Wow. That is all I can say. This was just perfect. I have never seen anything on this site as good as this; I am just at a loss of words. It is funny, it all flows perfectly and there are no spelling or grammar mistakes that I can see. It is essentially perfect, and the first Fan Fiction on this site to receive a Gold Plate review from me.

          The actual plot of the story was perfect. I have always wondered why the Grunts in Halo say “Oh no, not again!” and this has given me a new perspective on why. I could recognize some of the different experiences the marine was telling and could picture the rest in my mind from the perfect descriptions.

          The style and tone was just perfect and matched the story great. The characters were well rounded, and the settings were perfectly described. I could picture exactly where he was in my mind as I read. You also ended it flawlessly, it was dead on.

          That is about all I can say about this Fan Fiction. I extremely recommend it to anyone who has a good sense of humor. Good Job for producing a great piece of fiction!

Since you have received a Gold Plate review from me, it comes with this nice looking image which you can place at the top or bottom of the fan fiction, if you want to that is.

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