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers,
We workers of the Red Union,
We united and slaughtered them all.
The brave soul,
Above the evil,
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

idk how to link its only like 1 or 2 threads below this one

and no i cant help im bussy writing and rating for civbase

Okay, I understand, I'll get on the review ASAP I don't know if I can do it now though becuase I'm tired and I don't think I could review to the best of my ability, so you might get it tomorrow

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SMRT Squad. Not that smart
A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.

Or I might do it now.

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In my times, the darkened days,
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers,
We workers of the Red Union,
We united and slaughtered them all.
The brave soul,
Above the evil,
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

Mr. Grenade:

This new review service will rate your fan-fiction according to what your lacking, what your okay in, and what your strong points are. We will tell you what to improve on and what to keep the same. I have 7 subjects which I, and any voulenteers will rate your fan-fic with.

1. Spelling- Possible 5
2. Grammar- Posible 5
3. Storyline- Possible 10
4. Canon- Possible 10
5. Characters- Possible 10
6. Personality- Possible 10
7. Desciptions- Possible 10

Possible Total- 50 points

Also we have 6 final scores for your fan-fictions.

1. Flawed
2. Not recommended
3. Mild read
4. Okay read
5. Great read
6. Incredible

Please give the name of your fan-fiction and a link to it. Also I am asking for 2 reviewers to help out, I already have Kyle Bradley helping and could use the extra help. And yes writers, that means you will get 3 or 4 reviews of your fan-fiction! Now please bring me your fan-fictions and we will review them as soon as possible. PS: Any ideas for subjects to rate with please PM them to me.

Can i ask who created this Fan Fic rating table here. It isnt too bad but could be improved.

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I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.

Mr. Gernade, check your pm.

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In my times, the darkened days,
Evil invaded the world.
We farmers,
We workers of the Red Union,
We united and slaughtered them all.
The brave soul,
Above the evil,
Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
- Ruski

Second Lieutenant Kyle Bradley:

Or I might do it now.

if u do it now that would be great

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VIVA LA FAMILIA

wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx

Spartan15:

Mr. Grenade:

This new review service will rate your fan-fiction according to what your lacking, what your okay in, and what your strong points are. We will tell you what to improve on and what to keep the same. I have 7 subjects which I, and any voulenteers will rate your fan-fic with.

1. Spelling- Possible 5
2. Grammar- Posible 5
3. Storyline- Possible 10
4. Canon- Possible 10
5. Characters- Possible 10
6. Personality- Possible 10
7. Desciptions- Possible 10

Possible Total- 50 points

Also we have 6 final scores for your fan-fictions.

1. Flawed- 0- 9 points
2. Not recommended- 10- 19 points
3. Mild read- 20- 29 points
4. Okay read- 30- 39 points
5. Great read- 40- 49 points
6. Incredible- 50 points

Please give the name of your fan-fiction and a link to it. Also I am asking for 2 reviewers to help out, I already have Kyle Bradley helping and could use the extra help. And yes writers, that means you will get 3 or 4 reviews of your fan-fiction! Now please bring me your fan-fictions and we will review them as soon as possible. PS: Any ideas for subjects to rate with please PM them to me.

Can i ask who created this Fan Fic rating table here. It isnt too bad but could be improved.

I created it but Kyle improved it and what ids your idea? PS: Would you like to help review?

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SMRT Squad. Not that smart
A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.

Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's:

Second Lieutenant Kyle Bradley:

Or I might do it now.

if u do it now that would be great

link=http://halowars.com/forums/thread/260857.aspx

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VIVA LA FAMILIA

wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx