The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

Last post 11-14-2009, 2:43 PM by Offensive Bias. 104 replies.
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  •  06-03-2009, 3:39 PM 612456 in reply to 612449

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Oooo another OB FF can't wait to see the real action.
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  •  06-03-2009, 3:39 PM 612459 in reply to 612449

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    I read them a few hours ago, just didn't comment. The landing force get on Doisac, the main character has his ass saved, you introduce gavin :D.
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  •  06-03-2009, 3:41 PM 612463 in reply to 612459

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Lol. I thought you would like it.
    In my times, the darkened days,
    Evil invaded the world.
    We farmers,
    We workers of the Red Union,
    We united and slaughtered them all.
    The brave soul,
    Above the evil,
    Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
    - Ruski
  •  06-03-2009, 3:46 PM 612471 in reply to 612463

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Gavin should be in it more!

    And almost finished the Prologue.


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  •  06-03-2009, 3:59 PM 612482 in reply to 612471

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!
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  •  06-03-2009, 4:05 PM 612490 in reply to 612482

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    Wow that was interesting, going through each of the five senses, very orginal.

    What about the Sixth sense though? (ROFL)


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  06-03-2009, 4:07 PM 612491 in reply to 612482

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    Offensive Bias:Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!

     

    What!!! 


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  •  06-03-2009, 4:08 PM 612496 in reply to 612482

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Offensive Bias:Okay, there's the chapter! Enjoy, wrote in half an hour, it should be pure gold!
    It was good. Nice pun, btw.
    In my times, the darkened days,
    Evil invaded the world.
    We farmers,
    We workers of the Red Union,
    We united and slaughtered them all.
    The brave soul,
    Above the evil,
    Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
    - Ruski
  •  06-03-2009, 4:09 PM 612497 in reply to 612491

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    READ IT!

    After the hype for the *** chapter, I expected more comments...


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  •  06-03-2009, 4:11 PM 612502 in reply to 612497

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

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  •  06-03-2009, 4:12 PM 612504 in reply to 612497

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    It was good and interesting, at least you get comments on yours, I just posted the Prologue for Spirits of Reach and I get nothing...

    Well it is a good pilot perspective, five senses very original as I said before.


    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."
  •  06-03-2009, 4:13 PM 612505 in reply to 612502

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    riddle bang:wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

    I worked hard on that to make the scene as clear as I could. To make you feel the pain of the Pilot as he burned to death in a small, confined space, and the only hope for his survival, is embedded in a wall of flame.


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  •  06-03-2009, 4:14 PM 612506 in reply to 612504

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    tmspartan:

    It was good and interesting, at least you get comments on yours, I just posted the Prologue for Spirits of Reach and I get nothing...

    Well it is a good pilot perspective, five senses very original as I said before.

    Oh, I read. I love the way you told me what happened at the battle for Reach, and then just whammed in your Plot at the end.


    SPQR! An ambitious historical project, coming soon. Check the Library for early version test writes. Recommended for anyone with a love of history.
  •  06-03-2009, 4:27 PM 612520 in reply to 612506

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Very Interesting, looking forward to more
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  •  06-03-2009, 4:27 PM 612522 in reply to 612505

    Re: The Legend Of The Golden Eagles

    Offensive Bias:

    riddle bang:wow! just *** awsome! this IS pure gold! i liked the way you set it out as well.

    I worked hard on that to make the scene as clear as I could. To make you feel the pain of the Pilot as he burned to death in a small, confined space, and the only hope for his survival, is embedded in a wall of flame.

    A very bad way to die, I might add.
    In my times, the darkened days,
    Evil invaded the world.
    We farmers,
    We workers of the Red Union,
    We united and slaughtered them all.
    The brave soul,
    Above the evil,
    Planted our inspiration atop their burning cities.
    - Ruski
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