Part One: The Czech

Last post 11-04-2009, 12:27 PM by Offensive Bias. 68 replies.
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  •  11-01-2009, 6:29 PM 763064 in reply to 763055

    Re: Part One: The Czech

    Indeed...

    Well, I will have a new chapter up tomorrow, maybe Tuesday, but I would just like to know first, how many of you want Hans to escape, or get captured?


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  •  11-01-2009, 6:36 PM 763090 in reply to 763064

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    i want him to be captured, then executed, then bring in his son, who pwns all the bad guys.  for revenge.
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  •  11-01-2009, 6:38 PM 763095 in reply to 763090

    Re: Part One: The Czech

    Hans isn't goint to die! I haven't even established character for him yet!

    One vote for captured.


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  •  11-01-2009, 6:40 PM 763100 in reply to 763095

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    I say escape.

    And when you're going to kill of a character you usually want to make them liked in some aspect, so the reader can be engaged further. It grabs the reader's attention when a kind or friendly character is abruptly killed. You will see things like this many times in my story.


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  •  11-01-2009, 6:42 PM 763107 in reply to 763100

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    I will kill characters off, but I am also going to kill off millions (Literally) of unnamed soldiers. So far to die, is Unnamed soldier, numbers 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9.

    1 Escape.

    1 Capture.


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  •  11-01-2009, 6:45 PM 763119 in reply to 763107

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    ok then dont kill him. yet.
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  •  11-01-2009, 6:46 PM 763124 in reply to 763119

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    I'm still debating with myself if Hans should die... He is going to be the main German character. I have a main Italian, Japanese, American, British, French and Greek. The Greek character is just a small part, he will only appear in the section that deals with the invasion of Crete.
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  •  11-01-2009, 6:47 PM 763127 in reply to 763119

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    Captured.

    Being captured can really bring out much more in a person--that's when they are really themselves and it can really bring along character development.  Every running away scene is the same--run to the forest, some random lady hides you for a while, you make a friend and you escape back to Germany or something.


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  •  11-01-2009, 6:49 PM 763133 in reply to 763127

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    Yeah, captured is easier to work with, I agree.

    1 Escape.

    2 Capture.


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  •  11-02-2009, 12:24 PM 763831 in reply to 763133

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    have my BACKFEED!!!

    i like it and i think its great, you get him captured so the readers can see hans breakdown, then we'll emphasize with him.


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  •  11-02-2009, 12:42 PM 763844 in reply to 763831

    Re: Part One: The Czech

    captured or escaped, Hans is a survivor. that line will NOT die.
    i personally like escape. i feel there's often too many, "break out" scenes in FF. however, they have their place.
    but altimately, it's up to you, OB.
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  •  11-02-2009, 1:16 PM 763855 in reply to 763844

    Re: Part One: The Czech

    Captured has the most votes, it seems Hans is destined to be a prisoner :'( Tears for him. But I will get started right away, expect more reader based voting, I want to know which direction you want me to take this thing in.
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  •  11-02-2009, 2:26 PM 763885 in reply to 763855

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    Offensive Bias:Captured has the most votes, it seems Hans is destined to be a prisoner :'( Tears for him. But I will get started right away, expect more reader based voting, I want to know which direction you want me to take this thing in.

    lol

    no one likes Hans 


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  •  11-02-2009, 2:28 PM 763888 in reply to 763885

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    He survives, but to see how you just have to wait and see ;)
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  •  11-02-2009, 2:32 PM 763891 in reply to 763888

    Re: Part One: The Czech

    will hans get out by seducing the gaurds with a german dance, then quickly escape while they are beffuddled with infatuation?
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