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Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

eliteempire — Wed, 21 Jan 2009 01:43:28 GMT

when might be the next chapter be up {sp}

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

A iranian peanut — Tue, 30 Dec 2008 22:54:23 GMT

nice teaser :P

ill finish my AI FF first and then i might decide to write a grunt one

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

Yam Head — Tue, 30 Dec 2008 22:51:54 GMT

Small teaser because im feeling generous. Blame Fallout 3........

"These elite's werent killed by flood or us. They were killed by plasma fire from a plasam rifle." Ethan said. Tyler knelt down next to him. "Could have been flood, I've seen them with plasma rifles" Tyler remarked.

Ethan shook his head, picking up his weapon.

"Still, no sign of a struggle, friendly fire perhaps?"

Tyler frowned, inspecting the bodies again. "Nah, to accurate for friendly fire."

Ethan didnt respond, he just turned around and walked towards the elevator that would take them to the index.

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

Yam Head — Tue, 30 Dec 2008 22:51:53 GMT

Ignore

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

Yam Head — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 18:17:34 GMT

My new FF is up. The Greater Truth. A tad bit shorter then what I usually write.

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

A iranian peanut — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 18:13:59 GMT

i could but i wasthinking more of like a side game for a grunt would be great :P i just remebered grunts also have active camo as well so people better watch out :D

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

Yam Head — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 17:57:27 GMT

Captain Cazador- Soldato:

Good chapter, Yam. That was a rather good fight scene.
There were a couple errors.
1. Remember, if you have 'he yelled' or 'he said' after a bit of speech, don't end it with a full stop, end it with a comma. For example:
Kill what ever survives," The officer yelled pointing at four marines.

Thanks, it wasnt the easiest bit I had to write.

I always seem to forget that. Ill have to write it down or something.

@Hammerfish

Go for it. Write a short story about your grunt Yip Yip.

Thanks to the rest who liked it as well.

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

eliteempire — Mon, 29 Dec 2008 02:06:21 GMT

the new chapter was great

i really liked how you made neco fight for hes honor couse thats one trait i love about elites

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

BIGEE — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 23:19:40 GMT

A iranian peanut:
i would love to have a side story a really short one of a grunt :P

You can just right it and let people see it.

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

A iranian peanut — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 23:10:08 GMT

i would love to have a side story a really short one of a grunt :P

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

Captain Cazador- Soldato — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 23:07:49 GMT

Good chapter, Yam. That was a rather good fight scene.

There were a couple errors.

1. Remember, if you have 'he yelled' or 'he said' after a bit of speech, don't end it with a full stop, end it with a comma. For example:
Kill what ever survives," The officer yelled pointing at four marines.

2. the elite to revile his head. revile should be reveal.

3. how well belt these elites really were... belt should be built.

Good work, keep it up.

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

BIGEE — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 22:55:35 GMT

A iranian peanut:
yh i like being a grunt the games have stereotyped them well

grunts are the best arn't they?

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

A iranian peanut — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 22:54:49 GMT

yh i like being a grunt the games have stereotyped them well

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

BIGEE — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 22:36:05 GMT

A iranian peanut:
woop woop woop woop :P hell yh watch ur back ill lob another plasma grenade and if im lucky maybe a fuel rod gun u better watch out im a small hunter :P

I almost died laughing at your post. hahaha funny GGOOOO YYYIIPPP-YYYYIIIPPP!!!!

Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

A iranian peanut — Sun, 28 Dec 2008 22:34:51 GMT

woop woop woop woop :P hell yh watch ur back ill lob another plasma grenade and if im lucky maybe a fuel rod gun u better watch out im a small hunter :P