MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

I beg to differ, I read them. I just sometimes forget the title and can't find it

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Design a Faction

http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx

Good story, I really liked it!

Shadow Titan:

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

I beg to differ, I read them. I just sometimes forget the title and can't find it

Shadow I have a whole new on nobody reads

 

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A grenade need not speak, for when he blows up, a blast speaks for him
The assassin returns in Klone 666 2.0

Yeah this is a very good story, there are errors, but for making a new chapter every 1-2 days, thats amazing.I wish I was that creative.  You are basically following what I figured what would happen after Halo 3(Elite/Human Alliance,  combined technologies, etc.)  The one thing that may be able to be incorporated into this story is the stronger fusion reactors now, because I can't remember where I read it, but it said in one of the Halo books that the Humans' fusion technology was superior to the Covenant's.  The only reason they had more power is because of how many reactors they had on one ship.  The Unyielding Hierophant had 512 fusion reactors I believe?  You could also use the NOVAs somewhere in the story. That would be the biggest explosion in any movie ever made if they made Ghosts of Onyx into a movie :P  That and maybe they could have used one of those Super Mac Guns on one of our capital ships.  Anways, I will stop rambling now.  Oh, and was Muerte completely destroyed, as in asteroids?, or was it just glassed like a normal Covenant weapon?  Don't tell me if ur going to answer it in another chapter, no spoilers plox. :P

Sorry for the Wall of Text XD

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

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The Night Angel is back, did anyone miss me?

Although i have to appologise for what i did with the post, aloy has let me only post with this account, so there is no way of getting the night angel account back...

XxJumpingJetxX:

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

Why would I leave?

JUMPINGJET!!!!!

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

XxJumpingJetxX:

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

 wahey JJ, good to see ya. and try and not get banned again..... oh yeah good read.

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just call me R!zZle BiZzl£, it was my '08 account... i joined on 09-19-2008.
WHAT? WHAT? WHAT?.....YEEAAH!

I smoke a fat pound of grass, and fall on my ass,
faster than a fat ***, who sat down too fast.

GLORY GLORY MAN UTD!

X D3a7hscy7h3X:

Yeah this is a very good story, there are errors, but for making a new chapter every 1-2 days, thats amazing.I wish I was that creative.  You are basically following what I figured what would happen after Halo 3(Elite/Human Alliance,  combined technologies, etc.)  The one thing that may be able to be incorporated into this story is the stronger fusion reactors now, because I can't remember where I read it, but it said in one of the Halo books that the Humans' fusion technology was superior to the Covenant's.  The only reason they had more power is because of how many reactors they had on one ship.  The Unyielding Hierophant had 512 fusion reactors I believe?  You could also use the NOVAs somewhere in the story. That would be the biggest explosion in any movie ever made if they made Ghosts of Onyx into a movie :P  That and maybe they could have used one of those Super Mac Guns on one of our capital ships.  Anways, I will stop rambling now.  Oh, and was Muerte completely destroyed, as in asteroids?, or was it just glassed like a normal Covenant weapon?  Don't tell me if ur going to answer it in another chapter, no spoilers plox. :P

Sorry for the Wall of Text XD

No sweat, and thanks. Muerte was destroyed by a new covenant weapon, which I will reveal in the next chapter along with the new species that joined.

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Design a Faction

http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx

riddle bang:

XxJumpingJetxX:

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

 wahey JJ, good to see ya. and try and not get banned again..... oh yeah good read.

 

I'm fed up of getting banned, this is like my 1, 2, 3, 4.....5'th account!

 But as in my sig I have already said I dont want any trouble with Aloy, i just want to come and hope that some sence of community and be revived here although there is not much to revive anymore.... I guess thats what TCF is for now.

 

Anyway, it was fun here so i am hopeing to stay! :P

 

Plus i wanted to find out who this famous FJ dude was.

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The Night Angel is back, did anyone miss me?

Although i have to appologise for what i did with the post, aloy has let me only post with this account, so there is no way of getting the night angel account back...

XxJumpingJetxX:

riddle bang:

XxJumpingJetxX:

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

 wahey JJ, good to see ya. and try and not get banned again..... oh yeah good read.

 

I'm fed up of getting banned, this is like my 1, 2, 3, 4.....5'th account!

 But as in my sig I have already said I dont want any trouble with Aloy, i just want to come and hope that some sence of community and be revived here although there is not much to revive anymore.... I guess thats what TCF is for now.

 

Anyway, it was fun here so i am hopeing to stay! :P

 

Plus i wanted to find out who this famous FJ dude was.

FJ is just a good Halo Wars player, nothing more than that.

And of course OB is still here! He's single-handedly keeping this place running.

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"Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

Yeah, I'm not going to be able to get Ch 4 up. Going to a party. Might get it up monday

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Design a Faction

http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/795978.aspx

tmspartan:

XxJumpingJetxX:

riddle bang:

XxJumpingJetxX:

Yay, Its nice to see there are still FF's going on here.

 

I am going to write a new one.

 

Offensive Bias:

MrGrenade:Good job shadow. *sigh* Nobody reads anything of mine

Join the club Grenato. I have two readers in four days...

 

OB! Your still here!

 wahey JJ, good to see ya. and try and not get banned again..... oh yeah good read.

 

I'm fed up of getting banned, this is like my 1, 2, 3, 4.....5'th account!

 But as in my sig I have already said I dont want any trouble with Aloy, i just want to come and hope that some sence of community and be revived here although there is not much to revive anymore.... I guess thats what TCF is for now.

 

Anyway, it was fun here so i am hopeing to stay! :P

 

Plus i wanted to find out who this famous FJ dude was.

FJ is just a good Halo Wars player, nothing more than that.

And of course OB is still here! He's single-handedly keeping this place running.

0.o I am?

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In every loss, in every lie.
In every truth that you'd deny!
And each regret and each goodbye
Was a mistake too great to hide.
And your voice was all I heard. That I get what I deserve.
-Never forget Offensive Bias.

I guess you are OB, well done! :P

 

Also its nice to see people still remember me around here.

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The Night Angel is back, did anyone miss me?

Although i have to appologise for what i did with the post, aloy has let me only post with this account, so there is no way of getting the night angel account back...

hey, what ever happened to this story?  I wanted to read Chapter 4.