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The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

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  •  09-10-2009, 1:16 PM 721842 in reply to 721731

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    I like it, but things start to get a little confusing when you bring up places. I've seen this in all fantasy novels, perhaps a map? Just an idea that might make everything a little more comprehendable.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

  •  09-10-2009, 4:02 PM 722052 in reply to 721842

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    I can't make a map :/
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  •  09-11-2009, 5:31 PM 723363 in reply to 721842

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    I love how he copied my title with the "The Beginning of The End."
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  •  09-12-2009, 2:32 PM 724393 in reply to 723363

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Copied? I never even seen your FF.
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  •  09-12-2009, 2:33 PM 724394 in reply to 724393

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Wow, i reaaaaaaaaalllly need to do another chapter.....
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  •  09-12-2009, 2:58 PM 724436 in reply to 697512

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    WALL OF TEXT
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  •  09-12-2009, 2:59 PM 724438 in reply to 724436

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Nocbl2:WALL OF TEXT

    Sorry?

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  •  09-12-2009, 8:58 PM 724796 in reply to 724438

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Night Angel:

    Nocbl2:WALL OF TEXT

    Sorry?

    The. Story. Wall. Text. Big. Phat. Explosive.poo.

     

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  •  09-13-2009, 6:08 AM 725051 in reply to 724796

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    It's not a wall of text. Please don't spam my novel thread.
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  •  09-13-2009, 9:01 AM 725103 in reply to 725051

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    I like it. Just saying.
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  •  09-13-2009, 2:34 PM 725411 in reply to 724796

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Nocbl2:
    Night Angel:

    Nocbl2:WALL OF TEXT

    Sorry?

    The. Story. Wall. Text. Big. Phat. Explosive.poo.

     

    Still confused but nvm.

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  •  09-13-2009, 4:43 PM 725568 in reply to 725411

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Night Angel:
    Nocbl2:
    Night Angel:

    Nocbl2:WALL OF TEXT

    Sorry?

    The. Story. Wall. Text. Big. Phat. Explosive.poo.

     

    Still confused but nvm.

    What he is saying is that the story is pretty much just a big paragraph, not enough spacing, etc etc. That's why he is calling it a wall of text. Oh and btw, it should be wall of words.

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  •  09-13-2009, 6:05 PM 725669 in reply to 725568

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    The spacing is fine.
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  •  09-13-2009, 10:22 PM 725963 in reply to 725669

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Offensive Bias:The spacing is fine.
    I didn't mean it like that. I meant it like:

     

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  •  10-01-2009, 4:26 PM 738927 in reply to 725963

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Oh, that's alright then... Anyway, I have a new chapter for you all.

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