(FF) Volvo's service: fall of the elites

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  •  11-23-2008, 11:57 AM 409368 in reply to 409345

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    kl thnxs

    EDIT: you could use the perspective of the hunter parisite in a scarab as they control the scarab so you could include that into you story just a thought


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  •  11-23-2008, 3:20 PM 409698 in reply to 409368

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    chapter 2 is now in the OP
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-23-2008, 3:53 PM 409778 in reply to 409698

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    very nice chapter

    thnxs for adding me in :P


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  •  11-23-2008, 3:55 PM 409782 in reply to 409778

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    thanks, your in the next chapter to along with Tanra (offensive bias) and volvo on the surface of delta halo assisting the arbiter
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-23-2008, 6:20 PM 410097 in reply to 409306

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    yam head

    can i be a grunt named yaeyae, hes rank is ultra with a neddler and also a Fuel Rod


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  11-24-2008, 11:06 AM 410594 in reply to 410097

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Excellent, brava! No spelling mistakes, a few words which were spelt the right way but not for the meaning you intended them for. Overall, a perfect 10 from me. You really captured aspects from the battleground and I am looking forward to more.


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  •  11-24-2008, 1:01 PM 410605 in reply to 410594

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    When am I in it Yammy?
    Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

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  •  11-24-2008, 2:05 PM 410616 in reply to 410097

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    eliteempire:

    yam head

    can i be a grunt named yaeyae, hes rank is ultra with a neddler and also a Fuel Rod

    sure

    thank you bias

    videlict your character will be in the next chapter.


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-24-2008, 4:28 PM 410764 in reply to 410616

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    bump and a small teaser

    "You will journey down to the surface of the ring, bring with you what you need. I warn you failure will not be accepted; dont come back if you cant retrive the index." The high councilor warned the Shipmaster's brave enough to journey into the heart of the library.

    Volvo nodded, leaving the council chambers with the words dont come back ringing in his head. The rest of the the Shipmaster's would bring the heavy troops and vehicles. Volvo would bring a squad of grunts and vehicles to aid the battle. Yip Yip had proved his worth while defending the hanger from the flood, he would be coming down as well. Volvo also decided to bring Tanra as much as Volvo didnt want to, Tanra was the only Sangheili he felt needed the combat experience. Finally the new grunt deacon Yae Yae would help Volvo rally the troops if morale would drop. Neco, Volo's personnel pilot would take them down providing air support for the final attack. It was gonna be one hell of a fight.......

    Note: this may be changed, nothing in this paragraph is permanent.

      


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-24-2008, 5:14 PM 410792 in reply to 410616

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Yam Head:
    eliteempire:

    yam head

    can i be a grunt named yaeyae, hes rank is ultra with a neddler and also a Fuel Rod

    sure

    thank you bias

    videlict your character will be in the next chapter.

    thanks


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  11-25-2008, 10:52 AM 411236 in reply to 410792

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    *Bump*

    Next chapter now?


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  •  11-25-2008, 11:09 AM 411241 in reply to 411236

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Thanks Yammy
    Lazyfrog.us - For all things Halo Wars

    December the 15'th, go here! ^^

    JumpingJet: Administrator, Co-Founder
  •  11-25-2008, 11:18 AM 411243 in reply to 411241

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    looks good so far can i add something to my character like most grunt they do not take the initiative plz could mine be a bit more imaginative and go where no grunt has gone before and survived

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  •  11-25-2008, 12:07 PM 411248 in reply to 411243

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    jackhammerfish:
    looks good so far can i add something to my character like most grunt they do not take the initiative plz could mine be a bit more imaginative and go where no grunt has gone before and survived

    can mine also since its the rank ulta

    if u allow it


    " I stay here until all others have gone. I will make sure I am the last one to be here. And when I am, I shall make a thread. A memorial thread. And I shall leave these forums behind. " - Offensive Bias
  •  11-25-2008, 1:59 PM 411271 in reply to 411248

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    eliteempire:

    jackhammerfish:
    looks good so far can i add something to my character like most grunt they do not take the initiative plz could mine be a bit more imaginative and go where no grunt has gone before and survived

    can mine also since its the rank ulta

    if u allow it

    Um, ok you two can be a pair. I think I had to make one of you deacon because the other was already an ultra. Ill have to devote a section devoted to you two.

    Im working on the next chapter, no worries.


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
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