Offensive Bias:Well, it's off to a very good start. Can you please try and space out the new chapters, or else make the chapter *Insert number* parts in bold? That way we can distinguish without it getting too cramped.

Ugh... okay, I haz some advice for the author. Instead of making them all new chapters, just space them out with a little row of stars (******) and go on ahead. So this whole post is like one chapter. 

Example:

 

STOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYY

*****

STOOOOORRRRYYYY 

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