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Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

blazingsage2 — Sat, 17 Jan 2009 05:45:22 GMT

Don needs to finish this story...So we need to keep this post alive so it reminds him....

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Spartan15 — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:59:01 GMT

shadowmaster117 aka, awsome117:
Don Vito Corleone:

i had to finish it.
I promised myself i would ^^
Goodnight yall

you're leaving again?
and we were just catching up...

He just came to create a stir lol.

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Felix — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:54:41 GMT

Don Vito Corleone:

i had to finish it.
I promised myself i would ^^
Goodnight yall

you're leaving again?

and we were just catching up...

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Spartan15 — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:54:06 GMT

Don Vito Corleone:

i had to finish it.
I promised myself i would ^^
Goodnight yall

Ok fair enough. Goodnight Don. :-)

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Don Vito Corleone — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:50:41 GMT

i had to finish it.

I promised myself i would ^^

Goodnight yall

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Spartan15 — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:49:29 GMT

Don Vito Corleone:

well i aint leavin this Mother fucker to die.
I promised i would finish it
no matter how long it would take.

But you left the forums for two months or more and it just died???

I'm just asking in general. What made you decide to come back and finish it?

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Captain Cazador- Soldato — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:49:06 GMT

Woah, very long time no see, Don. Nice to see you back.

And a rather good chapter to herald the continuation. The question is, what species were the two Elites referring to?

Only two errors that I saw.

1. You occasionally mixed up it's and its. Keep in mind that it's is short for it is.

2. the shape another of Sangheili. This should read: the shape of another Sangheili.

Once again, welcome back. And good work, keep it up.

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

XNate02 — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:45:38 GMT

it lives?

IT LIVES!!!!!

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Don Vito Corleone — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:45:15 GMT

well i aint leavin this Mother fucker to die.

I promised i would finish it

no matter how long it would take.

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Felix — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:44:58 GMT

so many fanfics...so much better than mine...

now if only i would finish mine...

btw, nice chapter don, such a shame it took so long to get here

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Spartan15 — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:42:57 GMT

Don Vito Corleone:

*shovel hits box*Whats this??
....I think its... THE GREAT WAR!
Back and kickin my friends.
Ch.10 is up.

Who managed to talk you into coming back and finishing it Don?

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Don Vito Corleone — Mon, 01 Dec 2008 03:37:03 GMT

*shovel hits box*Whats this??

....I think its... THE GREAT WAR!

Back and kickin my friends.

Ch.10 is up.

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

spartan — Tue, 05 Aug 2008 03:53:07 GMT

Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you!

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Captain Cazador- Soldato — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 07:04:48 GMT

That's okay, Don. We understand.

Re: (FF) The Great War 2.0

Don Vito Corleone — Sun, 03 Aug 2008 18:51:14 GMT

I apologize for my considerable hiatus on writing.

I plan on beggining once more soon ^^