117 (Fan-fic)

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  •  06-18-2008, 1:00 PM 262140

    117 (Fan-fic)

    I'm been thinking about his for sometime and I've been planning to write this for awhile.

    117

    Prologue

    Earth

    HIstory Class UNSC Acdemy

    "Much of the war we were on the defenesive and we losing ground faster then we could recruit. Though we created next soldiers like the Serra 117 and the Sparatan II we were on the losing end of the war," the teacher said. Andrew looked around the room. Several Elites and hundreds of humans. There was even a grunt. He looked at the board.

    "From the Elites and Grunt side of things it looked like there was a hersy of aliens to be delt with. Though the Great War was only 28 years, the longest conflict in human history and possible the most costful for the Elites and Grunts as well, more 100 trillion lives were lost on both sides," he said looking at his watch before continuing, "Class is excused for the day, you may go."

    Everyone stood up exept three men and an elite. As the soldiers left Andrew stood up and looked at the elite. It nodded its head at him. Andrew nodded back and started to walk down the row between The other two humans stood up and step in his way.

    "Where you going Johnson? You have to do something to night," one of them said. Andrew looked at him. The alliance of the Covenat and Humanity had left a few veterans bitter, but it was good thing though. Though the Brutes were still then enemy of the Alliance, the jackals and drones had joined them on the outer edges of space. A bitter war was being fought with them at this time and some humans now were begining to think of rebelion was the only viable option. These were two of them. Andrew snickered.

    "And what will you do if the rebellion fails," Andrew said looking up at them. The two men looked at one another and laughed.

    "And who says were part of the rebelion," the other boy said. They turned around and left. Andrew looked back at the elite.

    "And since when do you carry a Plasma Pistol?" Andrew asked. The Elite stood up and walked up beside him.

    "How long have you known?" The elite asked. That was another thing that upset the Veterans of the war. The Alliance was trade and protection agreements. Tech was not allowed to be shared by the Covenant. So humanity stayed with Balistic weapons and the Covenant or what was left of it was plasma and light weapons.

    "Since the beginning of class today," Andrew said, "But thanks for backing me up if there was trouble, Shel-tasn, I owe you again." The elite nodded and sighed.

    "You only owe me your freindship, my freind. And maybe a meal," He said with a chuckle. They laughed as they walke dout of the class room.  They walked out of the acdemy and saw the last of this years trainee's getting ready for their graduation. Andrew walked down the path to a group of trainee's and looked at them.

    "You guys ready for grad?" he asked them. They looked at him shurging there shoulders.

    "Well you gauys have it easy compared to teh elites and Grunts, they have to rehearse- uh what was it called again Shel-tasn," one of the humans said.

    "The Oath of Honor. Its about three pages long in your contents but about six lines long in our language. Well if you'll excuse me, I have to head for home and get ready," Shel-tasn said saluting them. He walked away queitly as another human spoke.

    "So Andrew me and Hasn-tal will be in a squad together, one of the first squads to be command by a Elite. Thats pretty good there aye to be stuck with a buddy," He said wrapping his arm around an Elite.

    "Well it will be good. But I still don't have a squad disicnation yet," Andrew said, "You two are lucky, and you'll proably be assigned to reach for the constrution of the joint-military base there." Though the war was over, Humanity had lost some systems for specfic reasons. Reach and several other systems had become Joint-military bases for both Humanity and the Covenant. But other than that Humanity had regained all of the systems it lost. Andrew looked at the six soldiers. Then spoke, "Whatever happens we'll all meet agian, Promise."

    * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *

    Six months later

    Unknown system

    Andrew crouched with a battlerifle in his hands two jakcels walked in fron of him and didn't notice him and his squad mates. They had recieved a distress signal from the system, but no one knew who it was. The saw the ship when they llanded and it toke them nearly a week to reach the ships wreckage. Andrew stood up and spirted across the opening. To a door of the ship. He pressed several buttons and waited for it to open. It didn't, but he ran across the opening again to his commander, Seargent Harly.

    "Sir it won't open. I think it maybe one of the older ships. We may have to blow the hatch off to enter it," he said. The Seargent nodded and looked at a hunter. He made there hand signs and pointed at the door. He turned to the rest of the squad.

    "We;re going to supply protection that means breaking our cover. Understood?" He asked everyone nodded. He stoodup as and stepped out into the open and fired on a group of Brutes. The hunter rushed to the other sided of the opening while the squad cover it. It hit the door abruptly and tore it open. The seargent ordered everyone to move with his hands as the door was opened. Andrew caught a glimpse of the name of the ships name. UNSC Dawn o. The rest was to chared fo be read.


    One thing about war, even if its just or holy, no one wins even the victors lose.
  •  06-18-2008, 1:10 PM 262154 in reply to 262140

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    man ur a good writer good story
  •  06-18-2008, 1:10 PM 262157 in reply to 262140

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    i like it alot (4.5 out of 5)
  •  06-18-2008, 1:17 PM 262179 in reply to 262140

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Sounds good, but Reach was galssed

    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-18-2008, 1:20 PM 262190 in reply to 262157

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Nice job! It's pretty original!

    There were a couple minor errors, but not enough to ruin the chapter.


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  06-18-2008, 1:59 PM 262276 in reply to 262179

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:
    Sounds good, but Reach was galssed

    Even though a planet was glassed, you could rebiuld on it and begin to colonize it. And reach was a military base... so not may civ's will be there. sry for not clearing that up.


    One thing about war, even if its just or holy, no one wins even the victors lose.
  •  06-18-2008, 2:07 PM 262291 in reply to 262276

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Athlon27:

    Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:
    Sounds good, but Reach was galssed

    Even though a planet was glassed, you could rebiuld on it and begin to colonize it. And reach was a military base... so not may civ's will be there. sry for not clearing that up.

    Make sure u say its artificial and stuff then



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-18-2008, 3:29 PM 262457 in reply to 262291

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Nice.
  •  06-18-2008, 4:00 PM 262508 in reply to 262291

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:
    Athlon27:

    Master Gunnery Sergeant Sanchez:
    Sounds good, but Reach was galssed

    Even though a planet was glassed, you could rebiuld on it and begin to colonize it. And reach was a military base... so not may civ's will be there. sry for not clearing that up.

    Make sure u say its artificial and stuff then

    k


    One thing about war, even if its just or holy, no one wins even the victors lose.
  •  06-21-2008, 1:02 PM 267808 in reply to 262140

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Chapter 1

    Unknown System

    Andrew stepped into the ship an looked around. Rust had eaten at the walls, burn scars went down the hallway and there was no bodies. Andrew looked up hte hallway and saw a sign, Cyro-bay B.

    "Corperal Jefferson and Shens-tani, you stay and gaurd the door. Shens-tani tell the Hunter to saty here with you and well radio if we need anything understood," Sgt Harly ordered. The two nodded and the Elite made handsigns to the Hunter. It looked at the Sgt and nodded (or it looked like it was looking at him). The Sgt turned around and started up the hallway with the rest of the squad in trail. Andrew looked around as they took the coner leading to Cryo-bay B. As they entered it a light flickered and flashed on a pad. The Seargent order everyone to stop. He looked at andrew quickly and pointed at the short pillar. He nodded and slowly walked towards it, th elight still flickering. He crouched and opened a panel. a wire was disconnected. He simply reconnected the wire. The Light stopped flashing now. Andrew looked at and stood up. Nothing. He looked back at Harly.

    "Nothing sir, there's nothing here, but-" Andrew said. he was abruptly cut off

    "Who are you calling nothing Marine," a female voice said. Andrew wiped his head around. An AI stood on the little pillar and looked at them, then spoke again, "Hi."

    "What the- who are you," Andrew asked abruptly, the women looking at him. But as she was about to answer a cry came from down the hall. Everyone in ht esquad looked back at were they came. The Seargent pointed at the others and then at the corner. Andrew looked back at the AI. "You were saying."

    "Cortana, I'm the AI Cortana. May I know your-" She started ut didn't finish, as Andrew shot a look at his Seargent of shock. The Seargent had the same look.

    "Sir you know what this means don't you," Andrew said. Cortana was puzzled and looked at them.

    "Means what?" she asked.

    "That Serra 117 or Master Cheif John is in one of these Cryo tubes. Is that right?" Andrew said harshly. She nodded and pointed at the one right behind the holo-projector. Andrew looked at the Tube walked over to it and cleaned off the dust to reveil a suit of MJOLNIR IV armor. He looked at Cortana. He spoke, "Seargent can you buy me sometime to get him out of Cryo-state. I'll need about Three minutes."

    "Alright, and maybe he can get us out of here," hte Seargent said turning around and walking around a corner. Andrew looked at Cortana, and she nodded.

    "30 seconds more like but thats if he's not damaged by freezer burn," She said. Gas Escaped the Cryo tube and the man on the inside of tube began to move. Andrew looked in awe as the tube opened and the suit of armour sat up. He looked at the pad then Andrew.

    "So we've been found i take it," he said with a rough voice.

    "Yep, and we have to leave right now," She said. The Cheif nodded and looked at the Andrew.

    "Whats our situation?" he asked picking up a Battle Rifle.

    "Well, we were assigned to find out about the distress signal was coming from and we've engage the Brute and Jackal Serptists. I'll explain everything on the Pelican back to the Magesties Knight to you understood," Andrew said in a nutshell. THe Chief nodded and grabbed cortana's chip and inserted it in the back of his helmet.

    "Sir," Andrew said. The chief looked at him. Andrew conituned, "Are you scared, cause heroes are Fearless?"

    THe Chief nodded and spoke, "(Captain Cazador-Soldato's Signature) The Difference between a hero and a corward is whether or not your scared, its what you do while your scared."


    One thing about war, even if its just or holy, no one wins even the victors lose.
  •  06-21-2008, 1:06 PM 267812 in reply to 267808

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    A few spelling errors...but otherwise good...
    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  06-21-2008, 1:21 PM 267821 in reply to 267812

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    good story, like how it exsplains human elite ties after the war.
    I am the reconizable fat man and i say that the cake was only half a lie
  •  06-21-2008, 1:36 PM 267838 in reply to 267821

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    good stuff, cant wait for more Keep it up!
    The end is nigh!
  •  06-21-2008, 2:45 PM 267911 in reply to 267838

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    Its has a good plot, but you did have a lot of spelling errors, Mainly near the beggining, and you kept spelling the like this THe

    nice chapter though



    Halo: TCW
    "As I walk through the valley of the shadow of death I have no fear because I am the meanest mofo in the valley
  •  06-21-2008, 3:15 PM 267964 in reply to 262140

    Re: 117 (Fan-fic)

    THIS IS AN AMAZING STORY AND PLOT!!!!!!!  JUST TRY TO MINIMIZE THE SPELLING ERRORS ;)  PLZ CONTINUE!!!!
    No trespassing. Violators will be shot, and survivors will be shot again.
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