(FF) The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doisac - Ch.

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  •  11-03-2009, 2:47 PM 764920 in reply to 763016

    Re: The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doriac

                                                                 Chapter 4 - Assimilation

    The massive ships flew throughout space, dozens of these massive edifices of metal and elegance unknown to the Jiralhanae.  The curious eyes looked out from the plasma shield that encased them inside, looking around the insides of these cell-rooms with wandering eyes.  Some went crazy and erupted into their brutish rage, ramming headfirst into the plasma shields repeatedly.  A few causing contusions, leading to their inevitable coma and death.

    Arterus was sitting idly in the corner of his cell, Martkus next to him.  They were both praying to themselves, a strange taste in their mouth--one of idleness and tameness.  That's exactly what they were.  Tamed.  At least at this point they were; many elites standing guard outside--more than one would expect.  They seemed almost scared of Arterus and his other beasts of men, a few screaming out furiously still in his cell.  It got to the point where one of the Elites guarding the door shut down the plasma shield--bad mistake.

    The brute--Cestrius--that was flipping out ran out and gored the elite.  Ramming full speed into the Sangheli, head crashing against his stomach and sending him back a few meters right off the edge of the twisting path.  The elite soon meeting his impending death, however, that was far from the end of it.  All the brutes in the cell rose up and watched silently--it was an odd spectacle--why were they not helping their brethren?  This was not right, at least to Arterus.

    Cestrius gripped the second elite guarding the door and flung him to the ground, before a shot could even be fired off from his plasma rifle, a few other Jackals on the rafters firing down at him.  He took it, stumbling back into a wall and continuing to charge.  He ran like a mad football player through a crowd of elites and jackals trying to stop this beast.  Cestrius managing to ram through--and knock off the edge--almost five more elites in no particular order.

    His uprising was stopped just as quickly as it started however.  A jackal from afar fired off its beam rifle, striking Cestrius through the heart and making him fall to his knees.  Another elite walked up and gripped him by the throat, lifting him slightly in his grip and throwing him back down--sending an entire burst of plasma rifle energy into his face.  The shield holding Arterus closing up again--they knew their place.

    Soon they, the ships, entered the atmosphere of another planet.  One unknown to them, one much too small to even be a planet--almost moon like but made of steel.  As the ships orbited this small moon-like sphere of metal, all the brutes were hastily transported into Spirits and Phantoms alike.  Mostly with no resistance at this point--what was the point?  Arterus was picked up from his cell, along with the five others remaining and guided up the pathway.

    They reached the top, floating into these mystical purple flying machines--the aura itself lifting him.  This was his first conscious experience of this, and it was almost magical to him.  He stood in a corner of the Phantom, watching the other brutes converse amongst themselves--the Elites laughing among each other at their own jokes--most likely at the brutes in some fashion.

    As they were lifted off of the Phantoms, almost all the brutes were gathered into a giant congregation in the hundreds of thousands.  All on a giant, open plain--many phantoms and banshees patrolling the sky to quell any uprising.  Arterus looked about, he was alone at this point--Martkus and anyone else he knew was gone in the mist of the crowd--he was among his people; just as far as he knew, they were not his people--at least on Doisac.  This was new.

    As the last of the brutes were lifted onto the ground, a voice rung out through the sky.  All throughout the congregation altar's arose throughout in the hundreds--maybe even thousands as large holograms of three prophets lit up in full figure.  All three rose their hands and proclaimed to the Jiralhane, "Welcome, brethren."   Brethren? This word confused every single brute in the fields---many words escaping lips of curiosity--sometimes even rage.

    One of the Prophets continued, "We apologize for your rather rough expulsion from your planet--but we have been watching you.  You are a STRONG race" his fist clenched at the word strong, his eyes closing as his head tilted down.  A soft sigh escaped from the prophets mouth, his face arising again--almost looking at these beasts if it were not for the hologram. "We need you, and your kind to become stronger than -ever- before.  The Forerunners have commanded it---the creators of all---demand it."

    This caused less of an uproar than one would have thought--this mention of the Forerunners.  The brutes yelled out, almost comically in unison, "Who are the Forerunners?"  The prophet obviously heard their demanding question, all of them as laughter escaped from them--almost like teenagers snickering at an inside joke.  After regaining composure briefly afterwards, they spoke again, "The creators of the rings of course.  The creators of most, your forefathers.  They are the way to the Great Journey, they are the true path."

    The brutes took this willingly--including Arterus--whom was watching them at this strange machine.  How were they speaking--but not there? How could they make figures of themselves in such intricate lights? These thoughts flew through every single Jiralhanae's mind--they wanted to know, badly.  The Prophets smiled again, "Do you accept my offer, my dear Jiralhanae?" he said in an unctuous manner--his attempts at cajoling an entire race was obviously working.

    The entire congregation of brutes--every single voice--erupted into one word.

    "Yes."

    Aloysius:
    -Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.


    How is the General rank fair again?

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  •  11-03-2009, 7:03 PM 765150 in reply to 764920

    Re: The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doriac

                                                             Chapter 5 - All teched up

     *Six Months Later*

     Arterus stood confidently in his new bunk-room.  He was poised upright, one chosen to be a brute chieftan in his race.  He was to lead dozens of his brethren into battle, into glory, and into their inevitable death.  However, the latter was unknown to him--and to others.  Stepping outside of the bunks, he gave a small glance about--the usual motions were occuring.  Jackals patrolling the rafters with their beam rifles ready, giving a friendly--almost curt nod to Arterus as he exited his quarters.

     Walking off up the pathway, he passed many other brutes--of all ranks and armor--all giving him the same nod of respect.  This was a new feeling for Arterus--he liked it.  It was a soothing thought in his mind, the Jiralhanae all together in one unified, glorious, wrecking ball.  Arriving the top of the pathway, a large circular platform was atop this giant edifice of a spiraled pathway of dorms.  A grav-lift, as he has learned to call it along with others, awaits--giving a blue glow.

    Two elites nodded to him, standing at attention and pounding their chest once, bowing their head in the process.  Arterus merely winced and nodded back--he was not accustomed to such respect--only a year ago he was but a lowly, trench fighter on Doisac--and part of him misses that.  Another part, can never go back to that life.  He liked it like this.  

    The grav lift launched him into the air, going quickly in the air and past many floors of unexplored turf on the cruiser.  He finally stopped at the top, being suspended temporarily in midair and gently planted a few meters forward onto his feet at the edge of the platform.  Stepping down, he slid on his helmet and approached other Jiralhanae of his same rank--the other Chieftans.  This consisted of Martkus as well, who stood up and gave Arterus a brief pat on the shoulder before motioning him to sit.

     They both did sit, about fourty chieftans overall were sitting there.  Along with a Prophet, the Prophet of Regret, whom spoke solemnly to an elite, "Show them."   The elite in gray armor nodded and walked over, he took out a handle and pressed--soemthing--and what looked like pure energy from the gods exited from this, in the fashion of a blade.  The chieftans, every one of them were taken back--almost in shock of this new equipment.  "You will be introduced into your glory days again--you will gain the technology and intelligence only surpassed by the very Forerunners themselves."

    The brutes looked amongst themselves and talked, Arterus speaking to Martkus. "These new weapons they show us...they are fancy but hardly reliable.  They are...flimsy...break too easy no?"  Martkus nodded in response--almost every brute in the room uttering similar grievances of these "advanced" weapons.  It was not long until the Brutes began to configure their own weapons after these demonstrations, the Covenant's previous weapons were not for them---they were meant for a sophisticated warfare.  The brutes were no sophisticated.  They were brutal killing machines.

    Such advanced weapons were created in short time as well, along with advanced versions of Covenant weaponry by these great, intelligent--and more importantly heinous minds.  Weapons that could manipulate the very forces that hold every being down onto his feet, and slam with incredible speeds.  Plasma bolts are twice the speed of a normal elite plasma rifle, and viscious spikes that would tear through the very flesh in cold metal.

    Some weapons these brutes accepted, shoulder mounted launchers that shot pure plasma exploding shells at enemies.  The brutes liked this--very much--lots of carnage, no?  The chieftans were specifically given a hammer, a large one--the hammer that could manipulate gravity itself as spoken before. 

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    Arterus took his hammer  from the rack and slung it over his armored shoulder, walking off.  He stomped down the hall in full armor, a shield lightly eminating around him and covering his body--light silver.  However hardly noticed, the hulking beast of flesh and metal-clad armor trudging slowly towards you was much more distracting than his energy shield.  These were new weapons, new ways to kill--much more deadly ones, ones that any enemy had to fear.

     Arterus and Martkus gave one last pat on the shoulder before walking off from each other in the hall.  Arterus walked out to the bay, many phantoms taking up and flying off.  He trudged forward, many Brute-Minors and other foot soldiers followed him into the awaiting Spirit that was to transport them.  Banshees patrolled the skies, and voices rung through the intercoms of the cruiser--of all cruisers.

    "These heathens shall face righteous fire!"

    It was time for war.

    <<Pardon for the short length, I kind of wanted to wrap up so I couold move onto Part 2 :]>>


    Aloysius:
    -Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.


    How is the General rank fair again?

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  •  11-03-2009, 7:06 PM 765154 in reply to 765150

    Re: The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doriac

    Will Arserus die? He sounds evil, I don't like 'im!
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  •  11-03-2009, 7:22 PM 765175 in reply to 765154

    Re: The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doriac

    Offensive Bias:Will Arserus die? He sounds evil, I don't like 'im!

    The world may never know.

    :-)


    Aloysius:
    -Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.


    How is the General rank fair again?

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  •  11-05-2009, 5:31 AM 766249 in reply to 765175

    Re: The Jiralhanae - Part 1 - Doriac

    'twas good, man. keep it up.
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