(FF) Volvo's service: fall of the elites

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  •  12-28-2008, 4:31 PM 432497 in reply to 432495

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    yipyip :P

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  •  12-28-2008, 4:33 PM 432500 in reply to 432497

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    A iranian peanut:
    yipyip :P

    WWWWWWWWWWOOOOO!!!! GGGOOO YYYYYIIIPPPP-YIIIPPPPPP!!!!!  YEEEEAAAAHHHHH!!!!



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    I could be your worst nightmare.....or best friend.
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  •  12-28-2008, 4:34 PM 432503 in reply to 432500

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    woop woop woop woop :P hell yh watch ur back ill lob another plasma grenade and if im lucky maybe a fuel rod gun u better watch out im a small hunter :P

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  •  12-28-2008, 4:36 PM 432505 in reply to 432503

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    A iranian peanut:
    woop woop woop woop :P hell yh watch ur back ill lob another plasma grenade and if im lucky maybe a fuel rod gun u better watch out im a small hunter :P

    I almost died laughing at your post. hahaha funny GGOOOO YYYIIPPP-YYYYIIIPPP!!!!



    My name can trick you.
    I could be your worst nightmare.....or best friend.
    The unlucky soldier is my new FF. chapter 4 is up.

  •  12-28-2008, 4:54 PM 432526 in reply to 432505

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    yh i like being a grunt the games have stereotyped them well

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  •  12-28-2008, 4:55 PM 432528 in reply to 432526

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    A iranian peanut:
    yh i like being a grunt the games have stereotyped them well

    grunts are the best arn't they?



    My name can trick you.
    I could be your worst nightmare.....or best friend.
    The unlucky soldier is my new FF. chapter 4 is up.

  •  12-28-2008, 5:07 PM 432547 in reply to 394307

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Good chapter, Yam. That was a rather good fight scene.

    There were a couple errors.

    1. Remember, if you have 'he yelled' or 'he said' after a bit of speech, don't end it with a full stop, end it with a comma. For example:
    Kill what ever survives," The officer yelled pointing at four marines.

    2. the elite to revile his head.  revile should be reveal.

    3. how well belt these elites really were...  belt should be built.

    Good work, keep it up.


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  •  12-28-2008, 5:10 PM 432551 in reply to 432547

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    i would love to have a side story a really short one of a grunt :P

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  •  12-28-2008, 5:19 PM 432560 in reply to 432551

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    A iranian peanut:
    i would love to have a side story a really short one of a grunt :P

    You can just right it and let people see it.



    My name can trick you.
    I could be your worst nightmare.....or best friend.
    The unlucky soldier is my new FF. chapter 4 is up.

  •  12-28-2008, 8:06 PM 432674 in reply to 432560

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    the new chapter was great

    i really liked how you made neco fight for hes honor couse thats one trait i love about elites


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  •  12-29-2008, 11:57 AM 432871 in reply to 432547

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Captain Cazador- Soldato:

    Good chapter, Yam. That was a rather good fight scene.

    There were a couple errors.

    1. Remember, if you have 'he yelled' or 'he said' after a bit of speech, don't end it with a full stop, end it with a comma. For example:
    Kill what ever survives," The officer yelled pointing at four marines.

    Thanks, it wasnt the easiest bit I had to write.

    I always seem to forget that. Ill have to write it down or something.

    @Hammerfish

    Go for it. Write a short story about your grunt Yip Yip.

    Thanks to the rest who liked it as well.


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    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
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  •  12-29-2008, 12:13 PM 432875 in reply to 432871

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    i could but i wasthinking more of like a side game for a grunt would be great :P i just remebered grunts also have active camo as well so people better watch out :D

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  •  12-29-2008, 12:17 PM 432877 in reply to 432875

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    My new FF is up. The Greater Truth. A tad bit shorter then what I usually write.
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  12-30-2008, 4:51 PM 433361 in reply to 432877

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Ignore


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  12-30-2008, 4:51 PM 433362 in reply to 432877

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Small teaser because im feeling generous. Blame Fallout 3........

    "These elite's werent killed by flood or us. They were killed by plasma fire from a plasam rifle." Ethan said. Tyler knelt down next to him. "Could have been flood, I've seen them with plasma rifles" Tyler remarked.

     Ethan shook his head, picking up his weapon.

     "Still, no sign of a struggle, friendly fire perhaps?"

    Tyler frowned, inspecting the bodies again. "Nah, to accurate for friendly fire."

    Ethan didnt respond, he just turned around and walked towards the elevator that would take them to the index.


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
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