The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

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  •  11-03-2009, 1:22 PM 764853 in reply to 764509

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    so how many ffs you got going now hard to keep track lol, also what happend to the golden eagles ff? i liked that....
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  11-03-2009, 1:28 PM 764857 in reply to 764853

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    It's on hold, I've written about a quarter of the next chapter for Golden Eagles.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  11-03-2009, 1:30 PM 764861 in reply to 764857

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    cool, well done.
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  11-03-2009, 1:36 PM 764864 in reply to 764861

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    EXCELLENT NEWS! I have Word back! *Breaks out the bubbly* So! Writing will be a lot more efficient :)
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  11-03-2009, 1:58 PM 764867 in reply to 697492

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    great, guess that was because of tom?
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  11-03-2009, 2:00 PM 764869 in reply to 764867

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    riddle bang:great, guess that was because of tom?

    Yeah, I love that guy.


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  11-03-2009, 2:02 PM 764871 in reply to 764869

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    yes i know. lol anyway are you gonna go all the with this ff like alpha squad? im gonna read a bit of that know.
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  11-03-2009, 2:03 PM 764872 in reply to 764871

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Yeah, I'm going all the way. After this, I have to decide if I should continue with my Three Kingdoms novel, or do Golden Eagles...
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  11-03-2009, 2:07 PM 764877 in reply to 764872

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    theyre both great, but personally Golden Eagles FTW
    just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
    WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

    I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
    faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

    GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!
  •  11-03-2009, 9:11 PM 765264 in reply to 697492

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    Keep it comin'!

    Aloysius:
    -Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.


    How is the General rank fair again?

    Halo Fanboys. The next most annoying thing next to Jonas Brothers fanboys.
  •  11-03-2009, 9:12 PM 765265 in reply to 764864

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Offensive Bias:EXCELLENT NEWS! I have Word back! *Breaks out the bubbly* So! Writing will be a lot more efficient :)

    Tch, I just write all my stuff off the top of my head when I open the post :P


    Aloysius:
    -Less than half a of percent of players have the General rank on Xbox Live.


    How is the General rank fair again?

    Halo Fanboys. The next most annoying thing next to Jonas Brothers fanboys.
  •  11-04-2009, 8:02 PM 766021 in reply to 765265

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    Korther:

    Offensive Bias:EXCELLENT NEWS! I have Word back! *Breaks out the bubbly* So! Writing will be a lot more efficient :)

    Tch, I just write all my stuff off the top of my head when I open the post :P

    Ooo. Someone who writes like me? Sounds like a challenge, I will be more unprepared than you.


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  11-05-2009, 2:21 PM 766403 in reply to 766021

    Re: The Three Kingdoms Story Thread

    I think it is time I presented you with a teaser of things to come.

    Chapter Five

     

    The Scourge

     

    The creature, wearing red robes, tattered at the edges and giving off a reek of rotting flesh; held a steel gauntleted hand over the blue orb. In it, visions of blood and death appeared. The images became clearer, clearly showing a battle. The screams were blood chilling and satisfying to the creature. It stared until it saw what it wanted. The orcs. They were cutting and slashing their way through everything. It came to an image where two of them killed twenty opponents together. He hissed with pleasure at the spatter of the blood. It clenched its fist tight, and made the image freeze. It exerted its magic, but this was worth the exertion. He examined the way they fought. They were messy, brutal and loud. But they were incredibly efficient. Over the thousands of years it had been staring into the orb, it had seen many warrior races, but none such as these. It remembered the past races it had seen. Many of them, many had now fallen. But the orcs… The orcs would be brought back under the control of the dark king. They should never have left His service. He, most mighty of sovereigns. It unclenched its fist and gave a casual wave over the orb. The images disappeared to be replaced by a thick haze, swirling until its master would require it to see again. It drew in a rattling breath, and turned to the hooded guards behind it. It was stood in a large circular room, built from stone, surrounded by a green mist that gave it an evil hue, the room was green tinted and light came from an unseen source, but in these dark and evil places, light itself couldn’t stay pure, this light being twisted and somehow dark in itself. The creature drew in a great, rattling breath and spoke. Its words were chilling, as though it brought the coldness of winter whenever sound emitted from it.

    You saw what I saw… I require of you a service. There is a great battle to happen. See to it that you are there when it starts. Report back to me everything that happened as you saw it. Go now…” At the last word, it emitted a breath, which sounded like howling wind. It turned again to the orb, staring into the swirling mist and contemplating the invasion. It would serve His evil purposes, without fail. When he turned again, the guards had gone. No trace of them ever having stood there remained. They were the perfect spies for the mission.

     


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  11-05-2009, 2:49 PM 766423 in reply to 697492

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    does no-one realise this is a complete word to word copy of the three kingdoms script, just with covenent instead of rectoss and that jackal bit.
  •  11-05-2009, 3:05 PM 766440 in reply to 766423

    Re: The Three Kingdoms: The Beginning of The End (Book One)

    AHTFrigate:does no-one realise this is a complete word to word copy of the three kingdoms script, just with covenent instead of rectoss and that jackal bit.

    My story has nothing to do with Halo? Why would Covenant and Jackals be in there?


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
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