OMG, *Puts hand up to mouth, says to himself in astonished contemplation, what a talented writer Don is*
Seriously, you've gone above and beyond with this chapter, spectacular to the point that to look upon your story fills my eyes with tears of joyous majesty.
'Oh, I'll give ten bucks to anyone who can spot a mistake in this chapter, oh, no one has spotted one. That's because it's immaculate.'
You're very special Don.
The silver crest of the gleaming point of the tool wishes you freedom from a retched existence.