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My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

Last post 10-06-2009, 9:54 PM by Klubhouse16. 34 replies.
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  •  05-05-2009, 1:54 AM 577870 in reply to 577770

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    That's not the way it works guys. You don't just say "Read mine now?" It just doesn't work like that. He doesnt have to. Just come on here and read his story without advertising. I'm not all over him begging him to read mine now am I? Good story, a few punctuational errors. Overral, it is worth keeping an eye on.
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  •  05-05-2009, 2:51 AM 577880 in reply to 577870

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Its al gud keep goin
    Time after time....
    If you fal,l I will catch you, ill be waiting...
    Time after time....

    I like songs =)

  •  05-05-2009, 8:15 AM 578031 in reply to 577880

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Thanks guys, will get Chp. 3 up and running today...nice to have positive feedback :)

    and yeah, Grammer (or is it Grammar? lol) isn't my strong suit, but I love to make stories nonetheless.

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

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  •  05-06-2009, 9:49 PM 579735 in reply to 578031

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Klubhouse16:

    Thanks guys, will get Chp. 3 up and running today...nice to have positive feedback :)

    and yeah, Grammer (or is it Grammar? lol) isn't my strong suit, but I love to make stories nonetheless.

    Is it weird that I'm quoting myself? lol, I did say I would get Chp. 3 up yesterday but yes I lied :( (ahh I fail) but I have Chp. 3 up, it gives the story a plot for which I can work off of!

     

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  05-10-2009, 9:12 PM 583632 in reply to 577770

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    man make more
    American railroads.....killing hobos scince 1826

  •  05-13-2009, 10:20 PM 587798 in reply to 583632

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Apologies for the slow story (I'm lazy I know don't beat me up!)

    but I do have chapter 4 up! enjoy!

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  07-18-2009, 11:20 PM 658727 in reply to 587798

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    getting back into writing a bit more.

    Please Enjoy.

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  07-19-2009, 9:44 PM 659792 in reply to 658727

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    I like where this is going and will definitely follow it. I just think the Arbiter could talk more properly like he does normally. You could also have the Shipmaster use his real name because that would be cool and original instead of Arbiter this, Arbiter that, but that's just a suggestion. I liked the Vatican idea a lot too.
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    GT-Spartan H19

  •  07-19-2009, 10:18 PM 659836 in reply to 659792

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Spartan H19:I like where this is going and will definitely follow it. I just think the Arbiter could talk more properly like he does normally. You could also have the Shipmaster use his real name because that would be cool and original instead of Arbiter this, Arbiter that, but that's just a suggestion. I liked the Vatican idea a lot too.

    ah, a reply! *gasp* lol

    yeah I see your point. only problem is I don't know the Arbiters name...wait I think I do..

    is It Ripa? or is there more to the name? (or am I awfully off?)

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  07-19-2009, 11:05 PM 659871 in reply to 659836

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    Klubhouse16:

    Spartan H19:I like where this is going and will definitely follow it. I just think the Arbiter could talk more properly like he does normally. You could also have the Shipmaster use his real name because that would be cool and original instead of Arbiter this, Arbiter that, but that's just a suggestion. I liked the Vatican idea a lot too.

    ah, a reply! *gasp* lol

    yeah I see your point. only problem is I don't know the Arbiters name...wait I think I do..

    is It Ripa? or is there more to the name? (or am I awfully off?)

    Halo Wars Arbiter- Ripa' Moramee

    Halo 2&3 Arbiter- Thel Vadamee

    "Die?"Kurt laughed."Didn't you know?"he told the Elite. "...Spartans never die."

  •  07-19-2009, 11:17 PM 659877 in reply to 659871

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    thank you for that.

    and on a side note LOLOLOL just wrote chapter six and had Ripa instead of Thel XD

    *goes to fix now*

    thank you again.

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  07-20-2009, 6:13 AM 660187 in reply to 659877

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    It's very good, with an engaging storyline. I look forward to what will come of the proposed Elite-Brute alliance.

     

    Keep it up!

  •  07-20-2009, 7:13 AM 660206 in reply to 660187

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    yes continue please

    o and dont be alarmed

    its socom 427 but with one different number ha

    Did that Spartan just jack my tank?! What the hell?!
    oh well I got twenty more hahah

    check the join date of Socom531, before 2009! I am also Socom427

  •  07-22-2009, 10:08 PM 664523 in reply to 660206

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    *was alarmed but now is calm*

    :D hi again, Chap. 7 is up

    ENJOY

    STOP....Hammer time! - Brute Chieftain

    She blinded me....WITH SCIENCE! - Professor Anders

    They see me rollin......they hatin - Prophet of Regret

    Trolls are my Slayer Task...BEWARE!

  •  07-23-2009, 11:52 AM 665122 in reply to 664523

    Re: My First Halo Story. (or a FF I suppose it's called...)

    OK, just read this, it's a great story btw and I love how you didn't make the Chief overpowered, but when Rtas(the shipmaster), was talking to Thel about why the brutes were the only possible ally I facepalmed, the reason for this is the majority of the grunts actually sided with the elites during the great schism, proving that they do have the courage to betray the prophets, the majority of the hunters also sided with the elites, proving that they do have a political view, not major but I thought you might like to know for future chapters.
    Spess mehrens
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