(ff) halo untold stories (ff)

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  •  06-23-2008, 9:16 PM 271778

    (ff) halo untold stories (ff)

     

     

    The Untold Stories

     

     

    2531 Harvest

    Mark Stillman was only 20 when he signed up for the marines. A sweet faced kid with hair of gold. Truth be told he was not fond of the marines. He never liked fighting, but nonetheless he was needed. Now more than ever. Mark was stationed on Harvest when he got his first taste of action.

    He was with his sqaud playing a game of basketball when the attacks started. In the squad was Alex Garcia, Nick Moreno, Jack Jameson, Jose soto, and of course Mark Stillman. Private first class Alex Garcia noticed it all first.

    "What the.." said Alex dropping the ball to the ground and looking up. "Thats an explosion."

    "Way to go genius." retorded PFC Jameson.

     

    Gunnery Seargent Nick Moreno was the first to respond. "Inside marines get in your uniforms and await further orders." as soon as he finished that sentence the bases sirens began wailing. At first it startled Mark and he jump in place. All Mark's squad mates began to lagh.

    "Get going!" yelled Gunnery Segeant Moreno.

    "Sir yes Sir!" came the usual chorus.

    Everyone ran to their bunks and got their gear on as quickly as possible. Shortly after Moreno walked in and briefed them in.

    "The planet is under attack by an alien force." He began.

    "Comin' on a little strong don't you think Sarge?" questioned Soto. "I mean aliens."

    "Get over it Corporal.The WHOLE 17th division has been stationed in the city of Mekkido. Get a move on marines.

    "Sir yes Sir!"

    "Who's ready to spill some alien blood"

    "Hoorah"

    Chapter 1

    First contact

    Chapter 1

    First contact

    2531 City of Mekkido

    Mark and his squad were stationed at the top of an office building with another squad. The other squad was in their company, Delta company. They had a sniper whose name Mark had already forgotten. Mark and his squad were supposed to help civilians onto pelicans that would take them onto a colony ship.

    "Ma'am calm down we'll get you on the next flight." Mark said to a woman who was angry at Mark for not getting her and her children on the previous pelican.

    "I can't believe this...." she started the sentence but could never finish it because at that moment a Banshee came by and opened fire on the crowd.

    "Everyone get off the roof!" yelled Moreno.

    "What is that sarge?" asked Pfc Jack.

    "I have no idea." he replied. But as he did a whole squad of the banshees came as if from nowhere and opened fire.

    As if from instinct Mark took his BR55HB SR and opened fire. He knew it would do no good, but he still had to try. The sniper was the first to go.

    "Mark pick up that sniper rifle!" yelled Moreno.

    Mark ran as fast as he could while trying to dodge Banshee fire. He picked up the rifle and looked into the sights. He fired two shots into the cockpit of the Banshee. He watched as the front of the alien craft crumpled in. Alex picked up his Rocket launcher and fired at another pair of Banshees.

    "Just two more!" pfc Garcia yelled. Just as he finished that sentence the remaining two retreated.

    "Alright good job men." said Moreno with a satisfying grin on his face.

    Later that evening

    Mark crawled into his bunk and started to think. He thought about how he got stuck on Harvest. And his old squad. But mostly what happened on that day, the day he lost three of his best friends. He turned on his side while remembering.

    He had just joined the marines and was stationed on a planet on the outer reaches of Human controlled space. There had been some fighting on the closest planet to them and reports say they are not a civil uprising so the marines are on high alert.

    Mark and his old squad were on lookout duty for the base. If they saw anything strange they were to report it to command and nothing else. They were told the rules of engangement were only to open fire when fired upon. Mark thought this would all blow over soon enough so he didn't get too worked up on it.

    His squadmate, and good friend, Luis noticed something moving around in the bushes.

    "Whats that?" he asked as he saw a little head pop out of the bushes and go back in.

    Then as if on que a wave of blue and green blobs came straight at them. Luis got hit and went dow with a grunt.

    "Crap!" yelled private Stillman.

    He picked up his BR and began to fire at whatever was shooting at him. Right after the rest of his squad joined in. Man after man went down soon it was just him and Lieutenant Hernandez.

    "We have to retreat!" yelled Hernandez over the sound of gunfire.

    "Yes sir. Whatever you say sir!" came the reply.

    They both ran out of there like children. They ran straight to the H.Q. hut.

    "What's wrong Lieutenant?" asked Colonal Unida.

    "Sir we have enenmy contact." was his reply.

    "Did you see exactly what we're up against Lieutenant?" asked the Colonal.

    "No sir, but we did get a little look at the weapons they are using." responded the Lieutenant.

    "Enlighten me." said the colonal.

    "Well sir they were very advanced. They shot blobs an-..." that's all the Lieutenant cold get out because the Colonal cut him short.

    "Thank you very much. Sound the alarm!" came his cliche reply.

    "Sir," began the Lieutenant.

     

    "Yes." was the simple reply.

    "Our squad was decimated, Sir." said the Lieutenant.

    "Group up with Epsilon squad." was his reply.

    Chapter 2

    Reload

    Chapter 2

    Reload

    2531 City of Mekkido

    Mark came out of his daze when he heard the familiar sound of gunfire. He grabbed his Battle Rifle and found his Searent talking on the radio.

    "Mark where the hell have you been we need you out here!" Sarge chastized.

    "Grab a rocket launcher and take out those Wraiths!" he ordered.

    "Wraiths?" Asked Mark.

    "Yes the enemy tanks they're purple." answered Sarge.

    Mark came out of his daze when he heard the familiar sound of gunfire. He grabbed his Battle Rifle and found his Searent talking on the radio.

    "Mark where the hell have you been we need you out here!" Sarge chastized.

    "Grab a rocket launcher and take out those Wraiths!" he ordered.

    "Wraiths?" Asked Mark.

    "Yes the enemy tanks they're purple." answered Sarge.

    Mark found a rocket launcher, checked if it was loaded and went to a window. What he saw wasn't pretty. Marines were using fallen brothers in arms as cover. They had literally piled dead bodies on top of each other and used them for cover. There was only seven out there holding back the assualt. He aimed steadily and fired at the first of two Wraiths. It exploded in a blue light show. Directly below he could hear the cheers of of the Marines. Mark aimed and fired at the last Wraith. BOOM. " Bye-bye freaks." thought Mark.

    Mark set the rocket launcher down and grabbed a shotgun and some ammo. He rushed down the steps as fast as he could. The problem was he was at the sixth floor and he needed to get to the bottom. As soon as he got to the bottom he noticed there were more marines down there. He saw his squad and rushed over to them. He picked a spot next to Alex.

    "Where you been man, we missed you?" came Alex's well known sarcasm.

    "I was playing football on the roof. The ball fell off so I came to get it back." said Mark.

    All of a sudden there was this big "Hoorah!" from all directions around him.

    Mark got his first good look of the enemy. They were four feet tall and the Marines called them grunts. There were some taller ones with shields that they called jackals.

    "Watch out for those jackals man!" yelled Alex.

    Mark got his first good look of the enemy. They were four feet tall and the Marines called them grunts. There were some taller ones with shields that they called jackals.

    "Watch out for those jackals man!" yelled Alex.


  •  06-23-2008, 9:24 PM 271789 in reply to 271778

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    It was good

    but one MAJOR flaw, no ODST's were on Harvest when the attacks took place



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-23-2008, 9:25 PM 271793 in reply to 271789

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    alright thanks for the advice ill make the changes
  •  06-23-2008, 9:29 PM 271803 in reply to 271793

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    can you make the text bigger i can hardly read it.


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  06-23-2008, 9:35 PM 271808 in reply to 271778

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    Keep writing man, and there were very few spelling errors if none at all, one of the best I've ever had the pleasure of reading

    SMRT Squad. Not that smart
    A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.
  •  06-23-2008, 9:40 PM 271817 in reply to 271808

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    i'll have the next part up tomorrow afternoon at around 7:30 pm central time

  •  06-23-2008, 9:45 PM 271822 in reply to 271808

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    thanks for making it bigger. i like the story.


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  06-23-2008, 10:47 PM 271942 in reply to 271822

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     Thae last part of chapter two is up sooner than expected

    chapter 2

    reload cont.

    "Thanks for the heads up." said Mark.

    "Thanks for the heads up." said Mark.

     

    Pop Pop. Two grunts dead. PFC Jack took a grenade, pulled the pin and tossed it into the pool of Grunts. Boom. The grenade went off. Three or four Grunts flew into the air in all different directions

    Pop Pop. Two grunts dead. PFC Jack took a grenade, pulled the pin and tossed it into the pool of Grunts. Boom. The grenade went off. Three or four Grunts flew into the air in all different directions

    "Those Jackals are slaughtering us!" yelled Corporal Soto.

    "I'm on it!" said Alex pulling out his rocket laungher and pulling the trigger. The round landed in front of a wave of Jackals. After that the covenant began to retreat.

    "Hoorah" Alex yelled while firing another round into the retreating enemy. Blowing countless more into the air.

    The marines exploded in happiness. They were jumping in the air and laughing. They had escaped certain death they deserved to cheer. Then Gunnery Seargent Moreno came down and he looked pissed.

    "What the hell is with all the noise down here!" he yelled.

    "We're celebrating Sir." said a marine. Wrong move.

    'What's there to celebrate! The enemy has taken most of the city.!The building has been blown half to shreds! We need to begin securing this place! Or did you men forget about the civilians in here! The war is not over so get back to work!"

     


  •  06-23-2008, 10:57 PM 271971 in reply to 271942

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    I like it, though I did have one problem, why is there repeating phrases? Other than that, no complaints, can't wait for the next chapter

    SMRT Squad. Not that smart
    A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast will speak for him.
  •  06-23-2008, 10:58 PM 271976 in reply to 271971

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    i have no idea. just try to ignore that until i can get it fixed
  •  06-25-2008, 7:13 PM 274474 in reply to 271976

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    Chapter 3

    Earn your stripes

    2525 Planet in the Harvest System

    Mark and Lieutenant Hernandez met up with Epsilon squad just as the unknown enemy breached the bases walls. Epsilon squad was having great difficulty holding off the enemy. They had found cover behind an overturned warthog and sandbags.

    "Hello Seargent Montgomery. Private Stillman and I have been paired up with your squad until further notice so I'll be taking command." Said the Lieutenant.

    "Yessir." said the Seargent.

    "Alright good, now send your sniper somewhere safe where he could give us sufficient cover. On the count of three have all your men lob grenades at the enemy." ordered the Lieutenant.

    "Yessir," said the seargent. "Micheal find a safe place to provide us some good cover. Everyone else on the count of three get ready to lob some grenades."

    "1-2-3!" yelled the lieutenant.

     

    Everyone toke the pin off their grenades and threw them at the enemy. The enemy was quickly cut down after that. The men all cheered.

    "Quiet!!" yelled the Lieutenant.

    There was a low hum get louder and louder.

    "Keep your eyes peeled." said the Lieutenant.

    Then Mark saw where it was coming from. Two purple objects came speeding their way.

    "Lieutenant we have company!" warned Mark.

    Then the enemy began to open fire on the marines. Mark got a qick glimpse at he enemy. They were bigger than the previous ones and their mouths had slits in them.

    "Crap we're pinned!" yelled the Lieutenant.

    The marines would try and brave shooting back at the enemy. They would pop around the corners of the warthog or sandbags and take potluck shots. Finnaly after what seemed a lifetime a Scorpion tank came roaring from behind them and shot at the alien craft. Loud chees came from the marines and one by one they stood up in all their glory.

    2531 City of Mekkido

    The last attack had taken over an hour and a half ago. Mark knew something was up so he kept a close eye out on the surrounding buildings. He had just finished up an MRE and threw the remains in the closest trash bin. Shortly after his Seargent walked in and filled him and his squad on what their next objective was.

    "Listen up Marines because I'm only gonna say this once. We have orders to move deeper into the city. We are going into the industrial district. From there we have to meet up with Gamma company. Then we set up an H.Q. After that we have to hold the position until further orders."

    "What about the civilians?" asked corperal Soto.

    "We are going to leave them in the capable hands of Theta company. " replied the Seargent.

    i know its not alot since i last wrote but i haven't found time thanks for understanding


  •  07-05-2008, 7:49 PM 285508 in reply to 274474

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    *cough*
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