The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

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  •  08-23-2009, 9:03 AM 704037 in reply to 704003

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    NOT BY ADVERTISING! MUST BREAK JJ!
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  •  08-23-2009, 9:08 AM 704039 in reply to 704037

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Go ahead and try, dumb 3 word sentence maker!

    Wow, that was a really bad insult...

    Novel: Shadows Call

    Take a look! :P


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  •  08-25-2009, 4:34 PM 706239 in reply to 704039

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    errr well OB i hate to point it out but you advertise aswell heh lead by example and all that
    Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

    it is sweet and honourable to die for ones country
  •  08-25-2009, 5:31 PM 706276 in reply to 706239

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    I don't advertise. Oh, I got my own computer back...
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  •  08-25-2009, 6:48 PM 706303 in reply to 706276

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Offensive Bias:I don't advertise. Oh, I got my own computer back...
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  •  08-25-2009, 6:57 PM 706307 in reply to 706276

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Offensive Bias:I don't advertise. Oh, I got my own computer back...

    suuuuure, finally it only took for ever and a bit


    Dulce et decorum est pro patria mori.

    it is sweet and honourable to die for ones country
  •  08-26-2009, 7:08 AM 706715 in reply to 706303

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    MrGrenade:
    Offensive Bias:I don't advertise. Oh, I got my own computer back...
    HI OB!

    Did you get my message from Ruski?


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  •  08-26-2009, 7:11 AM 706720 in reply to 706715

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Wait, i am very confused....

    So, you Kuribayashi?

    That Is actualy Ob but since OB left you are now OB, basicaly the same Ob/B that has been posting in this thread for a while/Author?

     


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  •  08-26-2009, 7:12 AM 706722 in reply to 706720

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Night Angel - JumpingJet:

    Wait, i am very confused....

    So, you Kuribayashi?

    That Is actualy Ob but since OB left you are now OB, basicaly the same Ob/B that has been posting in this thread for a while/Author?

     

    Wow, I understood that... But yeah, you're correct.


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  •  08-26-2009, 7:13 AM 706725 in reply to 706722

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Right, thanks.

    So yeh, that quote wasnt from me dude in the other thread.


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  •  08-28-2009, 7:27 AM 709006 in reply to 706725

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    This message is directed at the author, due to PM's crashing and not sending i find them no longer reliable.

    I wish to know a few things about your FF/Novel to make a Datbase thread in which new readers can find your FF/Novel Easly and quickly, and make sure its the story for them.

    • Name of FF/ Novel:
    • Author
    • What the story is ablout breifly:
    • Mainly focused around what universe:
    • What race is the story about? Eg: If the universe is halo then "Humans" or "Covenant"
    • Story Genre:

    If you could supply me with this basic in it would be a great help, Please both PM and publicly post your answers please.


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  •  08-29-2009, 8:00 PM 710721 in reply to 709006

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Bump.

    Let's get this great story back up there.


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  •  08-29-2009, 8:20 PM 710745 in reply to 710721

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Thanks TM. I made a decision. Instead of doing two halves to chapter three, the second half will combine with chapter four and make one big chapter. Progress is slow because my FF thread is taking a lot of fight out of me. It's exhausting for me to write for the novel. I have to do longer chapters than usual for it. Plus, I lost Word when I got the computer back and I have to use a below average writing tool. But, I will have the next chapter up as soon as it is completed, you can be sure of that.
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  •  08-29-2009, 8:32 PM 710768 in reply to 710745

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    I was beginning to wonder on the lack of progress, but nevertheless I will stay patient and await the continuation.
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  •  09-10-2009, 11:13 AM 721731 in reply to 710768

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Hey everyone. Teaser up now!

     

    Chapter Four



    Empire of Ice







    Sections of the forest were apparently cleared of any and all Coalition presence. That was what the soldiers had been told, and it seemed to prove true. All the better in which to start their operations. One of the Empires Junior Major's was proving himself in a bid to be promoted to a Senior Major. It was dangling right in front of him, he could almost taste it. And all he had to do was win the battle on the edge of the forest. A small army of Coalition forces, numbering roughly a thousand. Against his soldiers, with numbers around the same. It would all come down to skill. Victory was in their grasp! They were only up against 30 Orcs and the rest were the lesser fighters of the Coalition. What an underestimation. Only a handful of the thousand returned. Barely 30 of them were not wounded. He would have to retreat back to the main camp, established at the ruins of Jathrocarta. One of the Coalitions minor towns. The Senior Captain he had sent, had returned. Clutching a heavy wound to its abdomen, sustained while running away from a flurry of Dwarves, and nursing a broken arm, he wasn't in the best shape. The Major was depressed, watching the column of his soldiers come in, red with blood, weary and dragging their weapons behind them, or at least, the ones that hadn't thrown theirs away to reduce the weight.

    Captain Mayus lay in the makeshift hospital tent. A Faun prisoner, obtained from Jathrocarta, was peering at his wounds. The Captain, between shallow breaths, yelled at him. “Well!... Can you fix me?!” The Faun gave a little start, clearly terrified.

    “Of course, mighty Sir, the wound will need treatment and I can have the arm sorted with a little bit of Faun magic.” Mayus nodded in reply and collapsed backwards onto his white bedsheets, already stained red with blood. The tent flaps were thrown open, and Junior Major Julias stormed over to the bedside. His face was red with rage. Despite that, he managed to keep an even tone.

    “Mayus, what the FU*K! Happened out there?” He seemed he couldn't control his rage with that one word.

    “The Coalition! They had... Centaurs. Waiting in the forest. They charged us! We were... Still there and then... The reinforcements came! Dragons and... more Orcs. We barely survived.” Julias opened his mouth, but clenched it tightly shut and marched back out of the tent, stopping to kick at the chained up Faun.



    Julias had to leave, but the wounded would slow him down... What could he do? The wounded would make him such an easy target, he would lose his stealth capabilities. But he couldn't leave them. He would have to wait here, hoping amongst the Gods to protect them. Wait until the Coalition had been beat at the battle at the sacred plains. The Verudians would win, no doubt about that. And when the Verudians arrived at Theros to begin the siege, he would be ready to venture out and lend aid to them. He could send a rider to request reinforcements. Yes, he could do that. He wouldn't be turned down, he would just have to be a little inventive with the battle results. The rider was dispatched an hour later to move down to Jathrocarta. They could spare another few thousand, surely.


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