studmuffin:

you know people may not comment in this story's but people do read them, I come here often and read fan-fics, I just dont normally comment because I am not the type fo person you want tips on writing from. lol

nice story by the way keep it up...OR ELSE!

Yeah I realize that I just prefer for people to comment just so I know they had read it. And thanks, I wasn't sure that twist was going to be a flop or actually work

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When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

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