Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

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  •  06-28-2008, 7:22 PM 278294

    Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Introduction

    Welcome! Here you will be able to find all our Fan Fic reviews under one roof. Below you will see 4 lists. Each is for a different final rating. Each fan fic is given a place and will be sorted in its section alphabetically.
     

    The final ratings are as follows:

    ·         Epic (Gold): The best rating a story can get. The story essentially needs to be perfect to get this rating. These stories should be read by EVERYONE.

    ·         Highly Recommended (Blue): A really good story. Could be improved and generally has minimal problems. These stories should be read by anyone with the time.

    ·         Recommended (Green): A fairly good story. Normally has some problems but has enough good points to be worth sharing. These stories should be read by anyone that has read all the higher rated stories and still wants more.

    ·         Not Recommended (Red): A bad story. The problems outweigh the good. These can range from just not quite good enough to absolute rubbish. These stories should only be read by those with strong stomachs and who can’t find anything better to do (like sheep).

     

    Quick Look

    The following is a sample “Quick Look” and is how the stories will be listed in the master archive.

     

    1.       Fan Fic Title: This is the title of the Fan Fic in question. These will not be linked. To view the fan fic in question, click one of the review links and click “View full thread.”

    2.       Overall Rating: This is a quick representation of the overall score issued in the Main Review.

    3.       Main Review: This is a link to the post containing the Main Review. These are generally more detailed than the second opinions.

    4.       Second Opinion. This is a link to the Second Opinion post. These are generally shorter and lack the detail of the Main Review.

    Main Review Cards

    The following is a sample Main Review Card. These are placed in the Main Review Post and allow an easy look to see the good and bad points within a fan fic.

     



    1.       This is the username of the reviewer. Colors may vary.

    2.       This is the title of the Fan Fiction being reviewed.

    3.       These are the Overview Plates. These show the reviewer’s opinion about the story at first glance.

    4.       These are the ratings your Fan Fiction received. For more information on the individual ratings remember, Google is your friend. By Googling it you will also get a lot of information about it and learn how to improve it, if it needs improvement.

    How to Get Your Story Reviewed

    To request all you have to do is reply with the following information.

       1. The name of your Fan Fiction.

       2. A link to your Fan Fiction.

              That is all you have to do. You could also add a please in there if you wish, it’s up to you.

     

              Please understand that only a few people will be reviewing your piece of fiction. As of right now only KristallNacht and I are reviewing the requested materials.

     Reviews

     




     "Oh No, Not Again" - - Main Review - Second Opinion

     

     

    None.

     

    "First Blood" - - Main Review
    "Hallfight" - - Main Review
    "Beachhead" - - Main Review - Second Opinion

     

    "Death Comes Swiftly" - - Main Review
    "Deception" - - Main Review
    "Leave Out All The Rest" - Main Review - Second Opinion
    "Private Lewis" - - Main Review
    "Retake the City" - - Main Review
    "The Great War" - - Main Review
    "The Spartan Conspiracy" - - Main Review - Second Opinion
    "White Fear" - - Main Review
    "A New Ally" - - Main Review
    "Death of Victoria, The" - - Main Review
    "ODST Story, The" - - Main Review
    "A Light in the Dark" - - Main Review - Second Opinion


     

    Full Disclaimer

     

    Terminology

    1.        Casey – The actual first name of the user LeafyOwNu2

    2.        the writer – The author of the written work(s) stated above.

    3.        the reader – The present and future readers of the written work(s) stated above.

    4.        the reviewer – The author of the review shown above.

    5.        Overview Card; scorecard; system – A rating system created by Casey to help the writer pin point problems and to help potential readers come to a decision about reading the written work(s) stated above.

     

    Review Disclaimer

                    This review was written to solely provide the writer comments and suggestions on bettering his or her writing. All reviews are proof read twice before publishing. The reviewer however is human and some errors may have been overlooked. Just because there are errors in this review does not mean it is invalid.

                    Please also note that these reviews are only meant to help the writer of the story in question. His or her choice to use the information provided above is solely his or hers to make.

                    The review above contains thoughts and opinions from the reviewer. These thoughts and opinions are solely his own and the writer has the choice to ignore and disregard them.

                    In no way is the reviewer trying to discourage the writer of the above written work(s). These reviews are meant to provide information, not harass, assault, depress, upset, sadden or anger the writer. If this review induces any of the above listed or something of a similar effect, please disregard any information given.

                    This disclaimer was last updated on Wednesday, June 25, 2008 4:43:48 PM. This disclaimer may be changed at any time.

     

    Rating Disclaimer

                    The Overview Card used above was created by Casey. This system gives the writer more precise reasons for the overall rating given. All ratings are based on the opinions of the reviewer alone. His or her judgment on the above written work(s) was used to come about the ratings given.

                    The Overview Card was put in place by Casey to help the writer and to help readers. This system helps potential readers by giving them a guide to determine whether or not the written work(s) above is worth reading with the combination of the written review. Major decisions of reading the written work(s) mentioned above should not be influenced by the scorecard alone.

                    The scorecard was created to be used in conjunction with a written review. The author of the review must be the author of the ratings given. If not, all information is to be disregarded.

                    This disclaimer was last updated on Wednesday, June 25, 2008 4:44:02 PM. This disclaimer may be changed at any time.



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  •  06-28-2008, 7:23 PM 278295 in reply to 278294

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

  •  06-28-2008, 7:24 PM 278297 in reply to 278294

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    The following are my reviews. These will be sorted in the order they are written.

    Chapter 1: The Light That Blinds

      - A Light in the Dark

    Chapter 2: Beach Side Property

    - Beachhead

    Chapter 3: Forget The Wrongs That I've Done

      - Leave Out All The Rest

    Chapter 4: Hitchhikers Guide to Halo

      - Oh No, Not Again

    Chatper 5: Cosmic Conspiracy (Second Opinion)

    - The Spartan Conspiracy


    By Fire and Flood,
    KristallNächte
  •  06-28-2008, 7:43 PM 278312 in reply to 278297

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Sweet Release

    http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/278234.aspx

     

    It is another short story, more of a test to see if I can write a Short with more of a darker atmosphere to it.
    The criticism helps alot

    EDIT: I feel like a moron asking this, but, what is the point of the second opinion? Just to get the other reviewers thoughts in or something?


    "The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

  •  06-28-2008, 7:50 PM 278320 in reply to 278312

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Ummmmm i was wondering can you review mine

  •  06-28-2008, 7:54 PM 278325 in reply to 278320

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

     

    just to let you know, you dont have review this one, but it would be great if you did

    Rise of the Covenant http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/243064.aspx

  •  06-28-2008, 8:00 PM 278334 in reply to 278325

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    The second opinion is so you get another insight to the story. It's just so you get a more diverse outlook to your story.


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  •  06-28-2008, 8:04 PM 278340 in reply to 278334

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    LeafyOwNu2:
    The second opinion is so you get another insight to the story. It's just so you get a more diverse outlook to your story.

    Ah, ok, thanks for clearing that up


    "The pain of war cannot exceed the woe of aftermath"-Led Zeppelin

  •  06-28-2008, 10:46 PM 278499 in reply to 278340

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    I apologize but WTF?!
    Was there anothwer argument?

     


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
    2
  •  06-28-2008, 10:58 PM 278510 in reply to 278499

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Also....not to be pushy but is my FF next on the list?

    Caba's Journey.

    Thx :D


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
    2
  •  06-28-2008, 11:09 PM 278518 in reply to 278510

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    The list was in 2.0
    Revenge of the Covenant 3: The fall of Earth

    The beginning of the ends starts now.



  •  06-29-2008, 7:21 PM 279267 in reply to 278518

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Here is an update of the list.

    Retake the City
    Caba's Journey [KriställNachte]
    The Death of Victoria
    Revenge of the Covenant
    Lost Battles of Reach
    Sweet Release
    17 Months to Live
    Rise of the Covenant



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  •  06-29-2008, 7:29 PM 279278 in reply to 279267

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    LeafyOwNu2:

    Here is an update of the list.

    Retake the City
    Caba's Journey [KriställNachte]
    The Death of Victoria
    Revenge of the Covenant
    Lost Battles of Reach
    Sweet Release
    17 Months to Live
    Rise of the Covenant

    Im doomed :(

    *starts getting hammered*


    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/thread/255446.aspx]The Great War[/url]Ch.5 is up
    [url=http://www.halowars.com/forums/224551/ShowThread.aspx#224551]Caba's Journey[/url]Done
    2
  •  06-29-2008, 7:29 PM 279279 in reply to 279267

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Hey, just wondering:

    Will Hallfight and First Blood get a second opinion?


    Chuckles

    Anyone else here getting sick of tiny two-word posts that become huge because of the O.G. picture?

  •  06-29-2008, 7:33 PM 279282 in reply to 278499

    Re: Leafy-Kristall Review Archive 3.0

    Don Corleone:

    I apologize but WTF?!
    Was there anothwer argument?

     

    What do you mean. Their other thread is still going. I have no idea why they have started up a third one of this thread.
    I stand proud and dominant in the heat of a battle.



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