[FF] True Sangheili (Part 20 is available!) ~ 3 May

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  •  09-28-2009, 9:13 AM 736784 in reply to 705966

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Nice I like the fact that Zharn bested the demon, there was a lot of tension going on when he was fighting him. Excellent story, glad to see that your updating it Wolver
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  •  09-28-2009, 9:52 AM 736792 in reply to 736784

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Nice to see a spartan finally get lolpwnt, also it may interest you that chieftains do not have uniform power armour, but rather custom-tailored kit, they often have the same with weapons.

     

    I really hope you make these Brutes into main characters, hoipefully they can join the seperatists during the schism(Surely not all brutes were actually thick enough to believe the elites were heretics).


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  •  09-30-2009, 10:56 AM 738169 in reply to 736792

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Oh, the plot of this story will surprise you.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 2:37 PM 738253 in reply to 738169

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    I'm happy already.

    Spess mehrens
  •  09-30-2009, 3:58 PM 738326 in reply to 738253

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Here's Part Nine, the story is warming up. Enjoy.


    Part Nine - Immortal Repentance

    Immortal Repentance Infirmary

    "My my my, this is indeed a potent poison." spoke the minor Prophet of Convalescence, as he shuffled towards the table upon which Sorran lay. Zharn nodded grimly.

    "Can it be purged holy one?" Zharn questioned of the Prophet, who's wise brow furrowed. Convalescence was old, even by the standards of the San 'Shyuum, but a lifetime of hurrying around on the battlefield as a medic of the Covenant had kept his body strong. Zharn admired the surgeon's independence, most Prophets used Gravity belts, or chairs at such an age. This one still used his own feet.

    "Of course it can, it is but a basic human substance, I think the humans call it 'Botulinum'. I was merely commenting upon the fact that the poison was powerful. Help me take off young Sorran's armour Major." Convalescence instructed, and Zharn gingerly assisted the Prophet in stripping Sorran of his cumbersome attire. The poisoned Elite Minor soon lay naked upon the surface of the table.

    "Do you wish that I should fetch a blanket, so as to cover up Sorran holy one?" Zharn questioned of Convalescence, who shook his head in protest.

    "No Major, I need to see his full body in order to see which areas have been affected most." the Prophet chastised.

    "But, what of the dishonour noble one?" Zharn refuted.

    "There is no dishonour in being healed Zharn. I often find myself wishing that the Sangheili would do away with their sense of honour, it makes my task only harder."

    Zharn flushed at the elderly Prophet's rebuke, knowing him to be right.

    "Of course holy one. Even as you say. Do you require my assistance further, or may I part?"

    "You may leave Zharn, I shall send a runner once Sorran has awoken. May the ancients guide you." the Prophet nodded, turning away from the Elite Major.

    "And lead us all upon the path." Zharn completed the ritual, marching out through the sliding doors of the infirmary. Ahkrin awaited on the other side, alert.

    "Well?" the Stealth Sangheili questioned of Zharn, who's shoulders rose.

    "Convalescence told me to come back later. The poison is not critical, Sorran will live."

    "'tis indeed good news, in these troubling times. Come, a Kig-Yar messenger came to me but a moment ago. The Zealot requests our presence." Ahkrin replied solemnly, and Zharn's head rose, curious.

    "The Zealot? Truly? Why bother himself with ones such as us?"

    "Perhaps he has heard about your triumph over the Demon." Ahkrin mused doubtfully.

    "Have you told any of the encounter?" Zharn questioned, suspicious.

    "Well, nay, but perhaps one of the Brutes upon the Phantom overheard us."

    There was a pause, as Zharn thought about the situation.

    "Perhaps. We shall soon discover the truth ourselves, let us go Ahkrin. Where is the Zealot?"

    Ahkrin shrugged, puzzled.
    "I'm not entirely sure brother; I presume he would be in the officer's living quarters." replied the Stealth Sangheili, and Zharn sighed exasperatingly.

    "Not entirely sure? Ahkrin, the Immortal Repentance is colossal. We could spend all week searching for the honoured Zealot." the Major cried out.

    "I'm sure we can find one of the Honour Guard to lead us to him Zharn, worry not. Let us move, Sorran isn't going anywhere."

    "By your word, Ahkrin."

    Eventually, an hour later, the two Sangheili stumbled into the Zealot's quarters, tired. Zharn had been right, it had taken a long time to find the ship master of the Immortal Repentance. They found the Zealot to be standing by an observation window, deep in thought. Zharn looked at Ahkrin nervously, wondering if they should announce themselves. There was no need.

    "Major Zharn, Operative Ahkrin. It's good to see you." the Zealot spoke , turning around. Zharn nodded uneasily; he'd never met the Sangheili before in his life.

    "You beckoned us great one?" Ahkrin asked in a timid tone of voice he usually reserved for the Prophets themselves.

    "I did. I heard about what happened at the outpost. I'm sorry for your losses, would it that I could have sent reinforcements in time." the Zealot apologised, and Zharn nodded sadly, narrowing his eyes to slits at the same time. The high ranking Sangheili hadn't called them merely to convey condolences.

    "Thank you, noble one." Zharn replied suspiciously.

    "But I did not call you here for that. The truth is, the Prophets have commanded this ship to stage an attack upon a human city on 'Eridanus II'. It is a small one, yet it produces many weapons and vehicles the humans need. I would lead the attack myself, but I don't trust anyone to command the Repentance in my absence, and my Sub Commander is getting a little too defiant. I need to keep an eye upon him." the Zealot told both Zharn and Ahkrin, who nodded.

    "Of course noble one. But, if I may be so impertinent as to ask, what does this have to do with us?" Ahkrin questioned boldly.

    "Everything. I heard about how you invaded a human base on your own, to save a fellow warrior. Zharn, I wish you to command the attack, with your friend Ahkrin under you. If the one named Sorran is recovered by then, take him along too. You leave in a week."

    "But noble Zealot, I am a mere Major, not permitted to command such an operation. As a Stealth Sangheili, Ahkrin may be qualified, but I am not." Zharn protested, and the Zealot smiled, nodding.

    "Which is why I put your name forward for a promotion to Ultra, and it has been approved. Congratulations are in order Zharn, Sangheili Ultra. Go down to the armoury, and you shall find that I have prepared you a set of new armour, as well as your own Energy blade."

    Zharn stood there, speechless, his mouth open in shock. He couldn't utter a word, all his life he had dreamed of becoming an Ultra, like his late father. And now, his wish was fulfilled.

    "You're catching flies Zharn." Ahkrin commented wryly, nudging him. Zharn snapped out of his stupor, and bowed to the Zealot.

    "Thank you noble one, you have no idea what an honour this is." the now Ultra thanked, stuttering slightly. The Zealot smirked.

    "Oh, I think I do. Go Zharn, collect that which is your right. And never let it be said that Thel Vadam'ee does not reward those faithful to the path."

    Ahkrin and Zharn bowed in respect, and left the chamber.

    "You know what this means, don't you?" Zharn asked of Ahkrin as the two walked past the Honour Guards, exiting the Zealot's rooms.

    "That you finally achieved your lifelong dream?" Ahkrin guessed, smiling.

    "Well, yes, but it also means that I'm of a higher rank than you now. I can command you as I will." Zharn told the Stealth Sangheili, who laughed with mirth.

    "Ah, Zharn, my friend. Try that, and I'm afraid that even our bond shall not stay my blade from entering your throat."

    *******************

    : > 0430 Hours, September 15, 2530 (Military Calendar)/ UNSC Planet Eridanus II/ Delta Base

    "The prisoner escaped?!?"

    "It would seem so Ambassador Errand. The best we can tell, two other Elites infiltrated the base, and escaped with him."

    "And Spartan 078?"

    "MIA sir, the Super Intendant class AI has footage of him being thrown off the cliff by one of the Elites. There's no possible way he could have survived."

    Errand ran a hand across his face, trying to think. What would ONI say when they heard one of their golden boys, one of Halsey's pet freaks, had been killed? It certainly wouldn't do him any favours.

    Of course, he wasn't an Ambassador. Nor was his name even Errand. That was an alias he was known by throughout non military personnel. The marines and Navy knew him as Colonel Errand. James Ackerson was forever careful to keep his true identity a secret.

    It wouldn't matter in the future, not if his own project was approved by Section III. But for now, every single Spartan was a gold mine. Precious and finite.

    "*** it. Any idea where the Elites went?" Ackerson growled at the technician, who shook his head.

    "Negative Ambassador, a Phantom picked them up, and jumped ship through slip space above atmosphere. They could be anywhere."

    "I guess they won this round then." Ackerson sighed, sitting down. He hated the fact that the Covenant were more advanced than humanity.

    As he reached for his cold glass of lager on the table, a speaker in the corner blared.

    "Ambassador Errand sir; I've got someone here you might want to see. It's him sir, the Spartan." a women's voice called, and Ackerson's face brightened considerably. At least Vice Admiral Parangosky wouldn't have his head now.

    "Show him in. Rogers, you're dismissed." Ackerson ordered, and the technician left his office, a little disappointed. As he left, a huge figure entered.

    The Spartan looked rough. A huge welt covered the left hand side of his face, and one of his eyes was puffy and black. His armour was covered with dirt, grime, and general tarnish. The super soldier's mouth was bloodied and swollen. One of the Spartan's arms was bent backwards at an unnatural angle. Still, 078 somehow managed to salute at Ackerson.

    "Sir, Spartan 078 reporting."

    Ackerson scowled; he hated each and every one of the Spartans. Freaks, the lot of them. Still, he had an alias to keep up, and 'Errand' harboured no resent against the Spartans. So Ackerson forced himself to smile.

    "Good to see you son. What happened?" Ackerson spoke.

    "The Elite took me by surprise, collapsed a wall on top of me. I was weakened, and it managed to throw me off the cliff."

    "That's a change, you Spartans are usually the ones with success." Ackerson commented bitterly, and 078 frowned.

    "Yes sir, well, not this time. Do you know where the Elites went?"

    "That's a negative Spartan."

    "Well, if and when they come back, I'm going to hunt them down, and kill them...sir" the Spartan vowed.

    "I doubt you'll be able to distinguish them. An Elite is an Elite." Ackerson said, bored already.

    "Not so sir, I can tell the difference."

    "We'll see. You'd better go patch yourself up Spartan. Head down to the med bay"

    "Yes sir, Colonel Ackerson." the Spartan saluted one last time, with the hint of a mocking smile. Ackerson watched the man leave his room calmly, reclining back and taking a drink. He paused mid sip, and then froze. The Spartan had known his name! How? Impossible, no one here knew it.

    Ackerson would have to follow up on this later. He settled back down, troubled. Did the Spartan also know what his real reasons for being on Eridanus II were?

    **********************

    Immortal Repentance Infirmary

    Sorran looked around the room he was in. The aesthetics seemed to be of the Covenant. He sighed in relief. It was a small chamber, thick with the heavy smell of incense and medicine. Hunched in a corner was...

    "Prophet." Sorran wheezed out, intending to say more, but breaking into a coughing fit. The elderly San 'Shyuum turned around, a smile upon his wizened face.

    "Ah, you've awoken. Excellent. I was beginning to worry. My name is Convalescence."

    Sorran nodded weakly, and attempted to rise. Convalescence shuffled towards him and pressed Sorran down gently, despite the Sangheili's resistance. Sorran knew then he must have been as frail as a Huragok youngling, to be physically bested by a Prophet. The Elite looked down, and his eyes widened.

    "My clothes..." Sorran breathed, feeling the heat rise to his face. Convalescence nodded distractedly.

    "Yes, we had to remove them. Fear not, I shall have my acolyte fetch you some new attire momentarily. For now, drink this liquid, it shall restore some of your strength."

    The Prophet passed over a wooden mug, hand made by the look of it, and Sorran gratefully accepted it. He drank, and felt energy rush through his limbs. He gave his thanks to the Prophet, who was ordering his 'acolyte' via a communication array to bring up some clothes for him.

    "Where am I?" Sorran questioned of the Prophet, who smiled once again. He was very unlike the cold, haughty San 'Shyuum Sorran was used to seeing in the Great Library of High Charity.

    "Aboard the great vessel Immortal Repentance." Convalescence replied softly. The name sounded familiar to Sorran, and he realised that it was the name of the ship Zharn had requested reinforcements from before the outpost was attacked by the humans. They had never arrived.

    "Have you seen a Major named Zharn, and a Stealth Sangheili named Ahkrin around here, holy one?" Sorran questioned of the Prophet, who nodded.

    "Yes, they were here a few hours ago. They bid me to inform them once you had awoken, I shall ask an Unggoy to lead you to them soon, they sent me a runner but a short moment ago telling me they were in the armoury. And ah, here is Savara with you clothes." Convalescence noted, and Sorran turned his head towards the door. A young, pretty looking Sangheili female entered the room timidly, carrying a bundle of light garments. She looked around the room, and, noticing Sorran's nudity, flushed, turning away.

    "I'm sorry great ones, I should have knocked." Savara apologised softly.

    "Hmm? Ah, yes, think nothing of it my child. If anything, it is my fault, I should have given Sorran here a piece of material to cover himself with." Convalescence replied to the Sangheili aide, who nodded meekly.

    "Here are your clothes noble warrior." she said, pressing the bundle upon Sorran's chest. He caught her staring, and she gasped, blushing. She turned away, hurrying out the room. The Prophet chuckled.

    "I believe she was quite taken by you, young warrior. If you wish, I can introduce you properly, perhaps you can go for a meal or a stroll." the San 'Shyuum laughed, and now it was Sorran's turn to blush. He didn't, however, reply. Perhaps he would take up the Prophet's offer.

    "Could I trouble you for a hand to help me rise?" Sorran asked without thinking, and the Prophet shook his head.

    "Not unless you wished to have to nurse me back to health Sangheili. I am not as young as I once would, and supporting your weight would no doubt tear me apart." Convalescence chided, and Sorran nodded, suddenly feeling foolish. He rose out of the makeshift bed himself, with effort, and pulled the soft, civilian clothes over his body. Strangely, he still felt naked without his armour on, which he had grown used to over the past few weeks.

    "Thank you holy one, for tending to me. Is there anyway I can repay you?" Sorran asked, and the Prophet chuckled.

    "Nay my son, all I ask is that you continue to do what's right for the Covenant. Now come, I shall see if I can find an Unggoy outside to lead you to your companions."


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 4:03 PM 738328 in reply to 738326

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    I read your last setion, part 8. I find it hard to believe this elite bested a spartan, from the mistakes the spartan made I just don't see it. Spartans are super fast, super smart and Agile. Making little if at all noticable mistakes. I was sadened when he fell without a helmet! haha

    anyways i liked it none the less =D pretty damned good,.


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  •  09-30-2009, 4:11 PM 738331 in reply to 738328

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    AudiA4:

    I read your last setion, part 8. I find it hard to believe this elite bested a spartan, from the mistakes the spartan made I just don't see it. Spartans are super fast, super smart and Agile. Making little if at all noticable mistakes. I was sadened when he fell without a helmet! haha

     The Spartan just had a wall collapsed on top of him. I doubt he'd be in top shape. And you forget the Elite Majors are also super fast, super smart, and agile. The games just don't really show this.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 4:21 PM 738332 in reply to 738331

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Wolverfrog49:
    AudiA4:

    I read your last setion, part 8. I find it hard to believe this elite bested a spartan, from the mistakes the spartan made I just don't see it. Spartans are super fast, super smart and Agile. Making little if at all noticable mistakes. I was sadened when he fell without a helmet! haha

     The Spartan just had a wall collapsed on top of him. I doubt he'd be in top shape. And you forget the Elite Majors are also super fast, super smart, and agile. The games just don't really show this.

    if only John was there...he would have shone that elite what for! haha and the games only showed one spartan, cept for halowars. Ugh i wish they make one where theres multiple spartanS!


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  •  09-30-2009, 8:15 PM 738566 in reply to 738332

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    It's called Halo: Reach. It will have multiple Spartans in.

    Anyway, John himself very nearly got bested by an Elite, they're very skillful warriors.

    And I don't want the Spartan to show Zharn 'what for', he's a main character. Read the rest of the story, you'll see.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 8:18 PM 738569 in reply to 738566

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Wolverfrog49:

    It's called Halo: Reach. It will have multiple Spartans in.

    I meant currently, thats my fault for not specifying.

     Anyway, John himself very nearly got bested by an Elite, they're very skillful warriors.

     

    Oh no doubt they slayed millions of humans, its just I like spartans


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  •  09-30-2009, 8:23 PM 738581 in reply to 738569

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Spartans are over glorified and over used in Halo fiction. Too much.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 8:24 PM 738583 in reply to 738581

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Wolverfrog49:Spartans are over glorified and over used in Halo fiction. Too much.

    That is why I avoided Spartans all together in my FF P=


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    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  09-30-2009, 8:25 PM 738585 in reply to 738583

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Ωμέγα:

    Wolverfrog49:Spartans are over glorified and over used in Halo fiction. Too much.

    That is why I avoided Spartans all together in my FF P=

     I decided that it would get boring if the Elites didn't have a powerful adversary to fight, which is why I included a Spartan in this. But that's the only reason why.

    Have you read this Omega?


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  09-30-2009, 8:26 PM 738586 in reply to 738585

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Wolverfrog49:
    Ωμέγα:

    Wolverfrog49:Spartans are over glorified and over used in Halo fiction. Too much.

    That is why I avoided Spartans all together in my FF P=

     I decided that it would get boring if the Elites didn't have a powerful adversary to fight, which is why I included a Spartan in this. But that's the only reason why.

    Have you read this Omega?

    Put it all into one of the first posts and I will

    EDIT: And/or PM me a complete version


    You get hit with a heavy object.
    -2 DXT
    -5 STM
    -200 INT
    You are dead.
  •  09-30-2009, 8:29 PM 738589 in reply to 738586

    Re: [FF] True Sangheili (Prologue and Part one)

    Darn you. I write huge stories, and the last time I put one of my fan fics all into the first post, it broke the thread. Literally.

     http://www.bungie.net/Forums/posts.aspx?postID=35203356

     If you read it a B.net though, you'll find that each link in the first post takes you directly to it's corresponding chapter. So you may find that easier.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
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