Ok don to be honest i didnt like this chapter, firstly a scarab getting taken down by those old tanks when the unsc couldnt take it down so quickly with their modern weapons, actually i hated it.....
Not really lol, i can imagine the look on your face as you read through that bit, ok now for my serious commenty bit!
I thought it was errr... great! i really enjoy reading stuff thats not about an amazing odst squad that almost single handedly defeats the covenant.
Spelling and grammar are at a high standard and the whole thing flows perfectly.
Just out of curiosity what alien was it that they shot about halfway through?, i think its a grunt?
Im back! Now with 72% more unseriousness!