way off subject but i am makeing a new revised version of my FF which failed terribly. i have tried to fix the problems and i think i actually made it redable. it will be made within the month. i have scraped the firt story though kept o few names and the concept of trying to capture a rebel person in the begining. this time i have put a little more "substance" into it. in my opionion i think that is is actually readable. like i said way off subject so dont bother with quoting this. and i only posted it here because this thread will die soon enough just thought i would tell people.

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