The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

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  •  04-29-2007, 3:12 AM 53326 in reply to 53016

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    Finally got the chance to read it in full. Very nicely written, very creative.

    Only problem I noticed was that in the beginning, the main force is at Every Square and Price is at Everett Square. However, after price calls Harper a retard and points out that they are at Everett Square, the Pelican crash site where Harper found Price is refered to as Every Square and the main battle as Everett Square. That, at least, is how I interpretted it, and I can see that it might be possible for it to be seen differently.


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  •  05-02-2007, 9:16 PM 54191 in reply to 53326

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    Oh, thanks!  I see what you're saying. I think i've fixed it.
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  •  05-02-2007, 9:18 PM 54193 in reply to 54191

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    Chapter V

    Planet Iridanus, Polaris System

    2300 21 January 2540

    Downtown Rubidard, Delfanus

                I had walked around a bit suiting up, grabbing some extra clips, and picking up anything else I needed.  I still carried around my souvenir store, but I’m still not sure what it’s going to do in the end for me, but I decided that I’d rather have ‘em and not use ‘em, than to need them when I don’t have them.  I received a message to go to the staging area in about a half an hour, so I strolled over there.  The General already began the briefing to all of the soldiers, marine, army, Daemons, or whatnot.

    “All right men, we are to fight to the fiercest.  We’re not going to go half-assed around the battlefield.  Any forces we have available will be put into combat and used wholly.  We cannot spare to lose this battle, for this battle decides who will win over this planet!  We will push as far as we can into the direction of the Covenant Frigate looming over the city and distract it, to give Zulu enough time.  All right, suit up, men.”

                Garza called together our company.

    “Bravo!  We are spearheading the assault through the fields of white snow, and we will turn them fluorescent blue and purple, or whatever the hell comes out of the freakshows.”

    “Yes, SIR!” the chorus of soldiers screamed.

    “Move out.”

                I linked up with my platoon to prepare for the battle.
    “Think we’ll get that ship?” I asked.
    “Hell yeah.  Zulu is one of the best we have.  No doubt they’ll get it.” grunted Diaz.

    Everyone else was silent.  We were at the doorstop of death.

    *****

    “CHARGE!!!!!”

                A major general just led the charge with sword raised, and everyone moved forward like a mass of ants.  A minute went by with silence.  Where was the enemy?  Another moment went by without much change.  Then the silence broke with longswords roaring overhead, zooming to drop their payloads on enemy defenses.  About halfway through the square, hell started to break loose.  Wraith shots were incoming and Shades on top of buildings started to pepper our forces.  We were all nearing a hill to take cover on.

    “Harper!” Gilbert yelled, “We are to cover that hill and hold position there!  We’ll receive further instruction once we have the area held.”

    “Aye!”

                It didn’t take long to hunker down on the hill.  I turned to peer over the crest, What the!?!  Two Spetcres floated overhead less than an inch from my head, bursting with plasma fire mowing down a couple of Antimon soldiers behind.  All of a sudden, a gauss shot rang out and shredded through the pilot and the rest of the vehicle all the way out the back side.  The explosion threw the gunner and passenger elites off and pieces from the ship into them.  The other Spectre killed the passenger of the warthog, but was boarded by several soldiers hungering for revenge.  It was all over for the enemy within a couple of seconds, pistol shots to the head to ensure mortality.  The empty Spectre was filled with the boarders and the battle raged on.  I turned to peer over the hill once again, and noticed that the Covenant had dug into and fortified surrounding hills and placed plasma turrent within.

    “Gilbert!  Contact CP, the covies dug pretty nifty anthills at Foxtrot, Golf, and Hotel Romeo 10.” I ordered.

    “Aye!”

    While Gilbert contacted command, I noticed that the covies took up defenses on the plateaus and hills, but had failed to set up at the acropolis at the northeast side of Every Square.
    “General, sir!”

    “Yes, sergeant?” replied Garza.

    “The covies haven’t set up at Juliet-Romeo 11 yet.”

    A brief period of silence followed.

    “Good eyes, Harper.  I’ll get the 441st on it right away.”

                The Antimon 441st Airborne covered our right flank, but some of them bled into our area.  Though we Daemons spearheaded the middle, we were blended in with what was left of the Delfan Defense Force, who was also to cover our left flank in the square.  Beyond the square though, we supposedly had the flanks acquired already from the previous night.

                Two more Longswords soared overhead once again and dropped their payload onto the fortified hills.

    “Roger, Roger.  Daemons, your present was delivered, over.” a pilot communicated.

                Because the hills have been hollowed out to form forward barracks, they easily collapsed during the raid.  We then had a clear shot up the middle.  Thinking that the hills would have stopped us, there wasn’t much of a Covenant defense network behind.
    “GO! GO! GO!” yelled Czaja.

                Whoever was on the hill humped over it and we streamed toward the next one 500 meters away.  A fast attack group came to stall us.  20 Ghosts, 5 Spectres, and 10 Banshees.  Three SPNKr rockets streak across at the vehicles, and a barrage of seven more came.  Explosions lit up the oncoming vehicles and six ghosts, a spectre, and a banshee were destroyed by either direct hits or flung by the subsequent explosion. One unlucky ghost was blinded by the smoke and rammed into wraith debris.  Ten ghosts started strafing us while four of them charged into our ranks, forcing their way through.  Meanwhile, the spectres were creating a wall of fire to halt our approach and the banshees were throwing fuel rods to effectively pin us.  Our group went prone, but a soldier came up to me, crouching.

    “Sir, what do we do!?!”

    He didn’t seem much older than 18.

    “Get down!”

    “What?”

    “I said GET—“

                At that moment, spectre fire sprayed him with piecing shots through the torso, and a ghost shot clipped him in the shoulder to drop him in the floor.  ***!  I took another look around.  Seven Ghosts, three Spectres, and six Banshees.  A line of troops ahead of me were taking the brunt of the fire.  I had to do something…
    “HQ, we need support at Golf-Romeo 10 NOW!!”

    “Don’t get you panties up in a bunch; helos inbound on your position.  ETA 2minutes.” a pilot stated.
    “We don’t have two minutes!!!”

                Just then four warthogs rounded the hill, one of them gauss, and opened fire.  They were careful to swerve around troops, but the fire they dodge sometimes struck the soldier the ‘hogs avoided.  A scorpion tank rolled up on the crest to provide heavy support.  The ‘hogs and ghosts tried to outmaneuver each other, but the rotating turrets gave the upper hand to the UNSC.  Two Spectres broke off from suppressing fire to even the battle, though one of them was the target of a tank round and all that was left were plasma flames.  Suppressing spectre fire reflected off the armor of the Scorpion and bounced harmlessly into the air.  Driving like madmen, a warthog and a spectre collided, and LAAG rounds ignited by the flames spurted out like shrapnel.  The ammo shredded a Spectre passenger and a Ghost pilot, not to mention obliterating whoever was on the warthog.  A banshee descended toward the scorpion, landing a direct fuel rod hit.  Scorpion top armor started to liquefy, but it spewed machine gun fire as a reply.  The banshee started to spark, but a moment later a destroyed fuel cell discharged and the banshee completely disintegrated behind a veil of white flash.  Another SPNKr rocket lead a banshee and intercepted it flawlessly.  2 Warthogs, 1 Scorpion against 4 Ghosts, 2 Spectres, and 4 Banshees.  Spoke too soon, Damn!  A banshee dropped a fuel shot and the Scorpion blew into flames and smoke; Another ran down the gauss’hog and hailed plasma upon it.  Everyone onboard was scorched.  The remaining ‘hog, knowing it was outgunned, audaciously made a move toward the suppressing spectre while the gunner finished off the other.  Before impact, the passenger and gunner abandoned the vehicle while the driver kept the pedal to the metal.  The suppressing spectre was broadsided with only a moment’s notice.  Nearly extricated of fire, we proceeded to lay down cover fire for the ‘hog passengers.  A ghost was overwhelmed by gunfire, and a streaking SPNKr destroyed another; a third rushed a Marine after discombobulating his partner.  The solo Marine threw a grenade in front of him and hit the dirt.  The clueless ghost ran over as it blew, and the debris flew upward.  Banshees floating above as if they were vultures circling their prey were caught off guard as Sparrowhawks strafed every which way in front of us.  Chain guns roaring, missles screaming, everything was being fired upon indiscriminately.  Several moments later, the helos emptied their entire payload and returned to base for refilling, leaving behind destruction in which nothing was left standing.

    “There ya go Daemon.  Good hunting.”

                Our attack force continued to advance forward to the hill ahead.  While passing the area where the vehicle shootout had occurred, something underneath the wreckage stirred.  I had my rifle at the ready and kicked away the debris.

    “Ugh…”

    There lay the surviving Marine with an arm missing.

    “Glad to see you’re alive, soldier.”

    “Glad to be alive.”

    “HQ, we need Medevac at Golf-Romeo 10; he’s missing an arm, but he’s still breathing and conscious.”
    “Copy that, sergeant.  We’re on our way.”

    I performed First-Aid and gave him a flare to flag the helo.

    “Need a cig?” I offered.

    “Yeah, thanks man.  Anyone else alive?”

    “Nope.  You’re the only one that made it through hell and back alive.  Take care man.  The helo should be here in a couple.”

    “Thanks man.”

                I strolled to the crest of the hill and awaited to find out what line of myriad Covenant will try to stop us next.


    "...You might think I'm losing my mind, but I will shy away from the specifics..."

    gamertag: path090
  •  05-02-2007, 11:38 PM 54216 in reply to 54193

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    Damn I love your writing
    I like pi.
  •  05-03-2007, 3:45 PM 54256 in reply to 54216

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    ya pretty good.........................

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  •  05-04-2007, 5:00 AM 54373 in reply to 54256

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    Yea love it,at the end I though a scarab was going to come out of the snow and hed just look up and say "all ***"
  •  05-04-2007, 4:06 PM 54430 in reply to 54373

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    Thanks guys!!  It's awesome that people are actually reading my story.  ^_^  You guys would really like the next chapter.

    I'll post it tomorrow.  = )


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  •  05-04-2007, 5:46 PM 54440 in reply to 54430

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    damn ur pretty fast at making them.... how long is the average chapter........ if i may ask?

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  •  05-04-2007, 7:27 PM 54457 in reply to 54440

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    I try to make each chapter 6 pages long on average MLA format.  I'm not really quick at making them, i just had them premade.  When i first posted, i had finished with Chapter IV.  Right now, i'm currently on Chapter VII, and now it seems that posting this story had caught up to my typing.  ^_^

    I just try to release each chapter once per week.  = )


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  •  05-05-2007, 12:28 AM 54505 in reply to 54457

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    try to keep every one is suspense aye...... u take a week to post urs.........i take a year.... hehe...... anyways.... they are pretty awesome..... looking forward to reading some more.......... u know after i finish my book i think i am gonna do some short stories based on a certain topic/species..... marine, grunt, elite.... etc............... u have inspired me Royale hehe lol :)

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  •  05-05-2007, 3:23 AM 54518 in reply to 54457

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    I originally did page long chapters (single spaced, 12 font, times new roman), but I want to expand it. The problem is I follow so many PoVs in my story, each getting their own chapter, that I have to switch often so that the reader doesn't get too tangled up with time jumping back the next chapter to start with a dif PoV. I'm considering redoing my completed fanfic with longer chapters, though.
    I like pi.
  •  05-05-2007, 10:02 AM 54534 in reply to 54518

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    I would make it longer if i were writing a book, but since it's just something i do in my free time, i try to keep it rather succint.  It's really hard to keep pouring ideas into 20 pages a chapter.  ^_^

    I hate single spacing too. haha.  The lines are too close together.  Plus, double space makes it look like you did more.  XD


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  •  05-05-2007, 10:03 AM 54535 in reply to 54534

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    Chapter VI

    Planet Iridanus, Polaris System

    0100 22 January 2540

    Central Rubidard, Delfanus

                            We were stationed at the hill for about half an hour now, awaiting orders and defending against counter-attacks, sometimes mounting our own, with devastating costs.  Bright lights were constantly going off at our port side.  Most of the battle surrounded the contested acropolis, with sparrowhawks and banshees slugging it out for aerial control.  The comm. then crackled to life.

    “Harper, Zulu is only arm’s lengths away, but the Covenant is starting to get suspicious.  We need everyone on your side and over to charge at the covie line and straight to Romeo 14.  The rest of Bravo have been assigned to different areas, but you’ve been assigned to lead the charge on the Golf column.  Take the Daemons and whoever else in your area to hell and further.”

    The Golf column!?!  I’m going to spearhead the spearhead section of the field!?!

    “General Garza, sir!  Why am I being put in charge of the spearhead section?”

    “Well, Harper, you don’t seem to like to die, so why not test the limits of that?”

    “Sir, yes sir!”

    “Good.  At Romeo 13, you are to split some of your troops to flank the ones fighting at the acropolis.”

    “Sir!”

    “Garza, out.”

                Great.  I looked over behind me to census soldiers under my command.  About hundred fifty other Daemons, five hundred other soldiers, most of them Delfan Defense Forces, some of them are the regular army of Arrowin.  Fifteen Scorpions were at the ready, and roughly thirty-two Warthogs were ready to move.  I decided to prep the guys.

    “All right!!!  Everyone on Golf is under my command.  We are simultaneously going to charge with the rest of our flanks to right into Covenant positions.  When you get there, have pistols and knives at the ready!”
    “AYE, SIR!”

    “ Scorpions, you are to station yourselves at the crest of the hill and provide artillery and machine gun fire until we are 30 meters from the defense line.  Assign three of yourselves for anti-aircraft duty and two of you to advance with us.  Warthogs, twenty of you are to aid the Scorpions with suppressing fire; seven of you, two of which should be gauss, are to help with anti-air; the rest is to assimilate yourselves with the advancing force and fire at will.”

    “YES, SIR”

    “Daemons, you are to be at the front with shields raised.  You’ll be doing what you’re meant to do.”

    A cheer rose from the Arrowin forces.

    I decided to communicate the other Bravo members to coordinate our attack.

    “Hey guys, can you hear me.”
    “Diaz.”
    “Gilbert, loud and clear.”

    “Czaja, clear as a bell there Harper.”

    “Yeah, Gonzalez.”

    “Wassup, baby?  Adams, reporting.”

    That’s everyone.

    “Guys, when are we charging?”
    Gilbert spoke up. “It’s about 0133 right now, so how about 0135.”

    Wilco was the response we pretty much all gave.
    I decided to fill in my troops.

    “Troops, prep up.  One minute ‘till.”

    The single minute to go felt like a lifetime to pass…
    “HQ, could you spare a couple of helos to maintain air superiority along the Romeo-10 line in Every Square.”

    “Negative, Sergeant.  No helos are currently available at the moment.  We’ll send some over when available.”
    I gave a grunt of acknowledgement, and looked at the time.

    “CHARGE!!!!”

                I unsheathed my issued Daemon sword and screamed at the top of my lungs.  A chorus of yells echoed my own, and soldiers poured past me.  As I had barely past the crest of the hill, the vehicles were in position and roaring at full power.  Several warthogs made a wall of fire to blind and stop any enemies.  The Scorpion shells meanwhile pounded away at the dug-in forces.  After several seconds with 300yds to go, it seemed as if a wall of plasma appeared just to push everyone back, the line of Daemon shields took most of the fire.  Everyone, in turn fired their weapons to make sure that the covies kept their split-lips down.  The plasma fire kept coming, but at a lesser pace now.  100 meters to go.  The accompanying tanks and warthogs were behind me, and the suppressing vehicles had started to hold fire.  There were no signs of ghosts or banshees for a counter-attack, so my stomach settled a little.  Around twenty meters to go, most of the frontline drew their knives in their right hand, pistols in their left; some Daemons drew their sword, but I kept mine sheathed, for the current moment anyway.  We reached the first line of dug-in forces, and the rest of my troops flooded in all the way to the Covenant back ranks. 

                I jumped into a trench where two minors and a few grunts were ducking in cover.  I fired my pistols and the grunts went down without a fight.  Surprised, the elites looked to see what hit them.  I fired some more, taking down the shields of a minor and placed two more shots into the skull of it to finish it off.  The bullets crumpled the armor and penetrated all the way out the back.  I emptied the rest of my clip into the last unsuspecting elite, only being able to weaken the shields.  It finally regained composure and drew its pistol while charging at me.  I stepped forward and nailed it in the chest with a straight kick.  The elite went tumbling back, tripping.  I took this chance to put away my pistol and draw one of the energy swords I had collected.  The elite heard the noise, and attempted to stop me by firing several blind shots with its pistol.  I blocked the shots with the shield and took a clean swipe across its chest.  The energy sword tore through the shields and opened the chest cavity of elite.  With that I climbed out of the trench, and everyone seemed to be fighting for their lives.  A Delfan Marine was dodging and rolling to avoid blungeons from two minors.  I ran up and struck down one of them in the back, severing the spinal column.  The Marine proceeded to kick the knee out from under the remaining elite and fired several shots into it.  A volley of shots then peppered the Marine, searing most of the flesh on his body.  A major and three minors were charging in my direction.  I was about ready to pull a grenade when a warthog broadsided them and wiped out the entire group.  Only halves of their corpses remained.

                I ran around the battlefield fighting more combat and aiding allied forces when a prominent area of fighting arose.  A zealot was tearing through every foe it came across with its energy sword.  I darted toward it cutting up whichever Covenant that was between me and the zealot.  It noticed me and started to circle me.  I circled back.  Time started to slow and it felt as if everything stopped mid-battle just to see the result of our duel.  The zealot lunged at me, but I sidestepped and took a swipe at the exposed ribs.  The energy sword tore through the shields, but powered out before it could do anymore damage.  Both of us took a second to stare at the situation.  The zealot stepped back and lunged again.  I raised my shield to defend against the blow.  The strike deeply engraved my shield.  The zealot came again with numerous more slashes; each time I defended with my shield, unable to have any time to draw any other weapon I had equipped on me.  It then paused for only the slightest moment to allow its shielding to recharge.  I took this opportunity quickly grab a metal rod from my belt and take a quick swipe, activating the weapon during the attack.  ***!  When I activated the metal rod, a shimmering transparent orange round object appeared.  It was one of the two jackel shields I had picked up.  The shield reacted negatively with the zealot’s shield mid-recharge.  A white light flashed and I was blown to back several meters away, the jackel shield nowhere to be found.  I jumped up to take survey the situation.  The zealot was 2 meters away from me, breathing heavily.  He so deeply exhaled that you could hardly see his face behind the vapor of his breath.  His flesh was exposed where the jackel shield had hit him; some of the flesh was bubbling still.  I took this pause to draw my issued sword, using both hands to wield it, while the zealot reactivated his energy one, keeping a free hand.  We took a moment to take in everything, to size up the enemy, to plan the attack, to see the snow fall one last time before one of us becomes engulfed by it.

                We came at each other full force.  He made a strong slash, and I mirrored it.  Sparks flew as my special coated metal sword came into contact with his energy sword.  The light was nearly blinding.  We stepped back and I swung at his ribs.  He parried the attack and grabbed my right arm while he sliced down with his left.  I lifted my shield and blocked the attack and struck a kick to his chest, knocking him back and freeing my arm.  He quickly recovered and made another far-swung slash.  I ducked, but the zealot responded by kicking me in the visor.  The strength of the hoof destroyed my map display.  I hopped back up and got into my defense position.  He charged once again and made a side swipe.  I blocked and thrusted.  He spun and took another swipe.  I side-stepped and mirrored his attack, striking gold.  My blade cut deep in the forearm of the beast, and he gave a shrilling cry.  He kicked my legs out from under me and I fell to the floor.  I saw the hoof raised for a strike, so my shield came up again, but the force was so tremendous that it merely shattered into several pieces.  The shield took enough of the blow to stop the attack, though.  The hoof rose again and I rolled before it came down upon me.  He swung with his sword simultaneously so I barely had time to block with my sword and reinforced it with my free left arm.  Sparks flew in every which direction, starting to smolder through both of our armors.  He tried to overpower my defense with swing after swing, but to no prevail.  I pulled my left hand to reach for another metal rod.  This time, the zealot stuck the sword harder where my free arm had just been, slamming the sword edge into the earth inches from my face.  I pulled another rod and activated it again mid-swing.  Dear God, let this work this time.  A luminescent fiery blue flame bursted from the hilt and severed the zealot’s leg just above the kneecap.  A painful roar was released.  He fell to his hands, knee, and remaining limb, dropping his sword.  I took my time to get up, and noticed that he was still in shock, on the floor.  I couldn’t get myself to strike him while he was down, so I had thought it best to drop a grenade and charge into the next fight.


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  •  05-05-2007, 12:13 PM 54540 in reply to 54535

    Re: The Arrowin 4th Daemon Battalion

    pretty good pretty good.... the fight was pretty awesome

    Hey can u tell me a little more about a Daemon soldier.... u know like explain what they do....because i noticed that they carry shields? and swords? and also i would like to know how the jackal shield effected the zealot and why....


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  •  05-05-2007, 2:50 PM 54568 in reply to 50518

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    PROLOGUE:

                We had the best equipment, though.  We had the best armor, capable of taking massive amounts of damage, full helmets with HUD displays and integrated comm. systems, underarmor that keeps our bodies regulated and insulated, we were issued swords and combat knives that were made of a special alloy that matches the frequency of an energy sword, and to top that off, we had combat shields mounted on our arms that covered our whole body.  When suited up, we were secluded to everything else.  We were suited in all black or all white, only with a gold stripe at our shoulder.  Nothing more, nothing less.

    They have shields sorta like this:

    As for the jackel shield, you know how when the shields recharged, luminescent circles envelop the user?  Well the jackel shield was activated in during the recharge, so the two shield enrgy sources reacted catastrophicly to create a blast, disintigrating the zealot's armor and searing his flesh where the collision occured.

    C'mon man, let your imagination run wild.  ^_^


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