The Story of Sensieyum(Fan Fic)

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  •  04-13-2008, 7:23 PM 206294

    The Story of Sensieyum(Fan Fic)

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                     "Charge!" Belched the Lead Unggoy. The ground trembled before the Unggoy force. Thousands moved toward the Small stronghold.

         Sensieyum heard screams from the front of the column. Small blurbs were heard. Many a yellow flashes blurred above. He heard a small whistling screech, it slowly got louder. He looked up, he never seen it before, little black plops with a long narrow gray tale behind them. Sensieyum stopped and thought, but his thought was interrupted  when several fellow Unggoy bumped  into him causing him to hit the dirt losing his weapon.  He slowly tried  to  get up,  another Unggoy knocked into him. By coincidence it was his best friend, Ruskoss.

       "Well what do you know!" Exclaimed Sensieyum,

       "What a pleasant surprise!" Shouted Ruskoss.

       "I believe I have lost my firearm" Said Sensieyum, "Do you mind to help me fin......"
     

        "Sure" Interrupted  Ruskoss " Found i...."

        The rumble of the army stopped, a extremely loud screech soon replaced it.

         "What is that?" Asked a nearby grunt.

         " I don't kno....."

          An explosion from what seemed like nowhere blew nearly 15 grunts off there feet, All with severe or minor shrapnel wounds. But that was the best of it. Inside the blast crater lay mangled bodies, body parts scattered onto the advancing army. And another explosion shook the ground. Except this one was too close. A Fragment sliced through 3 Grunts and hit Ruskoss in his right leg.

        "Ahhhhhhhhhhh!!" Screamed Ruskoss.

        "I gotcha!", Sensieyum cried while lifting Ruskoss up and heading towards the Forest. The explosions were many. Sensieyum dared not to look back. For reason was the carnage. But not looking back didn't help at all. A larger explosion shook the ground and rustled the trees, a dead grunt(or so he thought) landed right in front of him. He quickly ignored it and kept on running. When he got to the tree line he looked back. He burst into tears. The Humans artillery were ripping them to shreds. Many Unggoy were still living. But he feared not to much longer, the already deadly artillery was reinforced with the sound of popping and crackling.

       Sensieyum never heard that sound before. Before he could ask, Ruskoss blurted

       "Human small arms, I believe there called rifles, and  submachine guns. Our brethren will not survive. The Humans are bringing Armor."

        Both of them looked to the east where the Elite commander said

        "They will be crazy too attack from the east, Our banshees will rip them  to Oblivion!"

        A large vehicle came rolling over the ridge, a so called 'Machine gun' was placed in front of what looked like a cockpit,  and above that a long barrel extended until it ended near the front of the vehicle. A blur of fire was seen from it. The shell smashed in the Army, causing the same amount of damage as the artillery. The machine gun also opened fire, Unggoy closest were either exploded or cut down.

        Sensieyum estimated that already in the few seconds of the thing being seen hundreds of grunts were already dead. Several fuel rod bolts soared through the air. And smashed into the tank. Green explosions engulfed it. Both Sensieyum and Ruskoss silently cheered, but it was soon ended when the vehicle rolled out of the smoke with no damage  taken.

       Unggoy and parts of them were flying everywhere, the Grunt army retreated, the retreat was successful until a few seconds later. A Dozen more of the vehicles came. Within minutes none of the Unngoy were alive. Bodies were scattered every where, the human army ran  over the battle field in numbers too great to count. Hours passed, The two grunts reached a cave. And hid inside it for the night.

                                                                                      Chapter 1                                         

                 A loud bang shook the ground, it woke both Sensieyum and Ruskoss.  

       "What was that?" Asked Sensieyum.

       "A humans flare." Answered Ruskoss,"I think its called a frag grenade."

       "How do you know so much about humans?" Questioned Sensieyum.

       "I studied them back  long ago. I know what your going to ask, 'Where?' At a secret place in High Charity. I was part of the Intelligence team for the prophets. Can't tell ya where, can't remember."

        'Sure' thought Sensieyum.

       "I can name about every human weapon. From Shiva - Class Nuke to the M7 Caseless Submachine Gun."

    Sensieyum was amazed, all he knew was 'machine gun'. And he barely knew what that was. 

     "Enemy at 2 o'clock! ..........gr..... ade out!! Fire in ............ol............"  coughed out a communicator.

        "What was that!" Growled Sensieyum, his expression was fowl.

        "Nothing!!! I dont know!! I.... it.... Nothing at all!!!!" returned Ruskoss with a stricken face.

       "Ruskoss!!...come in........w.e...need  a sit rep on your army...... this is Ad........ Hood. Do you c..py?" Barked the communicator.

       "Heretic!!!!!!!!!!" Bellowed Sensieyum. "You betrayed the prophets!!!" he started to sprint at Ruskoss.

        "Back up!!!!"  Cried Ruskoss. Wielding a plasma pistol.

                                                                     Sorry guys, got to finish it later. :)
     

     



     

        
     

       
     


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  •  04-13-2008, 7:28 PM 206305 in reply to 206294

    Re: The Story of Sensieyum(Fan Fic)

    Wow that was realy good! When will we get a taste of Chapter 1?
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:32 PM 206309 in reply to 206305

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    I don't know. I'm still thinking out the plot.

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  •  04-13-2008, 7:33 PM 206313 in reply to 206305

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    I liked it but it felt too much like it was from a human point of view...But i really liked it other wise.
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:35 PM 206317 in reply to 206313

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    Yeah I suppose I agree with the Don on this one oh and Don how do u like my new sig/name? ^_^
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:35 PM 206318 in reply to 206313

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    Yeah I know. But what else am I supposed to say in a way that you know what the thing is? (That  might  be  confusing  to some) If I thought like a Grunt I would put it in there words. LOL Imagine that.

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  •  04-13-2008, 7:37 PM 206319 in reply to 206318

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    Epic

     



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  •  04-13-2008, 7:38 PM 206320 in reply to 206318

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    .Joker...lol thats actually pretty nice.

    Fisher...Well dont say Army,dopn'y use the real words.If it was the first time youd seen a rifle what would you call it?

    Not Boomstick please.Lol


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  •  04-13-2008, 7:40 PM 206322 in reply to 206320

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    Don Corleone:

    .Joker...lol thats actually pretty nice.

    Fisher...Well dont say Army,dopn'y use the real words.If it was the first time youd seen a rifle what would you call it?

    Not Boomstick please.Lol

    Well in Chapter one I was going to explain how Ruskoss knew.  


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  •  04-13-2008, 7:41 PM 206323 in reply to 206320

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    I would call it a "A plasma rifle that doesnt fire plasma but insteads fire combustoin powered projectiles.....gun"
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:42 PM 206324 in reply to 206322

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    Well...hmmm...use enemy forces.Also use dont use exact numbers.The group to his left exploded into flames vs. The 15 grunts to his left exploded into flames.
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:43 PM 206325 in reply to 206323

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    Mr. Magorium:
    I would call it a "A plasma rifle that doesnt fire plasma but insteads fire combustoin powered projectiles.....gun"

    LOL. wow, i would call it "THAT THING THAT THEY USE AS A WEAPON"  lol


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  •  04-13-2008, 7:45 PM 206328 in reply to 206325

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    Why not...dang this is hard...eh ask other riters.
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:50 PM 206335 in reply to 206328

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    LOL
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  •  04-13-2008, 7:50 PM 206336 in reply to 206328

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    But not me because I cant even dedide what to writ in my first chapter for my fanfic.
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