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  •  04-03-2008, 6:29 PM 199199

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    Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    Wanted by some members of these threads. I present to you Halostarwarcraft!

                                                                                    Prolougue

    "Ah, a day on beach is nive every once in awhile. I mean after John dissipeared I've been gettin' kinda lonely." Jim Raynor says. Then he takes a gulp of beer and continues to rest on a sunny beach. Waiters are walking around taking orders for the customers.

    " Hello, I'm Sophia. I will be your waitress for today. Would you like anything sir?" a waitress greeted as she took out her notebook and pen.

    " Nothing much. Can you refill my beer, get the local newspaper, and a nice fish sandwich." Jim replied. The waitress wrote down what Jim wanted and went to fetch it. He stared into the sky and waited for the waitress to return.

    The waitress returned moments later and said," As you wanted, the newspaper, the sandwich, and a nice fresh beer." She handed him the stuff and left to take orders from other customers. Jim read the paper,"Murlocs enter war with Zerg. Empire is threating to enter the war on the Zerg side if war continues."

    "Whaat! Those clones will be infected within a matter of seconds." Jim yelled. Then he saw a large Covenant crusier headinbg strait toward the surface. " Oh god," Jim exclaimed and ran to get his M5 Battlerifle.

     

    Episode 1 has been created. Each episode is revised and fixed and then added here.

     

                                     Episode 1                               

                                 

    Chapter 1

           Jim ran to his weapon and took out his keys. He jumps into the warthog and yells," The Covenant are coming, the Covenant are coming .Jim shoves the keys into the ignition plug. The car comes to life with a roar and Jim punches down on the Gas petal with his foot shooting the warthog forward.

    "Jim,Jim!" a marine yells to catch Jim's attention," stop the car. Let us on." Jim does a sharp brake and comes out.

    "Ok, all of you get in.. The Covenant are coming and we got no time to get outta here!" Jim explains. He and the marines get into the warthog. Jim continues zooming down the streets. The noise of a ghost’s zoom surprises him. The ghost flies in and begin to fire." Hold on something!" Jim warns. He bumps the ghost, but the ghost continues. Then Jim brakes the car and jumps out. He runs toward nearby apartment." Come on! That ghost is coming back.

    "Ok sir," a marine says and they run into the apartment.

    “Marines stay here." Jim orders. Jim continues down a hallway to see that Terran marines are running down the stairs.

    “Jim, we need upstairs," one says. Jim nods and heads upstairs.

    Chapter 2

            Jim begins to walk upstairs. Pictures decorate the stairs. He keeps walking until he sees a Terran Ghost walk out.

    “Jim, Lt. Howe needs ya in here;" the Terran Ghost says and directs Jim into a door. Jim walks in and sees a lieutenant staring out of the window.

    “Hello, Jim. The Covenant has raided the city. It seems that some Jedi and an orc are hidden in the waterways of this city. We need your help to fight them. Take Emmy, the Ghost outside. He'll escort you to the rendezvous point with Delta squad," he directs.

    " Ok sir," Jim says and walks out the door." So Emmy, you gonna take me to join Delta squad,?"

    " Yup, if you follow me sir, we should make it to the Warthog." Emmy says and they begin to walk down the stairs. Jim is still exhausted from blowing up those Covenant Ghosts.They make it to the bottom within a minute. They walk out the door and see 2 Terran Marines guarding the entrance.

    " I'm driving," Jim states and climbs into the Warthog. Jim turns the key and a roar of exhaust comes from the engine. Jim begins to accelerate down the road and takes a left turn." So where is point Emmy?"

    Emmy replied and pointed in the direction," Take a left here, then keep going straight until you see a large UNSC flag. Take a right there and we should be where Delta squad is." Jim takes the left and speeds up down the next road. He brakes, but the brakes fail to stop the car. Jim swerves and turns trying to lose speed.Suddenly the car crashes into the big metal pole and the flag comes bellowing down. Then a pandemonium caused from a large Mutalisk nearby. Emmy was injured and Jim was stuck.

     

    Episode 2

    Chapter 1

                     Jim was left stuck in the crashed car.” Emmy, Emmy, I going to get help!" he told Emmy. Grabbing his combat knife ripped his safety belt and plummeted to the floor. He helped himself up and looked around.

    "rrrrrrrragh" the Mutalisk roared and came in.It flies in and looks around. Jim runs behind the car and grabs his battle rifle.

    “K, Emmy, give me your C-10 rifle." Jim says. Emmy quickly gives the rifle to him. Jim runs out to get the Mutalisk's attention.

    "rrragh" it roars again and flies toward Jim. Jim then sprints behind it. He fires the rifle into the back of the Mutalisk.

    "rrrrrr..aaaa..." it roars in pain. It shoots a glave worm at Jim. Jim does a quick action roll and runs behind the Mutalisk. He fires once more into the back of the Mutalisk. "rrrrrruuuu," another roar from the Mutalisk shows it is in extreme pain. Emmy is able to pick up his pistol and begin firing. The Mutalisk begins to attack Emmy. With one quick shot Emmy is able to kill the Mutalisk right before it was about to shoot another glave worm.
    Jim runs to Emmy.

    “Are you ok?" Jim says and looks at Emmy's wound. Jim rips open the seat belt with his knife. He gives Emmy his C-10 rifle back and picks up his laser gun. He puts the laser gun in his pocket and picks up Emmy. Jim begins to carry Emmy down the road.

    Chapter 2

                Jim continued to walk down the road with Emmy on his back. The rendezvous point was near. After five minutes he arrived and saw an amazing sight. Thousands of clone troopers descended from large metal cruisers. Smoke filled the air as Sparrow Hawks landed and lifted the dust.

    Then he walked toward a large bunker. As he walked in he saw a red clone trooper walk out and yell," Zerg and Covenant, all marines and clone troopers are to report at their battle position." After the clone trooper left a large siren went on a red lights flashed over the landscape. Many Terran marines began to walk out and Jim could hear gunshots everywhere.

    "Hello, anyone here? I have a wounded. Hello!" Jim said as he began to walk down a spiral staircase carefully so he did not drop Emmy. He arrived at a  room filled with holographic maps. He looked around and also saw rifles to his side.

    "Hello Jim Raynor," said a man who walked in from a room to the side," we've been waiting for you."

    "Who are you," Jim asks.

    "I’m the Supreme Commander of the Fleet of Colomubus;" said the man,” My name is Tony Levet." He continued," Your going with 10 other clone troopers in a transport ship to pick up Miranda Keyes and take her to a battle cruiser called the Fallen Angel. The transport ship is waiting for you outside."

    "Thanks.. I guess," Jim said and began to walk out.

    "Wait, take this" Tony said and threw Jim a lightsaber.
     

     

     

     

     



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  •  04-03-2008, 6:32 PM 199203 in reply to 199199

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    WOOT!Not bad .I don't know much about the starwars craft part though:(

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  •  04-03-2008, 7:25 PM 199271 in reply to 199199

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    Oh... this might be interesting...

  •  04-03-2008, 8:19 PM 199328 in reply to 199271

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    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

     good right?

                                                                  Chapter 1

           Jim ran to his weapon and took out his keys. He jumps into the warthog and yells," The Covenant are coming, the Covenant are coming .Jim shoves the keys into the ignition plug. The car comes to life with a roar and Jim punches down on the Gas petal with his foot shooting the warthog forward.

    "Jim,Jim!" a marine yells to catch Jim's attention," stop the car. Let us on." Jim does a sharp brake and comes out.

    "Ok, get in. All of you. The Covenant are coming and we got no time to get outta here!" Jim explains. He and the marines get into the warthog. Jim continues zooming down the streets. The overhearing of a ghost surprise him. The ghost flys in and begin to fire." Hold on something!" Jim warns. He bumps the ghost, but the ghost continues. Then Jim brakes the car and jumps out. He runs toward nearby apartment." Come on! That ghost is coming back.

    "ok sir," a marine says and they run into the apartment.

    " Marines stay here." Jim orders.Jim continues down a hallway to see that Terran marines are running down the stairs.

    " Jim, we need upstairs," one says. Jim nods and heads upstairs.
     


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  •  04-03-2008, 8:22 PM 199330 in reply to 199328

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    Sweet, but it is a little short.
  •  04-04-2008, 8:39 PM 199868 in reply to 199330

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    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    it's hard to think of all these aspects.So the Chapters will be combined into episodes.

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  •  04-04-2008, 9:51 PM 199946 in reply to 199868

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    not much to work with for the clones anles there cammandos
  •  04-04-2008, 10:46 PM 200074 in reply to 199328

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    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    clones are coming soon,

                                                                   Chapter 2

            Jim begins to walk upstairs. Pictures decorate the stairs. He keeps walking until he sees a Terran Ghost walk out.

    " Jim, Lt. Hower needs ya in here," the Terran Ghost says and directs Jim into a door. Jim walks in and sees a lieutenant staring out of the window.

    " Hello, Jim. The Covenant has raided the city. It seems that some Jedi and an orc are hidden in the waterways of this city. We need your help to fight them. Take Emmy, the Ghost outside. He'll escort you to the rendezvous point with Delta squad," he directs.

    " Ok sir," Jim says and walks out the door." So Emmy, you gonna take me to join Delta squad,?"

    " Yup, if you follow me sir, we should make it to the Warthog." Emmy says and they begin to walk down the stairs. Jim is still exhausted from blowing up those Covenant Ghosts.They make it to the bottom within a minute. They walk out the door and see 2 Terran Marines guarding the entrance.

    " I'm driving," Jim states and climbs into the Warthog. Jim turns the key and a roar of exhaust comes from the engine. Jim begins to accelerate down the road and takes a left turn." So where is point Emmy?"

    Emmy replied and pointed in the direction," Take a left here, then keep going straight until you see a large UNSC flag. Take a right there and we should be where Delta squad is." Jim takes the left and speeds up down the next road. He brakes, but the brakes fail to stop the car. Jim swerves and turns trying to lose speed.Suddenly the car crashes into the big metal pole and the flag comes bellowing down. Then a pandemonium caused from a large Mutalisk nearby. Emmy was injured and Jim was stuck. What would they do (Cliff hanger)

     

     


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  •  04-04-2008, 11:08 PM 200103 in reply to 200074

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    From the title I can already tell this is something like my story "Le Random."

    No you cannot see it, unless you're emo and want to be scarred for life.


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  •  04-04-2008, 11:22 PM 200126 in reply to 200103

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    I'm emo and i'm already scarred for life..unless this is one of those emo jokes or something
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  •  04-05-2008, 1:31 AM 200156 in reply to 199328

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    zaki90:

     good right?

                                                                  Chapter 1

           Jim ran to his weapon and took out his keys. He jumps into the warthog and yells," The Covenant are coming, the Covenant are coming (lol, just like Paul Revere).Jim shoves the keys into the ignition plug. The car comes to life ( not really) with a roar and Jim punches down on the Gas petal with his foot shooting the warthog forward.

    "Jim,Jim!" a marine yells to catch Jim's attention," stop the car. Let us on." Jim does a sharp brake and comes out.

    "Ok, get in. All of you. The Covenant are coming and we got no time to get outta here!" Jim explains. He and the marines get into the warthog. Jim continues zooming down the streets. The overhearing of a ghost surprise him. The ghost flys in and begin to fire." Hold on something!" Jim warns. He bumps the ghost, but the ghost continues. Then Jim brakes the car and jumps out. He runs toward nearby apartment." Come on! That ghost is coming back.

    "ok sir," a marine says and they run into the apartment.

    " Marines stay here." Jim orders.Jim continues down a hallway to see that Terran marines are running down the stairs.

    " Jim, we need upstairs," one says. Jim nods and heads upstairs.
     

    what have all these fan fics come to? you dont put parentheses then type (lol just like paul revere) in a story!! look at the old fanfics like spartan greys and see how he wrote.
    if only i knew how to put a picture here i would.
  •  04-05-2008, 10:30 AM 200213 in reply to 200156

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    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    Episode 1 has been created. I write everything here.Then revise it in Word. Then combine it and place it in.

     

                                                                            Chapter 1

                     Jim was left stuck in the crashed car."Emmy, Emmy, I going to get help!" he told Emmy. Grabbing his combat knife ripped his safety belt and plummeted to the floor.He helped himself up and looked around.

    "rrrrrrrragh" the Mutalisk roared and came in. He fly in and looks around. Jim runs behind the car and grabs his battle rifle.

    " k, Emmy, give me your C-10 rifle." Jim says. Emmy quickly gives the rifle to him. Jim runs out to get the Mutalisk's attention.

    "rrragh" it roars again and flies toward Jim. Jim then sprints behind it. He fires the rifle into the back of the Mutalisk.

    "rrrrrr..aaaa..." it roars in pain. It shoots a glave worm at Jim. Jim does a quick action roll and runs behind the Mutalisk. He fires once more into the back of the Mutalisk. "rrrrrruuuu," another roar from the Mutalisk shows it is in extreme pain. Emmy is able to pick up his pistol and begin firing. The Mutalisk begins to attack Emmy. With one quick shot Emmy is able to kill the Mutalisk right before it was about to shoot another glave worm.
    Jim runs to Emmy.

    " Are you ok?" Jim says and looks at Emmy's wound. Jim rips open the seat belt with his knife. He gives Emmy his C-10 rifle back and picks up his laser gun. He puts the laser gun in his pocket and picks up Emmy. Jim begins to carry Emmy down the road.
     


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  •  04-05-2008, 11:43 AM 200237 in reply to 200213

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    This is pretty good its very interesting but add somemore Clone trooper action

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  •  04-05-2008, 12:02 PM 200246 in reply to 200237

    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    Why would there be any star wars in it? Isn't it Halo Starcraft Warcraft? :/

     Also, did you mean a C-10 rifle when you wrote C-4?
     



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  •  04-05-2008, 12:20 PM 200249 in reply to 200246

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    Re: Halostarwarcraft (fanfic)

    hey, i don't want to spoil it but yes starwars is next.

    sadly i miss read it and it is the C-10 canister rifle. I'm changing it right now 


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