The First Halo: An ODST's tale

Last post 04-18-2008, 10:35 PM by Arby: Soldato for the Corleone's. 23 replies.
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  •  04-11-2008, 7:35 PM 204674

    The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    Corporal John Smith awoke in the smoldering rubble that was his Human Entry Vehicle... Have to get command to put in a second back up chute...He keyed his Com

    "This is Crp. John Smith" he paused "Anyone read me" one heart beat "Anyone there" another heart beat. He let the mic key button go...static.John went and back and grabed what gear had surrvived the crash. He picked up his sniper, a bag of ammo, some rations, and an assult rifle. Smith picked a direction, named it east and began using what ground-pounders always use, their feet

     

    ok this is just a small tid bit for now...if you ain't gueessed by now hes a lone ODST from the pillar of Autum


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  •  04-11-2008, 7:47 PM 204687 in reply to 204674

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    ooooooooooooo... do more and i'll put it in the terminal.  or is this gunna be the thread for your fic?
    Words
    Possession of the beggar and the king
    Received by all and we're sentenced to a life with
    Obsession of the genius and the fool
    Find them you can use them
    Say them you can hear them
    Write them you can read them
    Love them fear them
  •  04-11-2008, 7:51 PM 204692 in reply to 204687

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    terminal is fine
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  •  04-11-2008, 7:55 PM 204698 in reply to 204692

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    k, it's been added.  Btw, vry good so far!
    Words
    Possession of the beggar and the king
    Received by all and we're sentenced to a life with
    Obsession of the genius and the fool
    Find them you can use them
    Say them you can hear them
    Write them you can read them
    Love them fear them
  •  04-11-2008, 8:32 PM 204735 in reply to 204692

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    cool i like the aribiters best friends fan fics


    Lethe:


    What if we had a game where 2 different sides of units engaged each other in some form of military conflict?

    That'd be awesome.


    what if Halo Wars had that?
  •  04-11-2008, 9:28 PM 204790 in reply to 204735

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    thx...

    next chp soon


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  •  04-11-2008, 10:09 PM 204859 in reply to 204790

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    so, is the story based on this guy who is alone on a dsolate ringworld, surviving and yadda yadda yadda?

    well, that...um...paragraph was good; can't wait for the next chapter


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  •  04-11-2008, 10:11 PM 204862 in reply to 204859

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    Yea how did ya guess???
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  •  04-11-2008, 10:51 PM 204949 in reply to 204674

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    John came over a small rise and saw an amazing spectacle.To him at least...Probobly not for the five Grunts and Elite in the valley.He picked up his Sniper and sighted on the Elites head.

    "Goodbye" hu muttered the bullet flew stright and true.A purple black blood plum apeared, as the Elites head dissapered in the plum.Thick blood rained down on the Grunts.One jumped in a Ghost and hit the boost...he however ran over his commrades as well.The Dimayed Grunt jumped out and ran to their dead bodys.

    "They were my friends" John heard the Grunt cry mornfully

    "Too bad" John said and shot him in the head.

    Ok i know its short but im getting tired


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  •  04-11-2008, 11:14 PM 204995 in reply to 204949

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    and convieniently his name is John?

    well its short...real short...but good anyeays

    the grunts talking really made it more life like/ relateble to the games...good job


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  •  04-12-2008, 2:53 PM 205459 in reply to 204949

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    The day truged on and John had six close calls with Covenant forces. He had gone and climbed a small mountian to gain an hight advantage. When he got to the top he saw a collomn of Warthogs and Scorpins headed towords two small hills,with a third one behind it.Smith tryed his mike...static still. So John decided to wait the fight out and do what he could to help. The fight progressed on and on eventualy the column was on its way again. However John stayed in the area...wanting to take a crack at the Covies. He sighted down his scope on one of the Banshees circling over an area John had seen a sniper shot come from eairlier.

    "Lets see if we can save someones life today"...He waited form the next heart beat...Held his breath...CRACK. the shot went straight through the crack in the front of the banshee. "OHH-RAA" He steady his rifle again...Crack...Crack...Crack. Three shots three Bansee's down. John started to climb down the Mountain to go see who he had just saved. 


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    wanna see somthing funny read through the first two pages of this thread http://halowars.com/forums/thread/318933.aspx
  •  04-12-2008, 2:57 PM 205462 in reply to 205459

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    i like it.
    Words
    Possession of the beggar and the king
    Received by all and we're sentenced to a life with
    Obsession of the genius and the fool
    Find them you can use them
    Say them you can hear them
    Write them you can read them
    Love them fear them
  •  04-12-2008, 2:57 PM 205463 in reply to 205459

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    Ooohhh...nice
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  •  04-12-2008, 3:00 PM 205465 in reply to 205463

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    anyone know the name of who he just saved?
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  •  04-12-2008, 3:01 PM 205466 in reply to 205465

    Re: The First Halo: An ODST's tale

    uhhhhhhh.... linda?
    Words
    Possession of the beggar and the king
    Received by all and we're sentenced to a life with
    Obsession of the genius and the fool
    Find them you can use them
    Say them you can hear them
    Write them you can read them
    Love them fear them
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