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  •  04-01-2008, 8:35 PM 198037

    {FF}Relevance{FF}

    Ok, I had an idea for a fan-fic that people should like. Any one can post. I will put up something to post about and then you post ideas to continue the story. Just post in the area I mention/need and there should be a release of the newest part every weekend.

    (First part to come in next post)
      Parts done:

    Part 1: done

    Part 2: done

    Part 3: done

    Part 4: done

    Part 5: done

    Part 6: done

    Relevance: done

    see: Survival on HWZ some time in June



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    Relevance: by Omega 505
  •  04-01-2008, 8:36 PM 198039 in reply to 198037

    Re:{FF}Relevance{FF}

                 

    Recording:

    Pvt. R. Hunter

    Military date,

    19/02/2108

    Recon:

     

    Hunter hunched in the passenger seat of the LRV “Warthog.” The combat jeep bounced along the rough dirt road around the base on Alpha IV.

     

                “Why the hell do we always end up with recon? Does High Com have a grudge against us or something?” The Pvt.’s voice was agitated, he obviously didn’t like recon.

     

                “I don’t know, but someone sure has something against the three of us.” The older man in the driver’s seat sighed. “Why even have us out here? Isn’t this supposed to be some super secret base? There haven’t even been any sightings for months.”

     

                “Stow it marines, you know the C.O.s check those helmet tapes. You’re going to get us all court marshaled.” The tall man on the rear gun was a stuck up rules junkie.

     

                “Why don’t you all shut up, I think I heard something.” Hunter brought a pair of binoculars to his eyes. The forest glowed a bright green in the infrared light sent out by the goggles. Suddenly a bright light started to move towered them. “Oh my… every one out now!” All three men jumped from the jeep.

     

                A large, green orb exploded just in front of the jeep, sending it flying end over end into the trees. It finally settled upside down twenty feet away. There was no more complaining, only cries of terror. Hunter ran as fast as he could, but tripped before getting far. Something large and heavy rolled him over. The last thing he saw was a large, blue, metal foot coming down on his head.

     

                The war had come…

     

    Recording terminated

    Reason unknown ?KIA?

    Video transmitted to closest UNSC vessel

    Target found

    File sent to: UNSC Frigate Relevance

     


    The Relevance

    Slipspace

    Classified Date

     

                Captain James A. Cane moved quickly down the corridors of the frigate Relevance. His graying hair was un-kept and his uniform buttoned awkwardly. The Covenant had attacked Alpha IV, a UNSC base that had been undiscovered until now. Relevance had been called on station and her crew were quickly defrosted.

     

                The large metal doors to the bridge slide noiselessly open.

               

                “Good morning captain,” the disembodied female voice echoed in the large empty bridge.

     

                “Hello Salina,” Cane slid off his voice to annoy her, she never showed it, but it did. “So inform me why we were pulled off leave? I’ve got men who haven’t been on land for months.” The Relevance had been off duty for three days, then this?

     

                “Level nine security breach, Alpha IV has been taken.” A lean figure appeared on the holographic display board next to the command terminal. “Relevance and her crew are to report there immediately and tally damages.”

     

                Cane shook his head, “Why, It’s the same thing every time, they attack, lose on the ground and then glass the *** planet from space. What’s different this time?”

               

                “The Circumstances of the base on Alpha IV merits immediate reconnaissance. They had a break through a few days before the attack. They broke the codes on the forerunner stone found near the ruins there. They’re coordinates, we think to a planet of infinite knowledge of the forerunners. We obviously can not let this fall into Covenant hands.”

     

                “Yes, but what does that have to do with us?” His crew was on their way back for a months leave on Reach in the Epsilon Eridanus system, not the best place to go, but leave was leave. Reach, being the most advanced navel base the UNSC has, still had some of the best clubs and hotels Cane had seen in a long time.

     

                “The Relevance is to retrieve the artifact and be the first to that world. An extension bonus will be added to all crew pay, and… Captain, are you even listening?” But Cane had long ago stopped listening to annoying glow of numbers. Instead he gaped out at a massive Covenant armada orbiting Alpha IV.

     

                “How many ships do they have?”

               

                “But Captain…”

     

                “HOW MANY SHIPS?!” Cane recomposed him self after the sudden outburst.

     

                “Approximately, five hundred ships sir, mostly battleships, two carrier ships are also present.”

     

                “Five hundred?” Cane gasped, his breath escaped his as he leaned over onto the command terminal. “Have they seen us?”

     

                “No, we are well out of their scanning range. Strange, there seems to be a concentration of vessels around the first moon. Analyzing, there is a large unidentified Covenant ship, if I had to guess, a command vessel. Based off its size and its visible hangers, the new approximant ship count is one thousand ships total.” Cane nearly fell over, now there were a thousand ships?”

     

                “No way am I putting this ship and her crew into that, set a course far away from here, now.” Cane gripped the railing, veins visible in his fists.

     

                “Negative captain, direct orders state that we must retrieve that artifact, at all cost, crew is expendable.”

     

                “Screw orders, I will not risk my ship because of some rock that ONI wants. Turn this ship around and get us out of here before they see us.”

     

                “Can not comply, moving ship to low orbit on the dark side of the planet for deployment.” Salina seemed to flinch as the ship shuddered slowly forward. Cane knew that no amount of arguing would break the code controlling the AI’s actions. They were locked in for the long one, and god it was going to be long.

     

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

     

    The Assault on Alpha IV

    Alpha IV

    Dark side

    Pelican Drop Ship 113

    Two hours after landing

     

                Blake Conner clung close to the wall of the drop ship’s bay. Three hours ago he was enjoying the thought of leave and ‘real’ food. Capt. Cane said that this mission was more important then leave.

     

                “Pa-thetic, just another excuse from ONI to keep us fighting,” He sighed and loaded the MA5B on his lap. “I mean, come on, we fought this war already, it’s our turn for a break.” The soldiers around him nodded solemnly.

     

                “Just calm down and deal with it marine. We got called to duty, and we’re gonna answer that call. You didn’t join the Corps to ***, you joined to…”  The Sergeant was cut off as huge amounts of plasma filled the sky.

     

                The pilot called back, “You’d better close that hatch marine, we’ve made it to hell.” Conner slammed the hatch pad and the thick metal door slid into place. “***, they’re everywhere, get ready people, we’re comin in hot.” The pelican banked left as another salvo lit up the sky.

     

                The radio cracked to life, “We’ve lost Bravos two and three, captain, we need longswords, there are fighters everywhere down here.”

     

                Salina was the one who answered, ‘strange, the captain usually did’ Conner thought.

               

                “Affirmative, squadrons three, seven, and eleven have been dispatched to your position. Give’m hell marines”

     

                “Rodger that Salina, see ya when we get home. Leave the front door open”

     

                “How did they know we were coming?” Conner thought aloud.

     

                “Who cares, I just want to land” the marine next to him turned and threw-up as the pelican spun to avoid another salvo.

     

                “Marines, hold your lunch and listen up. We’ve been thrown into the fire boys. Most of us won’t make it back to Reach, but to those who do, beer’s on me.” The marines cheered the sarge on, they fully knew what was likely to happen, but enjoyed every minute they had left.

     

                “Oh my god, marines, buckle in. They’ve got a Scarab.” The pilot lifted the receiver for the radio, “This is Echo-113, we need assistance. Any longsword in the area, we’ve got a scarab and need immediate support.” She turned back to the marines, “Alright, I hope you’re held down, cause I’m going evasive.” The pilot watched as the Scarab’s head opened and charged with a bight green light, a beam burst from it’s head, hurling plasma at the oncoming pelican. Just then a missile burst into it’s side, tipping the massive vehicle over.

     

                The partially thrown beam continued toward it’s intended target. The pelican rolled left, but it was too late. The particle beam connected with the pelican’s right wing.

     

                “***, they clipped my wing, mayday, mayday, Echo-113 going down. Brace yourselves marines, it’s going to be a rough landing.” Conner watched in horror as black smoke billowed out of the pelican’s wing. It’s nose angled down, then it started to spin. Someone screamed. The world tilted and spun as the crippled bird plummeted towered the ground. Finally, darkness ensued, and it all seemed to stop, the world was silent.


    Taking Control

    On board the Relevance

    Dark side of Alpha IV

    Three hours after landing

     

                Salina turned her attention from the battle to the ship-to-ship monitoring system. “The probes are in place captain, they don’t know we’re here.”

     

                “If they don’t, they will soon, how’s the battle going?” Cane still was adverse to this whole thing, but orders were orders.

     

                “Not so good, we’ve lost dropships Bravos 114, 243, and 975, we’ve also lost Echos 113, 146, and 572. So far only three of the shuttles made it to the target, all longsword fighters reporting in. Ground teams’ requesting orbital bombardment, but that is un-suggestible, that would tell the Covenant that we’re here.” Salina didn’t like the odds of survival. She added the names of those onboard the lost ships to her list of MIA.

     

                “Unacceptable, they need those bombardments, we have done nothing but sit here, I’d rather tell them we’re here now then let them find us cowering here later.” He turned to one of the ensigns on the bridge. “Charge the capacitors, I want the MAC ready to fire ASAP.”

     

                She smiled, “Aye captain, capacitors charging, 20%, sir.”

     

                “This is illogical, you should not reveal the Relevance’s position until…”

     

                “Until what, every soldier is dead? I’m taking control of a bad situation, now either help the ensign with her calculations, or power down. We’ll get your *** rock, but we’ll do it my way.”

     

                “All right captain, but I will not let this ship fall into enemy hands, do you understand that?” The AI glared into Cane’s eyes, sending a chill down his spine. She referred to the self-destruct protocol, in place to ensure that any and all UNSC knowledge, including the location of Earth, would stay out of Covenant hands.

     

                “You just do what you have to, and I’ll do what I have to, then this mission will go a hell of a lot faster.”

     

                The ensign tuned and reported to the captain, “Capacitors charged sir, calculations complete. Relevance is ready to fire on your order, sir.”

     

                “Good work ensign, return to your duties as usual. Salina, stand by to fire.” Cane leaned in and stared out the forward view port. “Fire…”

     

     


    Surface of Alpha IV

    Wreck site of Echo-113

    Three and a half hours since landing

     

                Conner slowly opened his eyes. “Strange,” he laughed to himself, “Why is the pelican upside-down?” Images of the crash flashed through his mind. He groaned and levered himself up. Slowly, he made his way to the hatch of the transport.

     

                Strange sounds emanated from the clearing where the pelican ended up. Trees surrounded the wreck and encompassed the clearing. Conner froze when he saw them, Jackals. The bird like creatures bent thier long snout and hungrily bit at the body of a dead marine. Watching the creatures eat one of his friends made him sick, and he retreated into the cargo bay. In the back he found an M6D pistol.

     

                Conner moved to the mouth again and stood up, visible to the aliens. He raised the pistol and yelled, “Hey, Uglies.” The Jackals turned and screamed in their harsh tongue. He aimed the pistol at one of their heads, and pulled the trigger. The clip fell nosily to the floor, empty.

     

                “***,” he scurried quickly back into the bay, he could hear the creatures behind him. Their wrist energy shields sprang to life as they bounded towered the drop ship.

     

    Conner slid as he hit the floor and slammed the hatch bay controls. The huge door slammed down under it’s own weight. The Jackals ran into the closing doors and banged their metallic blue pistols on the small, narrow window.

     

    Conner moved farther back into the bay and tried to think of a way out of this. He found one. Near the cockpit was a control that blew the bolts holding the bay doors in place. Quickly he typed in the command to run the function. The huge door groaned and then fell over onto the unsuspecting Jackals.

     

    Conner moved out of the bay and inspected the clearing for more enemies. As he passed the smashed aliens, he felt obliged to ‘relieve’ them of their weapons. The oddly curved plasma pistols were nothing compared to an MA5B, but would have to do for now. He moved to the edge of the clearing and prepared himself for the long hike to base camp.

     

    Suddenly some thing moved in the corner of his eye, not really moved, but bent. The branches curved at odd angles, and then bent back. The attack came from the left, two camouflaged Elites charged him. They had him before he could raise his pistols. The familiar sense of peace came over him as the forest floor came up to meet his face.

     

    Bravo 243

    Wreck site

    20 miles from Base XI

    3 hours after landing

     

                Paul Archer stood looking out at the expanse of green. The pelican had dropped and caught in the branches of a huge oak-like tree. Linon and Jeffery hung out the hatch and peered down at the fifty-foot drop.

     

                Linon turned to the pilot, “Nice job, we’re not even landed yet.” He smirked and turned to Jeffery to receive a whack to the back of his head. “Ouch, what was that for?”

     

                Jeffery turned to him, “At least you’re alive, you could’ve been one of them.” The radio continued to pour names of the dead or missing.

     

                “Yah, well, at least they’re on the ground.” The pilot spun and landed a blow to Linon’s face. Bialy and Joshua jumped up to restrain the man.

     

                “You think they’re better off, why don’t you jump down an join’em, give us all a break,” the pilot spat venomously. Linon tried to swing, but was held back by Jeffrey and Archer.

     

                “Alright, break it up,” the Lt. cut in “look, we’re all in the same bucket o’water, so why don’t we just get along.” Just as the Lt. finished, the pelican began to tilt. An unbearable screeching filled the air as the drop ship dropped the extra fifty feet. The front of the vessel compacted, killing the copilot that was operating the radio. The pelican then tilted and fell over, settling on it’s bottom.

     

                “Uh, what happened,” Linon groaned as he crawled from the crumpled pelican. “Did I do that?”

     

                Lt. Haravez was the next one to get out, “Whoa, *** that was a great ride.”

     

                Joshua and Bialy clambered out after that, carrying the pilot between them. Archer and Jeffery pulled themselves out last. Archer coughed “Is everyone alright?”

     

                “No, we lost the copilot, and the radio’s dead. How are we doing on weapons Bialy?” Lt said, he sounded as resolved as usual.

     

                Bialy reported back, “Alright sir, all rifles accounted for, Linon lost his sidearm in the crash.”

     

                “Good, pack up marines, we’re moving out. Archer, which way is it to the rendezvous point from here?”

     

                “About one or two clicks northwest sir, though I’m not sure how many made it landside.” Archer was worried, if the battles had gone too wrong, then Relevance would have pulled out by now.

     

                “Doesn’t matter, our orders are still to make it to the rendezvous point ASAP, so line up and move out. The faster we get there, the sooner we get home.”

     

     

    Alpha IV

    1 click from wreck site

    4 hours since landing

     

                The marines moved solemnly through the forest. Every man there was ready to fire at a moments notice. The squad moved past wrecks of other ships, including Echo 113, the ship that had been shot down by the scarab. The marines prayed for those aboard and moved on. The forest seemed to close in around them. Suddenly the trees parted into a wide dirt road.

     

                “Hey, this is the road that runs straight to the base, if we follow this…” Linon was cut off by the Lt.

     

                “If we follow this, we walk straight into a Covenant trap, now keep marching.” After another hour of marching the marines came to the RP. Wreckage was strewn across the clearing, Warthogs stood melting near the tree line. A lone Scorpion tank sat decrepit in the center of the crater. The soldiers halted and stared at the carnage before them.

     

                “What the hell happened here!” the Lt.’s face turned red as the anger boiled up inside him. The marines stood silently and waited for the reality to sink in. This was no ordinary battle, this was a fight for survival. They decided to camp not too far away, in a grouping of fir trees. They would wait till night to move on.

     

     

     

    Capture the Flag

    Alpha IV

    RP

    ? hours since landing

     

                The marines awoke to the Lt, night had come over the sky and they were ready to move.

     

                “What the hell happened, the RP was supposed to have tanks, this shouldn’t have happened,” Linon mumbled.

     

                “Who cares, we need to get out of here,” LT said, “now the base has at least two pelicans if they haven’t been destroyed. We march there first.”

                “No, they need to pay for this, we’ve played this too easy, lets take the fight to them.” Linon started yelling. The marines around him all agreed. “So, do you want to rethink that order el-tee?”

     

                ‘Great’ Archer thought ‘now he’s on a power trip.’ The Lt shrugged, they were hot and wanted revenge, he understood.

     

                “Alright, fine, but we do this by the book. Bialy, Joshua, go check the RP for supplies, anything will work. Archer, you and Jeffrey go check the vehicles and see if any still work, especially that tank,” he motioned towered the Scorpion. “Linon, you’re with me and the pilot, we’re going to plan the insurgency. Alright marines, get moving.”

     

                The marines quickly moved out to their jobs. Even though the odds were against them, they were satisfied that they were actually doing something. Archer moved about the wrecked Warthogs and checked the ammunition and chain guns. As he moved past his third, one of the others hissed. The radio quickly came to life.

     

                “…repeat, all troops… back…. Relevance… base…” Archer played with the dials till he had a clear signal. Captain Cane, the Relevance was still here. “All forces, fall back, regroup and prepare for a final push.”

     

                Archer picked up the receiver. “Captain?”

     

                “Who is this?”

     

                “Pvt. Archer, me and my squad are at the failed RP. We have a plan to strike back against the Covenant.” Archer quickly retold the events since the crash.

     

                “Alright, you continue your plan, the 44th tank division will run distraction for you to get in. One more order marine, when you get to the base, go to research lab AF324 and get artifact IF-039. This is the key to success of our mission.”

     

                “Yes sir, we will get the artifact, Archer out.” Before the captain could say more, the radio died. Archer through the receiver back into the Warthog and moved on to the Scorpion. He would tell the Lt when he got done with the tank.

     

     

     

    Alpha IV

    Still located at the RP

    Dawn

     

                Lt Haravez stood with Linon and the pilot. The plan had been set.

     

                “So,” he said, “We attack tomorrow morning?”

     

                The pilot answered, “Yes, then the sun will be at our backs making it harder for them to see us. They will be blind for about…” He paused, looking around the forest. “Do you hear that?” he asked, a tone of fear in his voice. A groaning, creaking sound moved through the forest towered the group.

     

                Lt moved first, “Alright, everyone get to cover, now,” but before they could move the massive form broke the tree line.

     

                “Hey el-tee, look what we got” Archer yelled as he rode the back of the Scorpion tank into the clearing. “Finally got’er fixed up.”

     

                “Why you son-of-a… why didn’t you call ahead, we could have shot you,” Linon sneered, moving towered the tank. “See you didn’t fix everything,” he gestured towered the half-melted machine-gun on the front of the vehicle.

     

                “Hmm, you know I could just take it back and… return it for a new one,” Archer started laughing as he jumped off the tank, “I wonder if they’ll accept dirt as a down-payment?” The group enjoyed a moment’s relief to laugh and just have a good time. Tomorrow morning would start their plan.

     __________________________________________________

                                                    The Beginning of the End
    Relevance
    Night
    G-Deck, near hanger B-2

    Alarms blazed red as the sirens started. Cane just near ran down the corridor when Salina reported.

    “All men to battle stations, prepare to repel Covenant borders.” She repeated the message over with the same emotionless monotone. Cane continued to move down the walkway when the wall to his right started to glow.

    “***,” he swore as he ducked into the next hall. He unclipped his M6D pistol from his belt and leaned around the corner. Two Elites moved out of the pod and into the corridor. Cane blinked in surprise, the two creatures vanished. He turned left and right, trying to figure out where the aliens went.

    He spun and started to run to the hanger when a burning pain shot through his chest. He looked down to see the energy blade protruding from his stomach. He gasped as it was yanked out. Falling, he saw his attacker as peace fell over him. Slowly he slipped into a deep tiredness. The last thing he saw was the strange object a group of grunts hefted onto the deck plating. He finnaly fell out, and slipped away.
    ____________________________
    Surface of Alpha IV
    2 min later
    RP

    The marines watched in silent horror as Relevance fell to the planet. Fire light the openings of the ship as explosions moved towered the stern of the ship. The ship was mostly through the atomosphere when the fires made it to the reactors.

    The men shielded their eyes from the light of the nuclear reactors imploding the ship. Slowly the wreckage fell to the surface. The night was silent then.

     



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    Relevance, my fan-fic, check it out:
    Relevance: by Omega 505
  •  04-01-2008, 8:38 PM 198040 in reply to 198039

    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    -snip-

     

    edit: no longer excepting characters, instead now I would like suggestions for the plot please. 



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  •  04-02-2008, 7:00 PM 198581 in reply to 198040

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    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    name: Jack Hower

    age: 33

    rank: Sergeant

    Specialty: SpecOps

    personality: experienced, not many fears, cries when best friends are lost

    extra: This is for my fan-fic Fired Upon till Death, He went to SpecOps academy on Mars. He was sent to Harvest to learn more about the aliens ( Covenant). After his success, Jack was promoted to Sergeant. Then he was sent back to Mars for more training for 5 years until deployed back on the glassed Reach to find survivors and the ruins of the destroyed UNSC bases. He was placed on the Apple, a battle crusier in low orbit over Reach. After the Apple was destroyed, he was left with 3 marines on Reach. After many efforts to be evacuated he was left with no choice ,but to turn back around and go back to the Apple to retrieve the A.I. . The A.I. was retrieved back to UNSC, but Jack and another marine were captured and held captive on an Covenant ship.

    All I need is what happended on Harvest or the academy. 


     


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  •  04-02-2008, 7:17 PM 198591 in reply to 198039

    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    Dude a few tips the largest amount of Covenant ships seen at one time is like 400, two how in the heck will that ship get past the ships unless that ship is a prowler aint gonna happen. other than that pretty good

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  •  04-02-2008, 7:31 PM 198597 in reply to 198591

    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    they are still far out, not in scanners range, but visible (sry, but I don't know haw Salina knows the number :P) also, to the one character post, If you make a character, try to avoid ones you want to use later, you'll find out why no one heard of such a large fleet :D


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  •  04-02-2008, 8:43 PM 198689 in reply to 198597

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    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    I cant think of eny new caractores at the moment but i realy enjoied your fan-fic and i cant w8 to read more >_<


    "if we ever get home
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    Apple, Zippo, and Metronome
    that's what I'm gonna name them" Lyrics by: TTH
  •  04-02-2008, 8:45 PM 198692 in reply to 198689

    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    Oh My God, I don't get mucht feed back, thanks, I'll wait for some more ideas though, maybe release on Sunday


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  •  04-02-2008, 8:54 PM 198705 in reply to 198692

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    Re: The Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    Cool I can't w8 to read it ^_^


    "if we ever get home
    gonna have me three children
    Apple, Zippo, and Metronome
    that's what I'm gonna name them" Lyrics by: TTH
  •  04-07-2008, 4:03 PM 201785 in reply to 198037

    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    -snip-

     



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  •  04-07-2008, 4:26 PM 201810 in reply to 201785

    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    This is a pretty good fan-fic, keep it up

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  •  04-07-2008, 4:45 PM 201830 in reply to 201785

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    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    great i loved it keep up the good work! ^_^...i hope i can come up with something for the next one lol
    "if we ever get home
    gonna have me three children
    Apple, Zippo, and Metronome
    that's what I'm gonna name them" Lyrics by: TTH
  •  04-14-2008, 6:11 PM 206851 in reply to 198037

    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    -snip-


    (Soldato to the Corleone name)
    Relevance, my fan-fic, check it out:
    Relevance: by Omega 505
  •  04-14-2008, 6:27 PM 206877 in reply to 206851

    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    Omega, this is perhaps the best fan-fic on this site, it has the best writing and towers above everyone elses.  I'd rank my own talent at medium, whall yours at supreme, it may not have the best plot, but it definatly better written, fantastic work, keep it up!
  •  04-14-2008, 6:28 PM 206880 in reply to 206877

    Re: Relevance (fan-fic made to what people tell me, so post your ideas)

    That is the best comment I've ever gotten, FTW, thanks a lot (not sarcastic, seriously thanks). :D


    (Soldato to the Corleone name)
    Relevance, my fan-fic, check it out:
    Relevance: by Omega 505
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