FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue-Chap. 3)

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  •  05-10-2008, 8:01 PM 225396

    FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue-Chap. 3)

                                                                                     Prologue

    Ung'uheile looked up as he heard the wail of the circling Banshees and then turned to right to look at his brother. Even though Ung'uheile had congratulated him on his promotion he was still resentful of his brother Ung'uleo. He had been promoted to Fleet Master just because his plasma grenade (which had been meant for a Brute) had landed on the head of a Human DEMON. The Brute thought Ung'uleo had acted to save his live and put his name up for promotion. Once the planet the Humans called Reach had fallen Ung'uleo was a Fleet Master. 'An idiot's stroke of luck' Ung'uheile thought, his eyes bearing into the back of his brothers skull. His fingers testily wrapped around the handle of his plasma rifle but released their grip. Now they where on the newly found Holy Ring to stop the Humans from destroying it just like the first. He watched the Banshees race away when the crackle of a radio and the squeaks and barks of an Unggoy broke the silence. "Fleet Master Ung'uleo, a small group of Human pods have just broken the atmosphere, E.T.A. of landing is 30 units!" Fleet Master Ung'uleo picked up the radio and barked "Tell the Jackals to set up in the ruins, get me 2 Phantoms for air support, hurry or I'll personally see to it that the Jackals have a feast of your squad tonight!" "Yis, sir! I will not disappoint you!" The Unggoy squeaked back.

      "Now my brother, time prove yourself like I have", Ung'uleo growled to his brother. "Try not to mess up."

    Hope you enjoy the rest..... please post ideas on titles.


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  •  05-10-2008, 8:03 PM 225402 in reply to 225396

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    sounds good
    Words
    Possession of the beggar and the king
    Received by all and we're sentenced to a life with
    Obsession of the genius and the fool
    Find them you can use them
    Say them you can hear them
    Write them you can read them
    Love them fear them
  •  05-10-2008, 8:08 PM 225412 in reply to 225402

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    nice

    title: death of a demon

     

  •  05-10-2008, 8:09 PM 225413 in reply to 225412

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    i like it
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  •  05-10-2008, 8:10 PM 225415 in reply to 225412

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    Good Job!

    Title:A Brother's Hate


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  •  05-10-2008, 8:13 PM 225416 in reply to 225415

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    i am going to put Master Chief in where he kills one of them and the other seeks revenge but i want it where the readers decide what happens next
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  •  05-10-2008, 8:13 PM 225417 in reply to 225415

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    good job

    and pick Don's title

    it fits the story the most 


  •  05-10-2008, 8:14 PM 225420 in reply to 225415

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    Titles: Stroke of luck

    An Elites revenge

     

  •  05-10-2008, 9:09 PM 225503 in reply to 225396

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1)

                                                                                                   Chapter 1

                                                                                              The Demon

       Ung'uleo's words stung Ung'uheile. He now had to prove himself to his brother....... but why? He adjusted himself on the outcrop to a more comfortable position and look into the scope of the beam rifle. He watched his brother kick an Unggoy aside and smack a Jackal on the head. His gaze turned up to the alien pods descending down on them. He barked at the 2 Unggoy that where supposed to be manning the plasma turret. They quickly hurried to shoot the pods down. 3 turrets where peppering the sky with fire as the others got in position. Ten seconds later the pods thudded on the side of the hill. Humans in black uniforms jumped out of the pods and started mowing down the suicide Unggoy in front. His attention turned to the green armored demon exiting the last pod and hefting a rocket launcher. 2 turrets fell victim two this demon's rockets as the other infantry where quickly dispatched by the other Humans. Ung'uheile aimed his beam rifle at the back of the demon's helmet as it bashed in a Jackal's skull. His finger was about to pull the trigger when the demon turned to the only gold armored Elite on the ring. Fleet Master Ung'uleo side wiped the demon with his energy sword but missed. The demon took his turn by kicking the joint of Ung'uleo's leg and breaking it in the process. The Fleet Master cowered on the ground as the demon as the demon put the barrel of his rifle and pulling the trigger. In the moment of his death, Ung'uleo's eyes flashed in the direction of his brother as if asking 'Why didn't you shoot?'

      Ung'uheile howled in anger, threw down his rifle, turned, and ran to the Banshee waiting for him in the bushes. Ung'uheile never turned back as he flew away but the sound of the demon's rifle still echoed in his head- never to leave him alone.


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  •  05-10-2008, 9:18 PM 225528 in reply to 225503

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1)

    haha, theres the combo of our titles

    it sounds sorta like delta halo(not mad)

    keep going!

  •  05-10-2008, 9:32 PM 225559 in reply to 225528

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1)

    it takes place in Halo 2-3 and beyond...............................................
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  •  05-11-2008, 10:21 AM 226042 in reply to 225559

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1 & Chap. 2)

                                                                                          Chapter 2

                                                                                     Rogue

    Ung'uheile finally touched down on the top of the hill and thought about his choices. He finally summed up his only reasonable choice.... the Heretics. On a mission a while back he remembered hearing of one of the Heretic bases was not far from his emplacement. But the thought of turning to them was unbearable. He knew that was his only choice so he jumped on his Banshee and flew in the known direction of the base.

      The Brute chieftain, Tarturas, listened to the report of what happened to this unfortunate troop. Before and during the battle, to the reporting Jackal's knowledge there had been 1 Elite, 11 Unggoy, and 4 Jackal abandonments. Now his troop had to them down. The hunt of the season, he thought, a little smug deep, deep, deep, deep down thats all he felt when he knew that when he told his Brutes they would do it out of fear or respect, it didn't matter, because he was in charge. After dismissing his troop he watched ride out of site, then turned to the lone surviving Jackal. "Coward," he said to the Jackal and blew of its head with a Brute Shot.

      Ung'uheile looked back and saw dust clouds arising from the horizon. They're coming, was his only thought as he looked forward and saw the base looming in the distant. His fate was in the Heretics' judgment of him.


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  •  05-11-2008, 12:34 PM 226255 in reply to 226042

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1 & Chap. 2)

                                                                                            Chapter 3

                                                                                          The Chase

      Ung'uheile rolled and darted to and fro in the narrow canyon, barely avoiding the shots from the Choppers. They had caught up to him over night and have been chasing him since dawn. The seasoned Brutes wouldn't even stop to see if they got him or if they had ran something over. Ung'uheile had never had so many shots fired at him at the same time. The Heretic base was closer but still far away. Every once in a while the taunts from the Brutes could be heard over the wail of the banshee, the sound of the cannons firing, and the vroom from the Choppers.

      Kitanleok was having the time of his life. They were shooting but no one shot back, but the Banshee was proving a hard target. He could see the rat looking back sometimes but he had to becareful where he shot, they were in a canyon after all. Kitanleok was shooting at the left wing of Ung'uheile's Banshee when two more wails from different Banshees echoed in the canyon. He looked back and saw two green Banshees, both firing their fuel rod cannons at HIM! The last thing Kitanleok saw was the green glow of the fuel rods impacting on his Chopper.

      Ung'uheile looked back and saw two Banshees firing at the Brutes when he heared over the inercom, "You are welcome, my brother, you have came to the right place."


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  •  05-11-2008, 1:03 PM 226292 in reply to 226255

    Re: FF: The Hate of A Demon (Prologue & Chap. 1 & Chap. 2)

    Very nice.Keep it up...

     


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  •  05-11-2008, 2:30 PM 226377 in reply to 225417

    Re: FF: A fanfic about an Elite who seeks revenge( no title)

    Yeah, pick Don's! Also, great work!
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