Halo: Seed of Orion (Chapter Two up!)

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  •  06-23-2009, 12:25 PM 631270

    Halo: Seed of Orion (Chapter Two up!)

    I've decided to write a new story, going for a much more ordinary aspect to Halo. Should make for an interesting read. The Prologue isn't too revealing, but I'll write more soon. Try to guess what the title means.

    Prologue

    Umbra was what they called him. It wasn't his real name of course, but it was the only one anyone knew him as.

    Not much was known about the head of the Office of Naval Intelligence; searches on computers, even the ones with top level access, would yield no results. If you fed a composite of his face to the UNSC data banks, there would be no positive matches.

    He gave nothing away when spoke too ,thought Doctor Catherine Halsey as she nervously awaited his verdict on the files she had given him. A blank face devoid of any emotion. His hair, usually covered by a plain, navy blue cap, was completely shaven, as was his face.

    His age was near impossible to discern as well. He had pale white skin, evidence of him spending all of his time indoors; scouring file after file. From his raspy voice, and a cold, steely glint to his blue, void like eyes, he could have been as young as Halsey, or as old as her Grandfather.

    Halsey studied his features constantly throughout the silence as Umbra read, attempting to catch a shift in his features, perhaps a slight frown as he read. But she saw nothing, he could have been made of plastic.

    As the minutes crept by, and as the boredom set in, and Halsey found herself glancing around the office of perhaps the most powerful man in the whole of the United Nations Space Corps.

    He had very few personal affects, she noted with little surprise. Nothing that would give away any sign he had a private life. No photographs of a wife or kids, no medals, nothing. She found it unlikely that a man like this would ever have a family, but he could be an entirely different person outside of this room for all she knew.

    The thing that caught her eye was the large motto above Umbra's head, on the far wall. Engraved in a huge golden plaque were the words "Semper Vigilans." Halsey sub-consciously translated the Latin – Always Vigilant. The motto of ONI.

    Underneath the motto was an equally imposing logo, which was also affiliated with ONI. A circle within an upside down kite, the kite imprisoned within a circle, which was in turn encased within another circle. Halsey suddenly realised she was looking at an eye, with the words "Office of Naval Intelligence" clear on the rim of it. Remembering all the security cameras she had been exposed to as she journeyed deep into this room under the Reach CASTLE facility, Halsey deemed the logo apt.

    "Well." A hoarse, emotionless voice stated simply, bringing Halsey's attention back down to him, Umbra.

    "Is everything in order sir?" Halsey asked of the shadowy man nervously, unable to keep emotion out of her voice as he managed to.

    "It seems sufficient." He replied slowly. "I do hope you have chosen wisely though Doctor, this operation is costing the UNSC a lot of money. And if word of it leaked out to the public, the effect on morale would be appalling. You will keep everything under control." It was not a question, or at least Halsey assumed it wasn't. It was difficult to tell.

    "I promise I will sir. Permission to carry on with proposed plan?" She usually wasn't so formal with high ranking officers, often it was the other way around, with her being the one respected. But Umbra had a presence which stripped you of any and all confidence.

    "Permission granted." Umbra rasped, handing Halsey back the papers. "You are dismissed Doctor."

    At his word, two ONI guards came in through the automatic door, their faces hidden behind reflective visors. Umbra hadn't called, and so Halsey wondered how the guards had known when to come in. A button, she assumed.

    She knew what was coming, and did not struggle as they tied a blindfold around her eyes. The location of Umbra had to remain a secret, after all.

    "Oh, and Halsey?" He called after her as she was led out of the room by the two guards.

    "Good luck."


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 1:00 PM 631346 in reply to 631270

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    it's fine but not injoyable
    American railroads.....killing hobos scince 1826
  •  06-23-2009, 1:02 PM 631352 in reply to 631346

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    You mean it lacks the fast paced action you've attributed to me as a writer? Don't worry, that shall come soon, ready to sate your testosterone pumped body.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 1:05 PM 631358 in reply to 631352

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    okay thats it will you write the chapter in my story after sticky
    American railroads.....killing hobos scince 1826
  •  06-23-2009, 1:06 PM 631362 in reply to 631352

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    As always Wolverfrog brings another well written FF to the Library, good job.
    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  06-23-2009, 1:22 PM 631383 in reply to 631362

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    i was jokeing frog
    American railroads.....killing hobos scince 1826
  •  06-23-2009, 1:47 PM 631404 in reply to 631383

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Don't worry Wolver...expectations are low here. (lol, jk)

    And:

    Where can you post fanfiction on bungie.net? is there a certain forum or what?


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  06-23-2009, 2:36 PM 631473 in reply to 631404

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Try the Gallery Forum http://www.bungie.net/forums/topics.aspx?forumID=4

    Also, what did you think of the Prologue?

    Ps - Can no one guess what the title means? It's good if you don't, because it'll all make sense later.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 5:08 PM 631661 in reply to 631473

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Good job wolver

    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx
  •  06-23-2009, 5:48 PM 631722 in reply to 631661

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Thanks for the feedback guys, I've got Part one done but it just needs some refining.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 5:57 PM 631738 in reply to 631722

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    I like the way you set the story, Umbra seems like a shady man indeed. And Halsey, for once in her life wasn't the one in charge, and it clearly unnerved her. They way she actually saw him as a superior, and was intimidated by him. Excellent display of Halsey's amotions. Great job.

    And Seed of Orion? Taking a wild guess here, but Orion is a Contellation, and Orions arm is the arm of the Milky Way in which our Solar System is situated. Would it have something to do with the Humans being an interstellar race by this time? And thus "Reaching" Orion, if you will?


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  06-23-2009, 6:01 PM 631746 in reply to 631738

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Offensive Bias:

    And Seed of Orion? Taking a wild guess here, but Orion is a Contellation, and Orions arm is the arm of the Milky Way in which our Solar System is situated. Would it have something to do with the Humans being an interstellar race by this time? And thus "Reaching" Orion, if you will?

     

    Good guess, but, no. Try typing Orion into Halopedia.


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 6:02 PM 631747 in reply to 631738

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    I agree with Offensive on the Seed of Orion. And its funny how this already has almost the same amount of comments as my new story and it's only the prologue :P

    When the pin is pulled, Mr. Grenade is not our friend

    Gamertag= xxMrGrenadexx

    New story- The Resistance
    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/627177.aspx
  •  06-23-2009, 6:03 PM 631750 in reply to 631747

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Mr Grenade:I agree with Offensive on the Seed of Orion. And its funny how this already has almost the same amount of comments as my new story and it's only the prologue :P

    All I can say to that is - I'm Wolverfrog

    PS - Just turned 14 three minutes ago, happy birthday me!


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  06-23-2009, 6:07 PM 631757 in reply to 631747

    Re: Halo: Seed of Orion - Prologue

    Ah! SPARTAN I's.
    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
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