I
loved it; all my fears about 343 not being able to handle Halo are
vanished. There seemed to be a few errors though, such as the fact that
the marine at the end knew about the Spartan's death -- but then again,
the ODSTs probably told him.
I have to say though, way too
predictable twist with the Spartan being a woman. As soon as I saw that
the Spartan didn't speak, I knew near the end the helmet would come off
to reveal a woman.
Her face looked a little delicate to be a Spartan though :/
As for the Forerunner ruins which looked like Japanese buildings...yeah. Artistic license. Go with it.
I thought it was very enjoyable, and I eagerly await next fortnight's episode.
OP, what canon issues did you find?
"This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.