(FF) Volvo's service: fall of the elites

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  •  11-02-2008, 10:52 AM 398559 in reply to 398554

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    thanks. you'll have to wait and see, and I have to go about fixing those mistakes
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-02-2008, 4:47 PM 398693 in reply to 398559

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    ok guys next chapter will be from the POV of an elite aiding the arbiter in retrieving the index. stay tuned for his fate
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-03-2008, 4:13 PM 399290 in reply to 398693

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    ok new chapter is up for some reason it double posted and I cant fix it


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-03-2008, 5:01 PM 399319 in reply to 394307

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Volvo is a type of car.

    I apologize.

    But I'm not sorry.

    And I meant all of it.

    Okay, I don't apologize

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  •  11-04-2008, 2:53 PM 399817 in reply to 399319

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    I realized that after I chosse the name and posted the first chapter for my old FF. so I just didnt bother trying to change it :)
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-06-2008, 5:50 PM 400860 in reply to 399817

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    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    I believe the naming scheme you've got for the Elites is wrong, and I think that Volvo might have an 'ee suffix at the end of his name due to him being a high ranking Covenant soldier. Just a minor and unnoticeable canon error.  No matter.

    Nice piece of work.

     


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  •  11-06-2008, 5:53 PM 400867 in reply to 399319

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Lysander:
    Volvo is a type of car.
    Certainly. Very well recognised.
    I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.



  •  11-08-2008, 2:23 PM 401579 in reply to 400860

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Unscientifical:

    I believe the naming scheme you've got for the Elites is wrong, and I think that Volvo might have an 'ee suffix at the end of his name due to him being a high ranking Covenant soldier. Just a minor and unnoticeable canon error.  No matter.

    Nice piece of work.

     

    I beleive that is for an elites last name.if they even have last names........ill see what I can do


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-08-2008, 3:01 PM 401606 in reply to 401579

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    tis a gd FF so far I quite like having it insections and not all of it uploaded straight away give people a chance to anticipate what the next chapter

    http://www.fallenearthrpg.com?x=11281
  •  11-22-2008, 12:53 PM 408573 in reply to 401606

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    I'd like to announce that Im going to be writing today and ill even provide a small teaser (small)

    Malak couldnt keep his eyes from stairing down at his wounds, the infection was slowley making its way up them. He held back a scream of pain, cringing at his efforts. The arbiter looked at him trying to think of a way to save him. Malak staggered foward supporting himself with the empty carbine.

    "Go on," Malak said threw clenched teeth. "The great journey waits for no one, not even you."

    The arbiter nodded his head while throwing Malak one round of carbine ammo.

    Malak barley caught the rounds, dropping to his knees trying to load them. He looked up to the arbiter then down at his rifle. He brought the gun up under his mouth, his sweaty fingers almost slipping on the trigger. Malak felt sick to his stomach, He could feel the infection working his body functions over, persuading them to leave his control.

    Malak let out his last mighty roar as his world was taken from him. The last thing he saw was his feild of vision getting higher as the arbiter raised his carbine firing in rapid succesion.


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-22-2008, 12:56 PM 408579 in reply to 394307

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    nice chapters!



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  •  11-22-2008, 12:58 PM 408585 in reply to 408579

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    thanks, I still didnt like how it double posted chapter one. Never could get that fixed.........
    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-22-2008, 1:01 PM 408592 in reply to 408579

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Come on people, give a round of applause for YAMMY!!!!!!!!!!!! *Clapping*

    I am looking forward to this. Although, I find it helps if you don't reveal characters getting killed off in teasers. Lets people wonder what happens.


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  •  11-22-2008, 1:03 PM 408595 in reply to 408592

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Yammy.......Its starting to grow on me. I really wanted to see what people would think If Malak died so I decided to post it. now they get to wonder how it happened and I get to write it :)


    "Intiating directive 7395: DESTROY ALL COMMUNNISTS!"
    "Communsim is the very definition of failure!"
    "Better dead then Red!"
    "Liberty Prime online. Weapons are hot. Objective: To liberate Alaska and destory any and all red chinese communists!"
  •  11-22-2008, 1:03 PM 408596 in reply to 408592

    Re: (FF) Volvo's service fall of the elites

    Offensive bias:

    Come on people, give a round of applause for YAMMY!!!!!!!!!!!! *Clapping*

    I am looking forward to this. Although, I find it helps if you don't reveal characters getting killed off in teasers. Lets people wonder what happens.

    you... called him... yammy?



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