the o.d.s.t my fan fic

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  •  05-25-2008, 9:40 AM 236420

    the o.d.s.t my fan fic

                                                         Intro/pilot

    Captain John Robertson moaned as the sound of the sparrow harks engines made his ears pop “they should sound proof these things he yelled to this co-pilot”. Na coz then you cant here the bloody rebels whining when you blow there legs off, its what makes this job worth wile” replied sergeant James Hodges “easy for you to say you just have to work the guns we have I have to fly this piece of crap” replied Robertson “don’t whine that’s my job” replied James.

    John tuted “we have flow together for how long now” said john retoicaly. “Since I didn’t make the O.D.S.T squad no no a marine is good enough”,” how do they expect me to be proud of that so, I put in a complaint and stupid jerk spot or whatever” “you mean Cornel spunts” interrupted john “let me finish complaining now where was I oh yer so put me in this job because I am such a good gunner that *** just doesn’t like me”. “I’ve never been a gunner the close’s that I have ever been was a guy who sits on the back of a mongoose with a rocket launcher or a sniper, I was pretty good with the sniper though.” “So you have told me” said john “well you can hear it again I am in a bad mood”.

    “I’m thinking about trying out in for the odst’s again I might be able to get in as a sniper” said James

    “Well if you did you would have to lose that belly of yours” sniggered john “I will as soon as they stop giving out so many deserts you cant talk any way your bigger than me” said James. “well I’m not trying out for the most elite group of solders ever in the history of the would but yer we are disgraceful we call our self’s marines.

     

    Ok boys your done said a female voice over the com

    “Roger were coming home, replied john finally I need to get changed and have a shower”. Are you still sulking about that you’ve been here 2 years live with it.

     

    “Na I’m serious man I think I will try for the odsts again” said James sincerely

    “All the guys will think this is a real laugh” sniggered john

    “Well at least my career isn’t over and I am not stuck as crummy pilot on bloody reach’ we are so secure here the rebels don’t even have enough ships to get past one of those supper Macs and they don’t even know where we are so when I’m having my attempts to get out of hear you can stick to your patrols and waste your life” yelled James.

     

    “The sparrow hark landed and James stormed off. well he’s in a good mood 3rd lieutenant bobby skiofsky said to john just shut up bob he annoyed because I don’t think he can get into the odsts”said john. “He didn’t tell you the story again did he”. “sighed bobby yup for like the thousandth time I fell sorry for the little bugger I hope he does go some where” said bob.

     

    this is set befor the spartans and the covernant



    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-25-2008, 1:13 PM 236518 in reply to 236420

    Re: the o.d.s.t my fan fic

    Nice, just remember that ODST is written with capital letters.
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  •  05-25-2008, 1:14 PM 236520 in reply to 236518

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    nice to see youve put it up here, cant wait for the next chapter good luck

    when do you think the next chapter will be up?


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  •  05-27-2008, 7:03 AM 238433 in reply to 236520

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                                                        Chapter 1 the beginning

    The next day James made his way down to breakfast “oy hodgy” James looked around he didn’t see any one so he just kept walking “jams’y boy” this time he just pretended he hadn’t heard any thing. He had corn flakes for breakfast (as always) and went over to his usual table sat down. Frank rowly came over who wasn’t even a regular marine he was a cook and even he thought he could get in on the laugh, he sniggered “Jamie boy do you seriously think that you can make the ODSTs. “do you seriously think you can make food” butted in James, with that soap in it your supposed to wash yourself with it not eat get some mint gum for your breath.”

     

    Frank stormed off and James swore under his breath he couldn’t believe he had to spend another 12 hours in a *** pit with the man who told everyone his plans to get to a more exciting and better paying part of the corps but he secretly knew he didn’t have a chance he was just stuck here until he retired.

     

    Later that day when his shift started he made his way out to the hanger where his and johns sparrow hark was kept he did his best to avoid talking for most of the time they were there but by the end he of the first hour he just felt like screaming and blowing everything up because he was forced to sit in the vicinity of this man all day every day.

     

    “I am sorry”apoligissed john. “You should be” said James “well if you weren’t constantly moaning the whole time about how poor you are and lets all feel sorry for you grizzle grizzle” mocked john “well why don’t you try” said john to break an uncomfortable silence “because I’m not good enough” replied James sarcastically”well I’m sorry, they have that big selection at the end of the year you should try to make it then.” “well I would of but there is no way I will be able to even be able to walk to there vending machines and hotdog stands they hid them behind the mountain last time it was 45 kilometers and we had just run the full day.” well if you\are going for sniper that’s not quite as bad”.” But still they are the ODSTs” said john.

    ok its the next chapter i will write more even this one was late i cant date the next one have exams at school so i think thats slightly more important

     



    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-27-2008, 7:05 AM 238434 in reply to 238433

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    i fixed the odst ODST just 4 u lol

    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-27-2008, 7:07 AM 238435 in reply to 238433

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    another interesting chapter, i have seen fics about ODST's before but i cant remember seeing one about someone trying to join them. Good luck with your exams.
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  •  05-27-2008, 8:51 AM 238496 in reply to 238435

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    lol thx and if you haven't read The war of Doisac by killer! grunt! read it is awsame

    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-27-2008, 8:55 AM 238499 in reply to 238496

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    lol, what about mine

    *feels unwanted and makes a ham sandwich*


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  •  05-27-2008, 8:55 AM 238500 in reply to 238499

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    ah the ham sandwich the age old cure for lonliness lol
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  •  05-27-2008, 9:00 AM 238504 in reply to 238500

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    yep it dates all the way back to the cavemen who incidently...

    *continues rabbling on about some wartime story where i had to make a ham sandwich grenade*


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  •  05-29-2008, 8:51 AM 240264 in reply to 238504

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                                                     Chapter2 back to the top

    Eeeeeeeeeeeeeecccccccchhhhhhhhh POW “run run run Maries you little girls better pick it up or well use live rounds” bellowed sergeant major derrick Owen. It was the thirtieth of December James had been here for about two months, as he was trying two become an O.D.S.T sniper so his job in the team was to fire blanks into the other teams in order or his to win he found it easy, much to easy because his team were as good as the trainees could get they pretty much did it all for him he just had to shoot stuff. He also had more energy afterwards to look like he was fit in front of the training instructors. BOOM he fired another round into another trainee as he howled in pain he reloaded and fired again this time at the last man in front of his team.

     

    “Ptweet” the sergeant blew his whistle and called out “delta team wins again good job boys”

    “Dam right we are unstoppable baby whoo” yelled charley Campton. “Good shooting James” said tom “I thought they had us at that last corner but bang he was on da floor.”

    Delta team were getting unpopular because they won every thing from running flat out to playing paintball as a social after training. “Ok you guys can go back to camp now you can have the hog the rest of ya can walk” said the head training coach “tom you dive” said Robert “no bloody way I did all the running make James do it”complainand tom “fine moaned James “ill drive”.

     

    James had almost completely forgotten about John he had only sent one letter and got no reply he felt bad I thought he might of put him off because they went out with a fight. But he was much happier hear and he had much fun as he put the hog into 3 gear and blew past the rest of the trainees beeping the horn. His thoughts were interrupted by tom saying how he wished he had been selected for this Spartan program that was just becoming public now “yer they can do some much better with there careers than us” said tom no one had the energy to say any more.

     

                                                        Chapter3 In da zone

    It was three past twelve in the morning James had just fallen asleep when he felt a hand on his mouth and a pain in his chest he thought he had been stabbed his eyes fell heavy and he couldn’t move.

     

    He awoke 2 days latter in a secret part of reach close too castle base he didn’t know why he was there but all his squad and some very though looking marines were all around him he was told to find some amour and an assault rife in the cupboard, he took a look and got changed as quickly as he could.

     

    He walked over to the center of the room and asked another man what was going on but no one knew .There were about 20people in he room he so he looked for tom, Robert and charley seeing as he court a glimpse of them earlier he hastily found them and asked what the bloody**** was going on and they were about to say they had know idea when sergeant petty officer Mendez walked into the room and yelled over all the noise “ok marines we are all hear today for a test we have some people just out of training but you boys are only here to prove to all the officers who have a say in this that it’s a fair test and I haven’t rigged it.” “There is a big bad man in green amour that you have to kill for me, that’s it marines”.

    “Sounds easy enough” James said to tom “yer one man” said tom.

    Little did they know this was a Spartan, Spartan 117, john, master chief.Much latter  They all surrounded the tent which he was in and prepared to fire on him when he left.they were  getting ready to shot abut five minutes latter nothing had happed so they were getting edgy when all of a sudden it came out he was so fast all there bullets just missed but he was unarmed so he wouldn’t be to hard to kill first he punched a marine in the head and pulled on his gun off him he repeated the process on many more and James wondered why everyone was just letting him take their rifle but he was next his gun was pulled so hard he Brock 16 liniments and muscles, he fell to the ground uncontsish.

    chapter there has some reference to some of the books thats the fight seen with the chief



    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-29-2008, 9:03 AM 240273 in reply to 240264

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    It was nice to see the fight with the chief from the marines point of view.
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  •  05-29-2008, 9:05 AM 240277 in reply to 240273

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    yer i rushed it a bit though to tired lol cant w8 to read 13 of yours

    thanx L H for the sweet sig
  •  05-29-2008, 10:37 AM 240300 in reply to 240277

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    I always wanted to hear the marines story on that fight. Great story


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  •  05-29-2008, 12:05 PM 240330 in reply to 240300

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    nice, i cant believe i havent read this fan-fic before. Its awesome.

    Restlessness You will read this fic.
    Blood Ties its a sweet fic.






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