[FF] Memoirs II: Fighting a Losing Battle (Part 4) ~ 20/12

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  •  12-07-2009, 10:05 AM 782249 in reply to 781975

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    DFang:My civilian car has a GPS :\

    Yes, but Archer lived on the rural Harvest all his life on a farm, and since then has been serving in the military. He has no idea what city life is really like.

    ;)


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  12-07-2009, 2:48 PM 782393 in reply to 782249

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Wolverfrog49:

    DFang:My civilian car has a GPS :\

    Yes, but Archer lived on the rural Harvest all his life on a farm, and since then has been serving in the military. He has no idea what city life is really like.

    ;)

    Oooohhh, OK


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  •  12-15-2009, 6:00 AM 787044 in reply to 782393

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Part 2 - Mugged

    "So how's the war going?"

    Not exactly the perfect icebreaker at dinner. Still, if one word could be used to describe Collin Hale, it would be blunt. I frowned.

    "I won't butter it up; badly. Ignore what the tabloids and news stations tell you, they're all edited to make it look like we're winning," I informed Rook's father, who's eyes went wide.

    "You mean we're not?"

    The ignorance of civilians in the inner colonies was astounding. ONI had evidently created a huge blanket of lies; according to them, the Covenant bastards were being beaten back by us 'fine boys' in the corps.

    "Small victories, here and there. But to be frank, I don't expect humanity to survive another ten years," Rook chipped in, shaking his head grimly. There was silence for a few moments, before I, seeing the horrified looks on Susan and Collin's faces, decided to be an optimist.

    "Don't be so certain Rook, the Covenant have no idea where Earth and most of the colonies are, and we're reverse engineering their tech all the time. I won't be surprised if we're ready to launch a counter attack soon," I lied slightly, knowing that the speed at which the scientists were discovering how Covenant technology worked was far too slow. Still, it eased the tense mood at the dinner table, and conversation turned to other, slightly related matters.

    "So what are the Covenant like to fight then?" Rook's mom questioned to us, and Switch answered honestly, going into quite gory details at times. I cut him off with some cheerier tales of small success as I realised he was about to relay the anecdote about the time our squad had found a pile of dead young children all heaped up in a house, with two Jackals inside feasting on a few. We'd decided to give the Jackals a taste of their own medicine, and had fed them to some stray dogs whilst they were still alive. Monsters.

    Susan and Collin Hale had to be two of the nicest people I had ever met. Despite never even seeing me or Mains in the past, we were immediately welcomed with open arms, and introduced quite thoroughly. Susan had been quite upset when I told them about Blade and Det's demise, apparently Rook hadn't got around to telling his parents about them. Collin had also showed sympathy; apparently he and Blade had hit it off the last time the squad had visited, -- before I joined -- and the two had played Chess every night. I'd been surprised to hear Blade had played Chess. Collin seemed quite reserved though, as if he were unhappy underneath his smiling exterior.

    After the usual welcomes and hellos, we'd all sat down at the table, where all of us had been ladled out far too generous servings of a Chicken Dinner. I ate ravenously; the food we ate whilst on duty was terrible and scarce.

    Before speaking about myself, I'd asked Susan and Collin what they did for a living. She was a social worker in the city, which was apparently how she and Collin had come across a young, parent-less Rook, and he was a rather successful lawyer who owned his own firm.

    "How's business been lately?" I had asked Collin, who'd shrugged.

    "None too good. With the threat of an alien genocide on the horizon, people are suddenly a lot less concerned about suing the guy who caused them to break their leg. I've been getting a lot of will work lately."

    I nodded, empathetic, whilst at the same time stuffing my face with a roast potato; marvellous.

    Later in the night, after Susan had decided to retire to bed, and after everyone had had a few drinks, the atmosphere took a turn for the worse, when Collin decided to try and persuade his son to leave the corps.

    "This war is dangerous Drew, and I don't want to have to see you come home in a casket. Please, come work for me at my firm, leave the fighting to others," Collin said to Rook, and I winced. Whilst we were off duty, I hated it when someone called a squad member by their real name. Evidently, Collin had either forgotten we were at the table or simply didn't care in his drunken state. Rook's gaze darkened.

    "Not now Dad." the ODST's tone was crisp and cautioning. Collin ignored Rook, still going on.

    "Then when son? When are you going to wake up and smell the music? You know I hate you being in the UNSC, you know me and your mother want you home. Where it's safe." The lawyer's tone had become desperate, and I grimaced slightly, looking at Switch and Mains uneasily. Rook caught my expression and scowled.

    "For Christ's sake, you think you're safe here Dad? No where is safe! The Covenant will come here eventually, and will burn it to the ground!" he'd risen to his feet now, as had Collin. The two exchanged heated words for around a minute, before Rook decided he'd had enough.

    "You never change do you? Always the same, even around my friends! I knew coming here was a mistake..." As Rook marched out of the room, and practically ripped his coat off the hanger, I placed a hand on his shoulder.

    "Rook, you're drunk, and so's your Dad. You're both saying things you don't mean, just go to sleep and you'll--" before I could finish, Rook had shrugged me off and had gone out of the door into the street outside, slamming the door behind him. I look back over my shoulder, and saw Switch and Mains standing in the dining room doorway awkwardly. I could hear the faint sobbing sound of Collin at the table.

    "Listen, I'm gonna go find him. Stay here," I told Switch and Mains, grabbing my own coat. A few seconds later, I was out on the street, cursing as I had no idea of which way Rook had gone.

    Instinctively, I turned right, hurrying down the near black street. A few moments later, it began to rain; a heavy, constant stream drumming heavily on the back of my coat.

    "Rook? Rook!" I called out when I reached an intersection. A gang of teenagers nearby gave me an odd look, but I ignored them.

    Spurred on by some unknown force, I decided to head down an alleyway. I realised that now, not only had I lost Rook -- I was also lost in the pitch black sprawling metropolis. Crap.

    Ahead, further down the alley I heard voices whispering, as well as movement. Could it be Rook? Frowning, I moved forward, reaching down for my gun as I did so. I nearly swore when I realised I'd left it back at the house.

    "Rook?" I whispered harshly. Instantly, the voices stopped, and all was still. Slightly nervous, I moved around the corner of the alleyway building...

    ...and something heavy hit me on the back of the head. Shouting out in pain, I stumbled forward, crashing face first into the wall. I reached up with a hand, gingerly feeling my nose. Bloodied and crooked. My eyesight was blurred.

    Before I could right myself, I felt two pairs of arms grab my by either shoulder, and throw me to the ground. Looking around, I saw an old man cowering against the wall; a knife held to his throat. Three other men stood, garbed in balaclavas. Two held me pinned down. Muggers.

    "You move, we cut the old man's throat," one of the muggers threatened. I got the message, and nodded mutely, terrified. Not terrified of dying, but terrified by the thought that I would no longer be able to fight the Covenant if I was dead. Terrified that I wouldn't be able to make a difference.

    "Listen, just calm down all right?" I attempted to placate as I was roughly pulled up to my feet, and pushed against the wall. The same mugger who had spoken before -- I assumed he was the leader-- screamed aggressively in my face.

    "Shut up! We call the shots here. Search him."

    I tried to remain still as one of the muggers -- slightly shorter than the others -- expertly began to turn my pockets and anywhere I could conceal something of worth inside out. It wasn't long before he found my wallet, tossing it to the leader, who brought out a torch, flicking quickly through the black leather pouch and its compartments.

    "Well well, Master Sergeant eh? Keep an eye on him lads, he's probably got training." The leader had evidently found my UNSC Identification card.

    A few moments later, he had taken the $115 cash I had on me, and held my debit card in the light too. After a second or so of squinting at it, he tossed it to one of his lackeys. Then, a pistol was aimed at my face.

    "What's your pin?"

    I remained silent, managing to meet the masked face in the eyes with a defiant stare. The mugger fired a warning shot above my head; I felt the heat from the bullet as it passed.

    "5225!" I blurted out, giving false information. The leader narrowed his eyes, before turning to one of his subordinates.

    "Go find the nearest ATM and check it out. If it ain't right, come back and I'll chop this soldier boy's thumb off. That'll make him talk."

    My eyes grew wide. It would be awfully hard to hold a sniper without a thumb. The mugger holding my card took his balaclava off; showing he wasn't a complete professional. A smart person would never show his face to the victim. I took a look at his face. A scar above his right eyebrow, dirty blonde, long hair, a rough beard. About 30 years old, maybe a bit older.

    He'd find out that the pin wasn't correct. And then he'd come back, and I'd lose a digit. Not good. If I was going to act, it would have to be before he came back.

    "You won't get away with this! I called the police as soon as I saw you come towards me! They'll be here any minute..." the old man crumpled in the corner wheezed out, before coughing. The leader of the muggers stared down at him in surprise, as if he had forgotten about his previous victim. The mugger looked uncertain.

    "You're lying..." the leader accused, biting his low lip. The old man gave a grim, painful smile.

    "Willin' to take that chance?"

    Then, the moment I had been waiting for arrived. The leader wasn't looking at me, and the lackey pinning me had loosened his grip slightly, nervous.

    I struck.

    My leg rose up and hit the lackey in the gut. The man's eyes went wide for a moment, and he staggered back slightly. Before he could react, I swung a fist, which connected straight with his jaw. The mugger went sprawling down to the ground, where he connected with a metal rubbish bin. Evidently he hit his head pretty hard, because a second later he was out cold.

    The leader had realised what was happening, and fired a shot from his pistol at me. It missed as I dived out of the way, and he cursed loudly, fumbling with the weapon. I laughed then -- the man hadn't even reloaded the pistol before aiming it at me! Amateur. Still, it made me wonder just what the other bullets from the clip had been used on.

    Before the gun could be reloaded, I tackled the man, driving him hard against the wall. The pistol went flying out of his hand. He lashed out with a fist, which I caught easily with a deft hand. The odds were easily in my advantage now. I was a highly trained ODST -- he was a petty thief.

    "You picked the wrong guy to mug ***," I growled at him, slamming another fist into his face. That felt good. The feeling of elation vanished when a knife was driven into my side.

    The world swam before me, and I tumbled to the ground, moaning. I looked down at my side, and surely enough, there was the hilt of the felling weapon, wedged firmly within my flesh.

    The thug had drawn another knife from somewhere, and now stood over me, ready to stab down. I tried to scurry out of the way, but my entire body felt numb. I couldn't do anything.

    Suddenly, a shining glint caught my eye. Lying a metre away was the mugger's lost pistol. Desperately, I reached for it. Forgetting that it had seemed to be out of bullets, I aimed it at the mugger, and pulled the trigger.

    Much to my surprise, a shot rang through the alley. Smoke trailed from my pistol. And the mugger collapsed to the ground, a bullet wedged firmly between his eyes. Evidently, the pistol had been loaded, it must have just been jammed.

    Breathing heavily for a few moments, I forced myself to get up. The mugger who had run to the ATM was still out there. Grimacing, I looked at the knife sticking out my side. Putting the collar of my coat in my mouth so I wouldn't bite my tongue off, I yanked the knife out with a yowl.

    Blood spurted out of my side. Reaching down to the dead mugger, I striped him of his jacket gingerly and put it under my coat, where it pressed hard against the wound. It didn't entirely stop the blood flow, but it was quite a small wound and would soon scab over.

    Remembering the old man, I looked down at him. His legs were bent at an unnatural angle; those sick bastards had broken them. His eyes seemed to be shut, and I was worried for a moment. I let out a difficult breath when I saw his chest rise, then fall. He was just unconscious.

    I then heard a sound. Sirens. And they were drawing closer. Less than ten seconds later, I was surrounded by police, all aiming guns at me and screaming at me for some reason. I realised that I was still holding the pistol, and dropped it. Instantly, a guy pounced on my from behind, knocking the wind out of my lungs.

    Apparently, the old man had been speaking the truth when he said he had phoned the police. If only they'd arrived sooner.

    "You're making a mistake. I'm not--" I began to protest as I was thrown face first onto a car bonnet. As if I hadn't been smashed around enough today.

    "I'm arresting you on suspicion of attempted robbery, assault and actual murder. You have the right to remain silent. Anything you say or do can and will be used against you in a court of law. You have the right to an attorney. If you cannot afford an attorney, one will be appointed to you. If you are not a Charon VI citizen, you may contact your colony's consulate prior to any questioning. If said colony has been destroyed, you will merely be tried as a UNSC citizen. Do you understand these rights as they have been read to you?"

    They thought I was the mugger! Idiots! I tried not to despair -- everything would soon be sorted out. For now, I decided to be cooperative.

    "Yes. But listen--"

    "Good!" the police officer who had read recited to me my Miranda rights stated, and before I knew it, I was thrust in the back of a police car. This was all wrong.

    Before I could try to appeal to the officer's sitting at the front of the car, a hatch was shut and I was cut off from them. The small space in the back was pitch black.

    Why did these things always happen to me?


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  12-15-2009, 8:58 AM 787069 in reply to 787044

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    i wonder if Miranda Rights would still be recited in 500 years.... joking, of course.

    the action sequence was well scripted, though to get there, it seemed a bit hurried.

       "I got the message, and nodded mutely, terrified. Not terrified of dying, but terrified by the thought that I would no longer be able to fight the
       Covenant if I was dead. Terrified that I wouldn't be able to make a difference."

    that string of lines seemed a bit odd to me.

    otherwise, fun stuff!


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  •  12-17-2009, 5:10 AM 788143 in reply to 787069

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Thanks for replying Footbutt. Only one reply? That's a little disappointed, although not unexpected. Oh well.

    Only an averaged sized part here -- why does every 'Part 3' in all of my stories end up being shorter than the others? Weird. Anyway, enjoy.

    Part 3 - Corruption

    Police Commissioner Jiles seemed to be a very patient man. He was cold, calculating, and completely, and utterly corrupt if the rumours were true. His skin was as dark as the uniform he wore, and he kept his hair short, military style.

    "Tell me, Sergeant--" the commissioner began, laying the report he'd been given on the desk before him. I corrected him rudely.

    "Master Sergeant." The faintest flicker of annoyance rose in Jiles' eyes. Then a moment later, it was gone, replaced with a smile as sweet as mustard.

    "Does it matter?"

    The commissioner had a European sounding accent, although it was hard to exactly place. His office was just as blank as him, containing no personal affections, only framed medals, and a few potted plants. I smirked.

    "To you? Yes."

    Jiles sighed at my defiance, pouring himself a fresh cup of tea from the china tea pot to the side of his desk. He looked up at me as he stirred in two teaspoons of sugar.

    "Let me just tell you this now Master Sergeant -- just so you don't get any false delusions. You cannot make me angry. I am as patient as a still river, and just like water, I always win in the end."

    What an arrogant ass!

    "Listen commissioner; we've long since proven that I'm not a mugger. So why the hell am I still here?"

    Instead of replying immediately, Jiles decided to take a small sip from his porcelain cup, following it up with a bite of a digestive biscuit. He then dabbed the crumbs from his mouth with a napkin, before finally speaking.

    "You see Archer -- can I call you Archer? No? Very well. You see Master Sergeant, I don't appreciate you causing trouble in my city."

    I stared at the commissioner in disbelief.

    "Trouble? It's hardly my fault I got mugged," I protested, frowning. Jiles smiled, closing his eyes as he nodded.
    "Of course not. But, and I'm sure you know this, soldiers are simply not allowed to go around attacking civilians, no matter how dubious their morality--"

    "Attacking civilians? Sorry commissioner, I was the one being attacked. Don't you allow people to defend themselves?"

    Not showing any noticeable reaction, Jiles took another swig from his cup, and noting my raised eyebrows, indicated the teapot.

    "I do beg your pardon Master Sergeant, how terribly rude of me. Do you take milk?"

    He was trying to psyche me out. I could tell this was a man who enjoyed control, and didn't like the idea of anyone being outside of it. Well, perhaps I could unnerve him a little too.

    "Yes, milk and two sugars." Less than ten seconds later, a steaming cup of tea was sat before my side of the large mahogany desk. I smiled through the steam up at the commissioner.

    "Tell me commissioner, have you checked my service record?"

    Jiles' smile faded a little, as he realised I was up to something.

    "The basics, yes. Name, rank, age, and all that. I didn't feel it was necessary to delve too deep," the commissioner told me. I laughed slightly.

    "Well maybe it is necessary commissioner."

    Unable to keep his curiosity contained now that I had piqued it, Jiles brought out his laptop, no doubt bringing up my UNSC service record for further digging. A few moments later, he made a slight noise of confusion.

    "Problem?" I asked lazily, reaching for a biscuit. I dunked it into my tea, careful not to leave it in for too long. I hated it when biscuits broke off inside the cup.

    "I think there is some mistake in your record Master Sergeant; it says here you're with ONI, Section 3."

    "Oh, that's not a mistake commissioner."

    For the first time in the exchange between me and him, Jiles' expression seemed uncertain.

    "This is a joke. You don't work for Section 3. Why, you're not even old enough to legally drink!" the commissioner suddenly laughed. I kept my expression cool.

    "Well I'm 21 in a few weeks. And yes, me and my squad are with Section 3. Naturally I can't tell you too much about my work."

    "Or you'd have to kill me, yes?" Jiles was smiling once again, no doubt amused with his own joke. I met his gaze steadily.

    "Something like that. Of course, I'd need to check with my superiors first."

    The commissioner's eyes grew wide for a moment, his Adam's apple bobbing nervously in his throat. Then he suddenly started laughing.

    "You're a funny man Master Sergeant. I think we got off to a wrong start."

    "Then how about you make it a right finish and let me leave this building?" I asked the commissioner, who shook his head.

    "I'm afraid I can't do that Master Sergeant."

    I grew angry then, pounding the table. I swore as my cup of tea was knocked over, pouring the remaining liquid over the commissioner's desk. Jiles kept his expression neutral as he grabbed a cloth and wiped the desk.

    "Why the hell not?" I demanded, rising to my feet. The commissioner stood a full head taller than me, so I felt a little foolish as I stared him in the eyes. His appearance appeared apologetic.

    "Police policy demands that anyone involved in a crime must stay for at least three days in the department. My hands are tied."

    "Who makes this policy?" I questioned, expecting the answer.

    "I do." Jiles had grabbed a medal from a draw, and was polishing it. His attention clearly wasn't on me.

    "Well just unmake it. I'm only on shore leave for a short while, and then I'm back fighting the Covenant."

    The commissioner paused in his polishing, turning to face me.

    "Ah yes, the Covenant. You've fought some pretty big battles haven't you Master Sergeant? Won a fair few of them too from what I see. The public must respect you highly."

    Where the hell was this going?

    "Enough games Jiles. Let me go, or I swear to God I will force my way out."

    "Is that so?" the commissioner replied dangerously quiet, "standing outside of this office are two armed officers, carrying fully loaded M7 sub-machine guns. In the lobby sit two permanently posted guards, both carrying suppressed MA2Bs. And this whole building can be locked down with the touch of a button. You are not leaving without my say so. And I follow my own policies; no one is above the law."

    "That so? What about all the under-the-table bribes you take in return for immunity Jiles?"

    The commissioner's eyes flared with a burning flame.

    "I assure you I have no idea what you're talking about Master Sergeant. And every word you speak tempts me to throw you into one of the cells below rather than allowing you to have a more comfortable stay as my guest. There may, however, be a way for me to let you leave."

    I looked at him in interest.

    "Oh?"

    Jiles seemed to wrestle with a decision for a few moments, before reaching a choice.

    "The elections are coming up in a few months Master Sergeant. Usually, I have no competition, but this year things are different. Lieutenant Hodge has decided to pit himself against me. He's an idealist, Master Sergeant, and he believes he can make the world a better place. Of course, as you no doubt know, idealists don't make good leaders. Still, the public don't know what they want -- they love him. I'm in danger of losing to this bumbler."

    "Good," I replied venomously. Jiles sighed.

    "Just hear me out Master Sergeant. You're a brilliant soldier, and if we let people know of your victories -- well you'd be loved. People all over would respect you, and any decision you might make. If you choose to support me in the election, they might look more favourably towards me. And I would be obliged to let you leave now, as soon as you sign the right documents."

    I realised what he was saying.

    "You want me to back you so you stay in office," I whispered. Jiles nodded.

    "Yes Master Sergeant. Who are these people to you? They need me, and the order I impose. I keep the mob in line, keep criminals off the streets."

    "Unless they have money?"

    Jiles chose to ignore that, instead presenting me with a bundle of papers.

    "Just sign your name at the bottom Master Sergeant; merely saying you'll support me in the election. As soon as you do that, I'll have Sergeant Travis escort you out. I'll even pay for the taxi ride back to wherever you are staying."

    He passed over to me the documents, along with a ballpoint pen. I read the sheets for a few moments, and then wrote on the dotted line on the last sheet with the pen. Afterwards, I passed the documents back to Jiles, who was smiling.

    "You made the right--what's this?"

    He'd evidently found what I had wrote.

    "'Screw you'," he read aloud, and then turned to me gravely.

    "Oh, Master Sergeant. Bad decision..."

    The commissioner pressed a button underneath his desk, and a few moments later, two guards appeared at the door.

    "The Master Sergeant is proving troublesome. Travis, Holmes, throw him in the holding cell. I'll visit him in the morning and see if he's changed his mind. Doing the paperwork for these kind of crimes can take a very long time Master Sergeant. I wouldn't be surprised if it takes the whole of your shore leave to complete it."

    I snapped as I felt my hands being drawn behind my back and restrained with manacles.

    "You're an idiot commissioner. I work with Section 3 -- you'll be out of the job within the month."

    Jiles laughed softly.

    "Oh, I doubt ONI care about the activities of a commissioner on a backwater colony. I'll see you tomorrow Master Sergeant. Good night."


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  12-17-2009, 6:00 AM 788157 in reply to 788143

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    kinda short, but sweet!

    you did a great job building up the antagonist. when a reader can truly dispise a character, the author has done his job.

    i wanna see how Archer gets out of this one!


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  •  12-17-2009, 2:55 PM 788351 in reply to 788157

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Sorry I didn't get to comment on part two, I must've missed it when I was going through the library.

    I wanna see Jiles get kicked in the face sometime :D 


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  •  12-17-2009, 3:12 PM 788369 in reply to 788351

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    DFang:

    Sorry I didn't get to comment on part two, I must've missed it when I was going through the library.

    I wanna see Jiles get kicked in the face sometime :D 

    His fate will be a little darker than that...


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  12-17-2009, 3:15 PM 788378 in reply to 788369

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Wolverfrog49:
    DFang:

    Sorry I didn't get to comment on part two, I must've missed it when I was going through the library.

    I wanna see Jiles get kicked in the face sometime :D 

    His fate will be a little darker than that...

    You're right, MC ditches him after taking all his resources and promising to help defend him against the Covenant :D 


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  •  12-17-2009, 5:27 PM 788501 in reply to 788378

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Or he will force Jiles to open a tin of peaches...using only his forehead.
  •  12-17-2009, 6:59 PM 788591 in reply to 788378

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    DFang:
    Wolverfrog49:
    DFang:

    Sorry I didn't get to comment on part two, I must've missed it when I was going through the library.

    I wanna see Jiles get kicked in the face sometime :D 

    His fate will be a little darker than that...

    You're right, MC ditches him after taking all his resources and promising to help defend him against the Covenant :D 

    Not the same Jiles. I only remembered there was another character in the Haloverse with the name when I neared the end of the chapter, and couldn't be arsed to go back and edit.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  12-17-2009, 7:15 PM 788598 in reply to 788591

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Wolverfrog49:
    DFang:
    Wolverfrog49:
    DFang:

    Sorry I didn't get to comment on part two, I must've missed it when I was going through the library.

    I wanna see Jiles get kicked in the face sometime :D 

    His fate will be a little darker than that...

    You're right, MC ditches him after taking all his resources and promising to help defend him against the Covenant :D 

    Not the same Jiles. I only remembered there was another character in the Haloverse with the name when I neared the end of the chapter, and couldn't be arsed to go back and edit.
    So that means this one can be thrown off a cliff without disrupting canon :D
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  •  12-18-2009, 7:22 PM 789140 in reply to 788598

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    yes, yes it does...........as long as DFang gets to join him........(Evil Laugh)...........
    Operation Waypoint hijack is in effect!
  •  12-18-2009, 7:37 PM 789149 in reply to 789140

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Hey wolver, did you write this on Bnet? Wolverfrog writes, “Are you answering our questions because the update will be short?”
    Operation Waypoint hijack is in effect!
  •  12-19-2009, 5:35 AM 789333 in reply to 789149

    Re: [FF] Memoirs of an ODST ~ Book 2 (Prologue) ~ 13/11

    Yes. I know all the people in the inner circle of B.net.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
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