Chapter 1

The ship crash landed in a Depp djungel it was dark and rainy and the grund was dirty around the ship u Could see some woods Along the road in front of the ship Cortana wached carefuly around and woundering were they was she tryed to Wake Cheif cotrana said
- cheif Wake upp i need you !
Cheif Walked out from the Capsel he was Cainda dissy beacuse he had sleep in like 4 month before the landing he was tryning to find some weapons and grenades if he needed it he took Cortana back into his head. Then master cheif said were are we ?. I don’t know but we should walk upp to the hill and se were we are Cortana said.
-ok said cheif lets walk When he Walker upp from the hill he heard som strange sound in the Busches it was fammiliar sound Cortana said what is it ? Hmm notning he said finally they were upp then he saw something crazy and horror likely thing. It was the flood it were 4 Graveminds donw the cliff and alots of parasites and eggs he had never seen this before - Cortana said what is going on here !. I have no idea Mc said
He was nerwous that they will se him he knew he didn’t had a Chance
To fight them all. Suddenly a har ray of yellow beam came from the woods like a spartan laser but with yellow collor. And it killed all four Graveminds in one hit they melted away it was like a huge beam from no were. Cortana said we need to go there and find out what it is right now chef - ok - hurry spartan!. He run like he never run before throw the big dark woods and Buches and alot more stuffs then fall down he didn’t see were he run he falled down to the mud.

Working on Chapter 2  Prophet of Objection 

sorry for grammar ad spelling misstake  

Macrotus:

Chapter 1

The ship crash landed in a Depp djungel it was dark and rainy and the grund was dirty around the ship u Could see some woods Along the road in front of the ship Cortana wached carefuly around and woundering were they was she tryed to Wake Cheif cotrana said
- cheif Wake upp i need you !
Cheif Walked out from the Capsel he was Cainda dissy beacuse he had sleep in like 4 month before the landing he was tryning to find some weapons and grenades if he needed it he took Cortana back into his head. Then master cheif said were are we ?. I don’t know but we should walk upp to the hill and se were we are Cortana said.
-ok said cheif lets walk When he Walker upp from the hill he heard som strange sound in the Busches it was fammiliar sound Cortana said what is it ? Hmm notning he said finally they were upp then he saw something crazy and horror likely thing. It was the flood it were 4 Graveminds donw the cliff and alots of parasites and eggs he had never seen this before - Cortana said what is going on here !. I have no idea Mc said
He was nerwous that they will se him he knew he didn’t had a Chance
To fight them all. Suddenly a har ray of yellow beam came from the woods like a spartan laser but with yellow collor. And it killed all four Graveminds in one hit they melted away it was like a huge beam from no were. Cortana said we need to go there and find out what it is right now chef - ok - hurry spartan!. He run like he never run before throw the big dark woods and Buches and alot more stuffs then fall down he didn’t see were he run he falled down to the mud.

Working on Chapter 2  Prophet of Objection 

sorry for grammar ad spelling misstake  

Other than spelling and basic grammar mistakes, it's pretty good. Here's some grammar help.

Instead of, for example, where are we asked the master chief, try "Where are we?" asked the Master Chief.

And full stops at the end of sentences, etc.

Other than all that, this is rather interesting. Keep going.

The persona is great... but the spelling and gramma as several others have pointed out, not so good.

But don't give up, keep coming with the chapters my friend and I wish you the best of luck and my good wishes.