[FF] Halo 3: Insurrection (COMPLETE)

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  •  04-16-2009, 10:35 PM 553595 in reply to 546274

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    It won't let me reply, keeps saying forum error.

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-16-2009, 10:36 PM 553596 in reply to 553595

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    well u got it right? send me a new PM

    dont say it over loud

    this is a secret

    haha



    FFTS

  •  04-16-2009, 10:39 PM 553600 in reply to 553596

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Check now

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-16-2009, 10:40 PM 553603 in reply to 553600

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Wolverfrog49:Check now

    yeah i got em bro

    we ll talk i nthe PM



    FFTS

  •  04-17-2009, 12:38 AM 553709 in reply to 553603

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Twelve now up)

    Now you must wait....Mwhahahah

    Part 12 : A leader in disgrace

    R'tas Vadum, Fleetmaster of the glorious Sangheili empire, paced the deck of his Flagship, Shadow of Intent. Below him, Sangheili of the highest rank operated the equiment nessecary to keep the huge battle cruiser in the air. They were approaching the target, and fast.

    "Fleetmaster, the Human ship heads towards us. What would you have us do?" An Ultra who was in charge of co ordinating the offensive capabilties of the ship spoke.

    R'tas cast a long look outside the tinted observation window of the mighty ship, and beheld the UNSC Destroyer hurlting towards them at a dangerous speed. The Human ship, if allowed close enough, would wreck untold havoc with the Mass Accelerated Cannons it carried. The Fleetmaster had to make a decision, quickly.

    Yet how could he condemn the lives of so many innocents? In the brief time he had worked with the Humans, he had seen how their forces were assembled. They were not trained from birth, as most Elites were, many were just simple civillians who had signed up to protect their homes. He hesitated in giving the order to fire.

    "Fleetmaster!" The Ultra spoke with more urgency. The Destroyer had begun to swivel it's Canons around.

    Realising there was no other way, R'tas dropped his head in pity.

    "Open....open fire." He spoke, hating himself for giving the command. He felt a vibration course through the chasis of the ship as the Plasma modulators in it's turrets warmed up. Suddenly, with a jolt, ten giant bolts of burning death coursed through the empty reaches of space and crashed into the Destroyer's engines. The Human ship stopped in it's motion to attack, the back of it ablaze with a vivid fire. It made a desperate effort to retreat, turning around, but was caught in the side by another bolt of plasma. The Destroyer began to glow, then exploded into a shower of debris as it's fusion core overloaded.

    R'tas felt the pang as hundreds of lives were suddenlt extinguished in a shower of blue death, he saw Human bodies hurtle out into space. With his sharp eyesight, he noticed some were still alive, desperately trying to inhale non-existent air. R'tas felt sick.

    "A mighty blow Fleetmaster!" The Ultra spoke enthusiastically. R'tas glanced around, and saw similar expressions of joy upon the faces of the rest of his Brothers. So why did he feel so empty inside?

    "Yes, a mighty blow indeed...." R'tas muttered, even as he walked through the lively corridors to his own quarters. He reached them, and, reaching behind him, closed the door and locked it. Slowly, R'tas trudged over to a corner, and sat down, knees brought up to his chin.

    What was wrong with him? During his time as Special Operations leader of the Covenant, R'tas had ordered the destruction of countless ships, sometimes opting to press the button himself. So why, now, did he feel so much remorse at the destruction of that ship?

    He couldn't carry on like this, he wouldn't. For the first time since commiting the deed, R'tas regretted plunging the Sword into Lord Hood's worthless gut.

    Why had their argument gone thus? Why could R'tas not have reached a diplomatic solution? He cursed himself for not following the Arbiter's wise council, for not allowing him to accompany him to the meeting. It had been a matter of honour. R'tas scorned himself. Honour! What a foolish, primitive concept. Why he had adhered to it for so long was beyond him.

    But what was he to do? The Arbiter had abandoned him to the mess, prefferring to walk his own path. Where he was now was a mystery. More than anything, R'tas wanted to stop the war, but he knew the Senators would never agree to it, many were well versed in the old ways, for them, Honour was a way of life. To them, to back out of a war would be worse than death.

    All was hopeless.

    Suddenly, there came a loud knock at the door. R'tas growled, yet more bloodthirsty wretches eager to please their Fleetmaster.

    "What is it you want?" R'tas called out, he was surprised to hear traces of distress in his voice.

    "Fleet master, a report has come in from Sangheilios." The Elite spoke. R'tas still did not open the door.

    "I care not of the monthly tax revenue totals brother, burn it." R'tas replied with distaste.

    "But, noble one, it speaks of the Arbiter...and the Demon himself!" Came a frantic reply.

    Jumping up from the floor, R'tas harried to the door and unlocked it with a press of a button. An Elite minor was standing, facing him.

    "The Arbiter? And the Sparta- Demon you say? What bald faced lies are these?" R'tas asked of the Minor in anger.

    "No lies Fleetmaster, read and you shall see."

    With an eager hand, R'tas snatched the papers from the Elite, and frantically became scimming the front pages.

    "What's this? The Demon was held captive for a week and I was not informed? What heresy is this?"

    The Elite facing him became timid.

    "I know not Fleet Master, but it sounds like the Kaidon of Vadam wished to keep all the glory for himself."

    "We'll see how much glory he recieves when he slowly burns on a fire!" R'tas spoke in fury.

    "There is no need noble one. Read onward."

    R'tas leafed through the next few pages, his mutilated jaw widening in shock.

    "The Demon escaped? From one of the most heavily guarded Citadels on the whole of Sangheilios? Were all the Guards asleep?"

    "Nay, Fleet Master, it was during the execution ceremony. I believe there were certain....complications. I here a Scarab was involved, a Spec ops team sent to destroy it have even reported sighting an Oracle."

    R'tas feigned anger at the failiure, but in reality he was pleased. The Spartan had survived. He would stop this petty fighting, R'tas was sure of it. And, he noted with glee as he read on, the Arbiter was with him.

    "You have done an excellent job conveying this message to me brother, from now on you shall be recognised by all as Major. Head down to the equipment bay and don some new armour. Tell them I sent you. If they are foolish enough to protest, come find me."

    The newly appointed Major was stunned. He had been expected to be demoted for being the bearer of bad news, working under the command of a Grunt. Instead, quite the opposite had occurred.

    "Thank you Fleet Master." The Major departed, a spring in his step.

    Sufficiently cheered up, R'tas headed back down to the Navigation deck.

    "Sangheili!" He called out to the operators. "Set a course for Sangheilios."

    "We are going to find out what happened there."


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-17-2009, 8:34 AM 553954 in reply to 553595

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    wow, jus got done reading prologue to the most current chapter, and all I can say is wow.  It started a littly shakey, but hot *** is this a good story!
    You've just been hit by the MAC Blast!
    Head to the Library and check out my FF UNSC:Unification, CH 3 is now up!
  •  04-21-2009, 10:59 PM 561018 in reply to 553954

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

     

    Wolverfrog: I know what is and isn't canon. I even write my own fan fiction. 

    After reading this I have a very hard time believing the first sentence...

    But it's not bad writing.

    Now before your head expands, it's not great writing either.

    Every writer has something to work on.

    Keep practicing.


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  04-22-2009, 12:25 AM 561119 in reply to 561018

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Thanks very much Chuckles. What's wrong with the first sentence exactly?

    Oh, and I do for the most part know Canon. It's just that I break it sometimes in stories to make the plot better...


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-25-2009, 12:26 PM 565816 in reply to 561119

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    A wall of very important text awaits, enjoy.

    Part 13: The Truth of it all....

    "Long ago John, my creators, the Forerunner's as you call them; were the dominant power of the galaxy you reside in. They were powerful indeed, and accomplished much with their might; you yourself have seen but a fraction of what they could do through the Halo array."

    John was sat in a seat, his hands clasped tightly together and his brow furrowed underneath the reflective dome of his helmet. Opposite to him, Mendicant Bias was recounting a tale, he had an avid audience, the usually practical Sergeant Johnson was leaned in, cigar in his mouth but un-chewed. Even the Arbiter was listening, through the use of the ship's speaker system.

    "For aeons they advanced through the ages, documenting every life form, terraforming planets, upholding fully the Mantle that had been passed down to them."

    "But they were not the first." The Monitor spoke in a dramatic tone.

    "The Precursors..." John breathed, remembering what he had read in the Forerunner terminals scattered throughout the body of both the Ark and Halo.

    "Correct John. Millennia before my creators had even developed a primitive form of speech, the Precursors were advancing throughout the stars, going above and beyond the limits of the galaxy; they were intergalactic."

    "Nothing was impossible for them, they were an unstoppable force, they kept the Universe in peace. And in the unlikely event that something should happen to them, they created the concept of the Mantle. In the event that the Precursors would be destroyed, this mantle would be passed down to the best suited race to continue their legacy. It happened that this race was that of my creator's. And thus, when by a horrible accident the Precursors were dethroned from the seat of power, the Forerunners carried on their work. Or at least, that was what was supposed to happen."

    John paused at the revelation, and leaned back in the reclining chair, thinking hard. Johnson had an extreme look of puzzlement upon his face.

    "I'm afraid you've lost me Light bulb, what the hell are you talking about? You understandin' this Chief?" He inquired of both.

    John flashed back to the long philosophical talks with Deja, how each and every Spartan was as intelligent as a noble prize winning scientist. Not only was he one of the greatest fighters of the time, he was also one of the greatest minds.

    "I understand. But Mendicant, how exactly were the Precursors destroyed?"

    "It is a sad tale John, one which my master's documented carefully. Patches were of course, missing from their information, but I have since then fully come to understand what happened, due to an unforeseen event."

    "Do go on." John spoke curtly.

    "Very well. As I said earlier, the Precursors were indisputably the most intelligent beings the whole of the Universe has ever known. Every great mystery ever known was revealed to them, and thus to my master's, mostly anyway."

    "Wait? Every mystery?" Johnson asked.

    "Indeed Sergeant, and before you ask, no, I shall not reveal on whether or not there is truly a God, or life after death. There are some things you must find out yourself."

    Johnson seemed like he was going to push further, but he suddenly realised that perhaps the Monitor was right, and pressed no more.

    "However, one problem was still presented to them. Every organism, no matter how advanced, must die some day. It is inevitable. But the Precursors set out to change that. They set out to cheat death. And what's more, Reclaimers, is that they accomplished it."

    Johnson spat out his cigar in surprise.

    "That's not possible Light bulb, no one can live forever. Are your circuits scrambled or something."

    Mendicant Bias gave a slight chuckle.

    "Why is it not possible Sergeant? The mind is just, in essence, a long string of code, programmed in a very complex manner. My mind is built like that also, just in a less fleshy way than yours. So if all the mind is made of is code, can it not be preserved?"

    John was beginning to understand the basics of what was going on.

    "But you can't store organic code in a computer. That's why, when we create smart AIs, we have to convert the brain into binary. But when you do that, whilst the AI may retain the same personality and intelligence of the brain, it will not have it's memories, nor will it be the person who once possessed the brain." He stated, challenging the Monitor's words.

    "An astute observation John, and you are right. Organic matter cannot be placed within a machine. That is why, when the Precursors wished to transfer the mind of one of them, they placed it within a artificially created organism, a living computer if you may. An outstanding, and uncomprehending feat to us, but it happened." The Monitor paused, no doubt enjoying it's audience.

    "Whenever a Precursors' physical body died, the mind would be transferred into this living computer, where it could continue to think and communicate. As well as that, the alive computer had the ability to craft bodies for the stored Precursors out of pure calcium, and the minds of the once dead would be transferred into these, linked to the central unit."

    "That's amazing..." John breathed, thinking of the ramifications of this. "But what went wrong?"

    "At some point, the computer became sentient, and that's when the trouble started. It assessed the prowess of the Precursors, and deemed them unworthy. It decided that they were to be killed. Now, being linked to the minds of so many of the dead, it had complete understanding of the Precursor way of thinking."

    "Every attempt made by them to shut it down was foiled, and through the use of viral minions, it slowly began to absorb all the still living Precursors into it. Not only that, but the ones which were linked were completely under it's dominance. Effectively, the Precursors were betrayed by themselves. Many of the once dead had reintegrated back into normal life, going home to their families, sat upon high chairs within their Council. There was no way they could have survived, eventually, they were all converted, under the control of the one unit. Slaves, mindless slaves to a rampant machine's bidding."

    "What a way to go..." Johnson muttered.

    "Indeed Sergeant. One can only imagine the horror of having ones own father attempt to assimilate you, be betrayed by one's closest friends. Everything the Precursors had ever known fell apart, had it not been for the mantle, their legacy would have died."

    "After successfully cleansing this galaxy of all Precursor life, the central intelligence turned it's dark gaze upon the rest of the universe, and deemed it too, unworthy. Using advanced Precursor slip space technology, which could not only take you through space, but also through time itself, it wiped out every last remnant of it's creators. And for aeons, it was never seen again. My master's upheld the mantle as they swore they would, and protected the galaxy they lived in from harm. Unfortunately, they had not mastered the practice of intergalactic travel, and slowly, the rest of the Universe dimmed."

    "So this central intelligence, what happened to it? Did it come back?" John asked the Monitor.

    "Oh, it came back John, as you should know. You have, after all, met it." Came the reply.

    "...I have?" The Spartan was extremely confused.

    "Why of course you have John, not only did you meet it, but you hampered it's progress in destroying all."

    "You know it as The Gravemind."

    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-26-2009, 5:06 AM 566665 in reply to 565816

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    No one read my deep Precursor theory I slaved over for the best part of an hour?

     

    :(


    "This one has forgotten whether it's heatsink is over capacity. It wonders whether the criminal scum considers itself fortunate" ~ Blasto, the only Hanar Spectre.
  •  04-26-2009, 6:16 AM 566696 in reply to 566665

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Wow, that is awesome, never saw that coming.  This is the best ff ever.
    Trying to bring honour back to noobs everywhere.
  •  04-28-2009, 4:47 PM 570247 in reply to 566696

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    i am as always waiting for more
    Even the greatest warrior quails in fear at my name
  •  04-28-2009, 8:14 PM 570503 in reply to 566665

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    Nice!!! very good, didnt see the twist at the end, but it fits nicely.  I cant wait to see where it goes!!!

    You've just been hit by the MAC Blast!
    Head to the Library and check out my FF UNSC:Unification, CH 3 is now up!
  •  04-29-2009, 7:06 AM 570971 in reply to 570503

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    May I just say...OMFG! THIS IS TEH ***

     Dude, that is an excellent theory you've made. Mighty fine spelunking!

  •  04-29-2009, 9:20 PM 572018 in reply to 570971

    Re: [Story] Halo: Insurrection (Part Two now up)

    dude this guy should make a book and i should be bowing down to him

     

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