Good job. But I'm about to leave this site cause it's BS that all these really crappy bad stories with all these mistakes get all the attention when the good ones like mine and yours petro get none

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When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

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New story- The Resistance
http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx