please post if you like it or not and say if I should write a chapter 2.
here it is:
Chapter 1
1300 HOURS, OCTOBAR 26th, 2552 (MILITARY CALENDAR) /
SOL SYSTEM, UNSC FRIGATE: GENISIS, PLANET: EARTH
"Get me a targeting solution!" Captain Stenmor yelled. The bridge of the Genesis was small, almost every inch of the walls were covered in screens, except the main viewport. Fred was at Navigation, Dan was weapons station and Amy was with the COM and radar station, along with Frank. Once the covenant fleet dropped out of slip-space, the battle had become a dog fight. "Got it." Dan yelled. The back of the Genesis ignited red as its engines engaged and faced the frigate directly at a covenant battle cruiser. "MAC gun at 80%." Dan reported. The battle cruiser's turrets glowed red. "Sir, plasma signatures detected, Seraphs en-route from the targets hangers." Amy said.
"MAC gun ready to fire, sir." Dan said. The battle cruiser released its plasma torpedoes. "Fire!" Stenmor yelled. The Genesis vibrated as its MAC gun fired. The slug of depleted uranium screamed across the debris ridden field at ¼ the speed of light, along with 80 archer missiles. The battle cruisers engines burned blue, in the hopes to escape, the slug impacted, its shields shimmered and died, the following salvo of archer missiles blew it to pieces. Everyone on the bridge held their breath as the plasma dissipated. Amy said, more comely, "Plasma detonated prematurely two kilometers from Genesis, Seraphs detected immerging from the wreckage, along with the first attack group." The frigate's point defense guns were opening fire, sending seraphs, or what used to be seraphs, flying out of control.
"Bring us in-range to that assault carrier, charge MAC gun, keep reactors hot, ready to jump." Stenmor commanded. "Sir, the Kenmenshire is engaging." Frank said. "Get me on COM with them." Stenmor replied. "Yes sir, ****!" The carrier emitted a pulse laser, blowing a gaping hole in the Kenmenshire. Stenmor thought: ****. "Fire MAC gun and archer missile pods A-81 to C-20!" It looked as if the Genesis had blown itself up as 300 archer missiles and a MAC slug erupted out of her hull. The slug impacted, the shields shimmered, but that was all. "****!" The archer missiles exploded harmlessly against the shield, that is, the ones that weren't blown to pieces by the carrier's seraph fighters. The carrier engines burned blue and turned the craft away from earth. "Amy, mind telling me what the **** that carrier is doing?" Stenmor asked. Amy didn't respond. "I asked you a question." Stenmor looked where Amy was staring. **** He thought.
The carrier's port side had held fully-charged plasma turrets, which Amy could not detect, as there was so much radiation from the battle that not being able to see them was enough to conceal them. "Send a fleet wide message to concentrate fire on that carrier!" Stenmor yelled. "Yes sir." Frank replied. The ODPs turned and faced at the carrier. As the carrier released its plasma torpedoes, it was bombarded with multiple MAC slugs, the plasma swerved and dissipated into space. The entire area was engulfed in explosions, the smoke cleared and it was as if the carrier was never there.
Yells of satisfaction broke out on the bridge.
"Incoming message." Frank reported. "Accepted." Stenmor replied.
The main screen of the bridge blinked red twice, then displayed:
/TO: ALL UNSC FORCES
/FROM: UNSC EARTH COMMAND
/CODE: ALPHA_RED/DATE:_10/26/2552
/MESSAGE:
COVENANT HAS INVADED EARTH VIA PROPHET "REGRET'S" ASSAULT CARRIER. ALL UNSC GROUND FORCES ENGAGE. REQUESTING REINFORCEMENTS.